Date: 08/03/23 03:56 am Title: Chapter 8
This was a really good story!
Date: 05/18/16 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 8
awh and they didn't divorce of course :') ...I really liked the story, it was so much fun to read!! *thumbs up
Date: 05/18/16 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 7
oh god viagra hahaha no, sorry I had to laugh because I remembered that time when Tom had that "viagra" problem in...Malaysia I think? anyway, it's funny hahahaha I liked the chapter for sure :')
Date: 05/18/16 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 5
omg hahahahaha they're such a cute and funny couple, I love them :'))) ...nice chapter!!!
Date: 05/18/16 12:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
no way o_o ..
now, I can smell the divorce, please no ;-; *keeps reading*
Date: 05/18/16 12:46 am Title: Chapter 3
are you serious???? HAHAHAHHAGSGSHA I love this fanfic already :'D
Date: 05/18/16 12:31 am Title: Chapter 2
omg stoooopp hhahahahahahah I laughed way too hard I can't hhahahaha ok...*breathes* I didn't know this was going to be a funny chapter :') ...those flashbacks and the last part! haha good chapter, I really liked it!!
Date: 05/18/16 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
awh this story looks interesting . I have to say that while I was reading I thought I read the story already but I didn't...:o
nice chapter!! n_n
Date: 04/13/16 09:45 am Title: Chapter 8
Finally happy end!!! Thank you so much for writing it. I really really loved the story!! :)
Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm really happy that you liked it! :)
Date: 04/07/16 11:26 am Title: Chapter 8
Good that Tom stood out for Bill, Bills mother was so rude.
Perfect or not, they love each other, and that's the most important! I was worried that they will decide for divorce after all,since their second honey moon wasn't just peaches and cream only, so I'm relieved they didn't.
Lovely story, I really enjoy it! Thank you for writting it, there's no many good stories recently!
Are you planning to finish The Last of its Kind?
Author's Response: I'm really happy that you liked this story! :) I really appreciate it! rnAnd yup, I'm planning on finishing it but it needs to be rewritten a bit, so that's why it's taking me so long :)
Date: 04/07/16 11:12 am Title: Chapter 6
"dangerous and trained to kill birds aka pigeons that decided to chase them and caused Bill to squeal and run away like an idiot every time he got near them." O feel him so much with this, I have such phobia, don't know how to call it but I'm scared to death of birds. Every time I see a bird close to me I have a panic attack.
Their marriage is still bad but at least they are trying and realising what's wrong, it's a good start.
Date: 04/07/16 11:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Marriage proposal at anthill, what a fail, hahaha.
Date: 04/07/16 10:53 am Title: Chapter 4
"Bill paled, reddened and almost got purple with anger, his fist balled tightly. " - this time he has every right to be angry, poor little thing! And this "next time" with bringing birth ceritificate of another of Tom's honeys didn't help much.
So Bill met some guy? Let's hope he won't forget he's married with children.
Date: 04/07/16 10:46 am Title: Chapter 3
Bill really needs to let go! To destroy their intimate moment over some pubic hair?
Date: 04/07/16 10:42 am Title: Chapter 2
Bill's personality is really hard, no wonder Tom have some gray hair and his forehead wrinkled already, haha.
wedding horror movie - haha, poor Tom, at least he was trying! I have a feeling that I have seen something similar before, did you post this story in the past and then delate it maybe? Or maybe I'm mistaking something. Anyway, very good reading as for now!
Author's Response: Nope, I didn't respost it :) This was posted looong time ago on other (czech) webpage and now I translated it, added some things and stuff, did a little bit of rewriting and posted it here :) But if you're talking about the horror movie thing, I bet it was in some movie or something :)
Date: 04/07/16 10:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Scifi slice of life - very unique kind of story! I already like it very much!
Bill is such an ass to Tom. Hopfully his attitude will change with time. Though young Tom was very rude too.
Author's Response: Yeah he is, right? XD
Author's Response: Yeah he is, right? XD
Date: 04/05/16 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 8
Awh, I totally enjoyed this story, a lot :)
Author's Response: Happy to read that you enjoyed it!
Date: 03/23/16 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awh, such a wonderful chapter :) I really loved this chapter :)
Date: 03/23/16 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love the whole story, it's so special and unusual, I really really waiting for the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Aww, thank you! :)