Date: 09/09/19 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 7; “I’m sorry I couldn’t protect you.”
Oh no!!! Tom, where is you???? HELP!!
Date: 09/09/19 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 3; “Tomi. . .”
I am craying....
Date: 09/09/19 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1; "We're identical, you know."
A seguir leyendo....
Date: 09/07/19 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 9; "Help...anyone..."
So glad to find something new to read!
I didn't know this was "old", it popped up in the Recent Stories and decided to check it out and let me say: I'm very curious!
I've read it from start to finish and I can't wait to read more! Keep it up :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 09/04/19 09:53 am Title: Chapter 7; “I’m sorry I couldn’t protect you.”
Great chapter :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much <3
Date: 09/04/19 05:27 am Title: Chapter 7; “I’m sorry I couldn’t protect you.”
Yay your back!!😭 I can't wait for more updates!! I've been following this story since you first put it up. Really hope you continue this one! 🙌
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! Reading these reviews inspired me to continue with this story, so yes I am back! b29;
Date: 01/08/16 06:32 pm Title: Chapter 6; “He made a perfect aim.”
A beautifully written chapter :) I'm glad Bill has Tom around. But yeah, the culprit is scaring me,and I guess Tom and Bill have all the reason to be afraid as long as the culprit is still around, somewhere. I'm very curious about the culprits reasons for doing this, and sadly enough I think it will be hard for Tom to protect his brother from that guy :(
Author's Response: aaaah, I want to get back to writing this story because I want to finish it~
Date: 01/08/16 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 6; “He made a perfect aim.”
I love the questions at the end along with this chapter! Great job again! i can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response: I've been on a little hiatus, but, I want to finish this story because I am really inspired by it.
Date: 01/08/16 09:25 am Title: Chapter 2; “You can’t fix it this time, David.”
I like the idea for the story (it peels my interest, now I really wanna know what they fought about). And don't be ashamed of your previous stories no one is born as the perfect writer. We all have to write, relearn, edit and write again. In time when we are lucky we see progress like you did.
Date: 01/08/16 09:19 am Title: Chapter 1; "We're identical, you know."
I am definately intrigued and want to know what happens next. Good job!
Date: 01/07/16 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 5; “It’s me, for fuck's sake!”
I already thought that he might've looked like Tom, but at least for now Bill realizes that it wasn't Tom who did those horrible things to him. Great chapter :)
Date: 01/07/16 01:35 pm Title: Chapter 5; “It’s me, for fuck's sake!”
Like i said GREAT JOB! i can't wait for more!
Date: 01/07/16 11:00 am Title: Chapter 5; “It’s me, for fuck's sake!”
Poor kids :( I can't wait to read more!!!
Date: 01/07/16 10:29 am Title: Chapter 5; “It’s me, for fuck's sake!”
So sweet that Bill and Tom are ok finally. :) the person who atacked Bill is like Tom? A crazy fan? Creepy someone? 😡 Everything is fine :) i like It so much! 👍🏻
Author's Response: The culprit had a similar face to Tom. Which would explain why Bill acted out on Tom, even though he was in a panicked state of mind he didn't see Tom as his twin brother, but the culprit. So when Bill said "he looked like you" it means exactly what he said. Hope this chapter didn't confuse you or was confusing. :-)
Date: 01/06/16 02:48 pm Title: Chapter 4; “Don’t come any closer!”
can't wait for the next one! realy enjoying this :3
Date: 01/06/16 02:41 pm Title: Chapter 3; “Tomi. . .”
Loving this!! o.o
Date: 01/05/16 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 4; “Don’t come any closer!”
😱😱😱 Bill got stabbed OMG !!!! Why don't you wanna see Tom Bibi ??? Wow I love this story already please don't keep is waiting a long time I wanna know what happens next
Date: 01/05/16 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 4; “Don’t come any closer!”
Tom, don't take it too personal, Bill probably has a trauma because of what happened, and because the fight you two had, it may have freaked him out, or he saw the attacker in you, who knows. Great chapter :)
Date: 01/05/16 12:26 pm Title: Chapter 3; “Tomi. . .”
Already so excited what will happen in the next chapter. Your story captures me more and more, I'm really curious what caused the fight. I hope you find time and inspiration to continue soon 😉
Date: 01/05/16 03:40 am Title: Chapter 3; “Tomi. . .”
OMG, it's almost 3 am in my could try and just started to read your story and I must say that it's exactly what I was looking for!! I'm so excited to see what's going in with Bill and thank you!! I love writers who make me feel every single emotion ! Keep on going, please !!