Date: 02/02/25 09:35 am Title: Chapter 1
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 02/20/18 08:37 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG! This was over the top of fantastic! I have always loved stories where there is m-preg and this is the first time I read one with Bill and Tom b29; Thank you for this!
Date: 02/11/18 02:41 am Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on being featured!!!
Date: 06/07/16 04:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Just read it straight away, it's so nice, erotic but also really sad in the last lines at the same time! It makes me want Tom to fulfil his 'sad' fantasy with the nice black-haired boy, there's a strange but sweet bond between them... I am totally in the 'can we have a little sequel?' team! ! Even because this one-shot made me want to know more about them both! It would be sooo nice! Have a good night ;)
Date: 02/07/16 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Not sure how I missed this new story from you when it came out, but here I am now. :)
What an unusual fascinating story! Tom seems to be a very lonely man wishing for a family. It was fascinating to read not so much about what he did with Bill, but about what he thought in the process. Now I have a lot of questions that are clearly outside this story. Why is Tom alone? Why doesn't he try to find someone and date? How did Bill become a prostitute? Will they ever see each other again? It would have been great to read a long story based on this short story. *hint* :)
But in any event, this is a great story. It was very interesting to read and I wish there were more.
Date: 01/12/16 07:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG this was cute, and sexy, and sad... I want Tom's full fantasy to come true. You should totally write a sequel or something where we find out about Bill's story and Tom finds him again and they fall in love omg idk lol but that'd be really cool a86;a039;a86;a039;
Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much! You know, when I wrote this I had no idea it would be this well received- in fact, I didn't have high expectations for it at all, but I'm so glad you guys seemed to enjoy reading it as much as I loved writing it. It's different for me, but still I'd be happy to provide a sequel! I have a few plans rolling around in my head since so many people have requested that this be continued- but until then I just want to thank you SO MUCH for taking time to read this. I really appreciate it! <3
Date: 01/05/16 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was really good! It was cute, sexy, sweet and a good read! I love mpreg! You really should expand this one shot into a full ficcie. I'd love to see Tom fall for Bill, save him from escorting and whatever troubles in his life, and make a life and family with Tom.
Author's Response: Omg thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed! mpreg is probably my favorite genre ever, so I'm happy that so many people have liked this piece. And I'm not about to make any promises for more chapters or a sequel, (time restraints) but you guys are doing a tremendous job in swaying me. I might have to make time, we'll see. ;) Thank you so much for reading! <3
Date: 01/05/16 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful story! And kinda sad ultimately. I wish Tom could have the life that he wants. :(
Author's Response: Sigh. Me too- something tells me he'd be a good caregiver. :) But thank you so much for giving this a read! I love it. <3 rn
Date: 01/04/16 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Strange but it was so sweet! I thought Tom was gonna be a weirdo lol
Author's Response: lol that's what I was going for! Admittedly he is kind of strange anyway though, right? lol but thank you so much for reading- I really appreciate it! :D
Date: 01/04/16 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
Absolutely loved it and I'm hoping you'll continue with it 😀
Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much! I'm not going to make any promises over a sequel due to time restraints, but you guys are doing a good job in swaying me. I may have to make time. ;)
Date: 01/04/16 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, so I read this like...whenever you put it up (I forgot lol) and I kept forgetting to comment, because I sleep after reading because I'm a fat kid. But yeah, I loved it lol. I love your writing and your brain. It's pretty sexy lol. I can't wait to read more of your lovely stories.
Author's Response: Nah babe- you're a star. Thank you so much for reading / reviewing. I appreciate you. *smooches* lol and hopefully I'll have more stories available to read soon- I really was nervous to start up again because It didn't think anyone would remember me. XD
Date: 01/04/16 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Not an mpreg lover here- but I had a feeling your writing would be worth it. Yep, you are awesome. Keep it up! :)
Author's Response: Wow- thanks for giving this read a try, then! I really appreciate it! And thank you so much for the kind words- *you're awesome*. :D
Date: 01/03/16 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ok, so I just read a review response you gave and YAAAS!!! We, the people, want more!!!!
Author's Response: There are a few of you that are doing a good job swaying me... I may have to reconsider leaving this as a one-shot, but we'll have to see. If the demand is there, I'm more than happy to oblige. ;}
Date: 01/03/16 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
Honestly, reading this pushed my limits. Not that it was in any way bad. Heck no, I enjoyed it!! But I still had to pause several times to get my blushing under control. I really hope that later on in this universe they get together as a couple.
Author's Response: LOL I love that! I honestly would have probably been the same way, if I hadn't been the one to write it. But I'm so glad that even so, you enjoyed it- I really had no idea if a story like this would do well or not and- it has! I'm so ecstatic! Thank you so much for taking the time to read! <3
Date: 01/03/16 07:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
As weird as it might sound, I really liked the small detail where you mentioned Bill's breasts. People who write mpreg seems to always forget the detail about them feeding their baby, you know? So even if it's just one line it made me like the story more because finally someone cared to give it a little thought!
Your writing is, as I've stated before, amazing. I don't really like smut (okay I don't like it at all, I always skip it) but I like the whole idea of the weird fetish and the last lines were heartbreaking.
I know happy endings are not to be expected in stories, but in my mind they're gonna meet again and fall in love and be happy together because it'll make my heart hurt a bit less.
Author's Response: Thank you! I think the most interesting thing about mpreg (at least for me) is trying to figure out all of the most plausible details for how male pregnancy could actually work. (Admittedly, I may or may not have done waaaaay too much theoretical research on the topic a while back.) And I feel like we definitely shouldn't neglect the titties, feel me? XD
Date: 01/03/16 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh God, I love mpreg stories, I enjoyed reading this a lot :)
Author's Response: Yaaas, mpreg is my favorite category to read *and* write- I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this! Thank you so much for taking the time! <3
Date: 01/03/16 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Jfjsksskkf like we say in French "putain" seriously I loved it so much! Are you gonna write a sequel???
xoxo
Author's Response: LOL yaaas thank you so much! If I'm honest, I did write this story to be mostly seamless just in case I wanted to write further chapters... but in the end chose to leave it as a one-shot. I dunno, if people want more, I'd be more than happy to write some! <3
Date: 01/03/16 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it d84;d84;d84;
Author's Response: Thank you so much! <3