Poor Bill... :(
But despite all this I´m quite happy with this chapter. I think that you do know why and I thank you for this turn out! I can´t wait for more" :)

Author's Response:

I am glad you like this chapter despite of Andi being an asshole. I do know why you love this chapter. I will try to post soon.

Now I'm very excited for the next chapter already :) And like you probably know, I love the way you write :)

Author's Response:

I am glad you like it. And I am very aware that you like my writing style but reviews are always appreciated.

Okay, äh ...

I like it that Tom and Bill don't come together too fast. It's good that bill dates andy at the moment. I just hope they wont have sex, because it would kind of kill the mood, if he would have all his first times with andy. sure he had his first kiss with him, thats okay, but more ... please dont. and sure I hope that bill will come together with tom soon.

What I totally dislike is, that the last two chapters are suddenly toms perspective and they already happened in bills perspective. I also dont like a story that switches in the perspectives - even repeats chapters in different perspectives, because there is no room for imagination and thrilling - because the reader knows, what both characters are feeling and thinking.

I would like this story much more, if there would be just bills perspective, and no repeating scenes :(

I would love to have muuuuch more tom in the story, but not his perspective, but him as a interesting character in the story, that bill falls in love with :O

But: It's your story. I wont continue with reading this story now - but I will take a look when you have more chapters or even finished the story, to see, if I like to read more of it :)

I hope you understand my comment, because my english isn't very good :(
And please dont be mad at me because of my critic :(

Author's Response:

I am glad you like that Bill and Tom don't come togetehr too fast. I thought Andi would be a good filler at the moment. We will have to see what happens. I am sorry that you disliked the last two chapters. Many people found the last two chapters very sweet and enlightening. I had a ball writing them and I am sorry that you didn't like them. There will probably be more chapters like this in the future. Tom will continue to make his appearances as a character in Bill's life but right now his lack of frequency is important. He is feeling jealous so he doesn't want to be around Bill and Andi. I am sorry that you are leaving the story now and hope you will return in the future. Your english is better than some people who have been speaking and writing it their whole lives. I am not mad and I am grateful for opinions even if they are not favorable.

Still can´t wait to see how this is going to turn out...

Author's Response:

I am glad you like this story and are waiting eagerly for the rest.

I was fast with sending this back to you, was I? I can't promise that I will always be this fast, but in 24 hours must work, at least when I have a normal week schedule :) And I must say that I like Tom more after reading this :) I mean, come on, he's also crushing on Bill, he deserves a reward! :D Okay, maybe not yet, but when he finally tells Bill about his feelings (or just show him) then he'll deserves a reward xD (it also counts for Bill of course, when he's going to be the first to say or do something) :) I just realized how hard it must be to write this part of the story in Tom's perspective, I mean, you always have to look to he other chapters to make this one work out right, so thumbs up, I'm sure I wouldn't have the patient to do it in my stories :) And I can't say it too often, you're doing a great job with this story :)

Author's Response:

Yes, you were. Within 24 hours works. I sometimes pump out chapters like nothing else other times it takes me days if not weeks so there is no real rush. I just like publishing quickly and have very little self control except when I have a beta. I am glad you like Tom more after this chapter. He is seriously crushing on Bill. It was difficult but I had a lot of fun challenging myself with this chapter. I am glad you like it so much.

Now, when I have read in reviews that Tom and Bill are going to be in the end together I felt a lot better while I was reading about Bill and Andi... I don't have anything against Andi, but... Bill just belongs to Tom!!! My twc heart has a little trouble accept anything else... :D
And I think that Sherry is an amazing woman!

Author's Response:

I am glad you feel better. Many people don't seem to have anything against Andi but can't accept him with Bill. I am glad you like Sherry.

I guess every caring person tries to do the talk, and yeah, I loved it, it must be so uncomfortable though :$ And Bill's dream was really heavy, poor Bill, what he all had to go through when he lived in LA :( It must be so hard to get over something like that :( And Andi? Ehm, I'm only glad that I didn't see him that much in this chapter, I don't want him making out with Bill, that's someone else's job :$ And that's all I'm going to say about Andi today, because I promised myself to be nice :) And I don't think Tom and Nathalie left Georg of the hook too easily, I mean the things Tom said to Nathalie in this chapter were just too cute *_* I would forgive him too :) And about Georg's wish? I guess it would be super hot, but only if Tom joined too :$ And now I hope Tom and Bill get some alonetime together soon, it doesn't matter in what way, I just love their interaction (and of course it's easier for them to grow closer when they are alone with eachother) great chapter :)

Author's Response:

I figured Sherry would notice how close Bill was to either Tom or Andi and decide to make an attempt to be a responible guardian. I feel for Bill he went through hell and back before getting free. I am glad that while you don't like Andi you are being nice. I am feeling a little fragile so nice thoughts are good. I wanted to show that Nathalie and Georg were solid and strong. You are a true Bill and Tom lover I can see from your comments. :) I like how they interact as well. It is easier to grow close alone. I will see what I can do in the next chapter. I am glad you like it.

I never thought put Andi y Bill. I thought about Tom y Bill. But is ok i like your history so much and Its cute and interesting. You keep on it I like It how is. a86;a039;a86;a039;🙌🏻🙌🏻👏🏻👍🏻

Author's Response:

I planned on putting Andi and Bill together at some point in this story but I intended it to a be a fling. Andi doesn't listen and shows up earlier than intended. I am glad you like my story and think it's interesting and cute. I was worried about how people would react to Andi. I wanted it to be a good relationship even though it's not Tom. I will update again soon.

Awwwwww Bill and Andi are so cute together!! I totally want him to end up with Tom though lol. Georg is a wierdoooo I can't wait to see how Bill will act next time he sees him and I totally want to see a jealous Tom >< cutteeeeenessssss overloaaaadddddddddd!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

They are very cute together. I had alot of fun writing this chapter. I want him to end up with Tom too but my characters very rarely take a straight path to get where I want them. Sometimes they never get there. Georg is a weirdo. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. I should have the next one up soon.

Oh I can't wait to see how all this transpires! Sounds like drama may be in the future.

Author's Response:

Drama is always in the future. See you soon.