I've never before read femmeslash, and I'm not really interested in it either, but as I read this through for validation (in case you didn't know, I'm one of the mods of the page so I read chapters through to validate or reject them) I saw that I really like your way of writing, and you describe things beautifully. So I will give it a chance. There's a first time for everything, right?

Great start, I look forward to see where you take this :)