Date: 09/29/24 11:35 pm Title: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 05/01/23 01:00 pm Title: Have Yourself a Merry Little Christmas
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 09/28/16 12:40 am Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
That "This would be enough. For now" tells me about a sequel...
Maybe.
Lol, I'm always asking the authors for sequels. One day my wishes will come true!!
No, but I really liked your story. It's the first time I read you and it was fantastic!
Now I'm leaving so I can stalk your acount in search of more Bill/Tom love
Author's Response: Haha, well I've been thinking about a sequel and I might write one if I get a good idea, but I'm not making any promises :D And I totally feel you, I'm always wishing for sequels too! :D I'm so glad you liked it! It really means a lot to me to get new readers! You're gonna find some more Bill/Tom love on my account I can promise you that! :D Make sure you check out my story named A route to happiness, I think so far it's my best work :D Summer Romance is recently finished and there's gonna be a sequel for that coming soon so make sure you check it out too! :D I hope you'll enjoy my other stories too!! :D Your review was awesome, thank you!
Date: 12/15/15 08:14 pm Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
I have to admit that I was very distracted by your writing, not in a good way. It's obvious English isn't your first language. There's a lot of grammar that's off, and lots of strange word choices, and some of your sentences are repetitive.
Example: "A permanent smile was always tattooed on his face and each time it made Bill's heart skip a beat." (from Ch.1) .....permanent, always, tattoo, and each time all basically mean the same thing in this sentence. Repetitive.
Moving on... The plot and flow of the story is good, and I did read on because I wanted to know what happens. I get the feeling that in your native language you're probably a very good writer. I think this story needs a good editing from start to finish, but there's a lot of potential here. I think with a beta that isn't afraid to HEAVILY alter your work, you'll write really amazing twincest fics. Keep writing. I know you'll get better. This was a great start. :)
Author's Response: Oh yes, I'm glad you pointed it out, since it's always nice to get some pointers. And yes English is not my first language, but I'd like to think I'm getting a lot better at it. :D I'm glad you still decided to read this and leave a review! Thank you! :D
Date: 12/13/15 11:25 pm Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
are you gonna have a sequel
Author's Response: I gave it some thought and even started to plan a little but I still came to the conclusion that I won't be writing a sequel, at least not now. However I may revisit the thought next year if I come up with something great, though I won't be making any promises :D Though i'm happy you liked this enough to wanna read more, it makes me really happy! :D
Date: 12/13/15 09:37 pm Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
i....i..... I LOVED THIS OMG YOU DID A GREAT JOB!
Author's Response: Yay! I'm super happy you loved this! Thank you! :D
Date: 12/13/15 06:13 pm Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
very happy with the ending :D thank you for writing this, it was amazing!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you think so! Thank you! :D
Date: 12/13/15 05:45 pm Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
Actually, the first thing they did in the new year was having sex xD I'm happy with this ending, like the ending said, this would be enough. For now :) and I'm sure Tom will fall for Bill in the future(who wouldn't?) Even though we will not read about it. I loved this short story a lot :)
Author's Response: Yeah, kinda good way to start a new year, isn't it? :DD Yay! I'm glad you're happy with it! :D Yes, they will most certainly fall for each other in the future even if I didn't write another story for this. I'm so glad you loved it! Thank you so much!
Date: 12/13/15 12:32 pm Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
Like you said, it's happy-ish. My twincesty soul would have rejoiced at a Disney love story but I think the realistic path you're taking is good. Maybe there will be love in the air next Sunday (hint hint)
Author's Response: Yeah, I kinda had to go with a more realistic ending. Anyhow, I can say with certainty that there will not be another chapter on next Sunday. This story is finished. I may, however, let the idea of a sequel stew a bit in my head, but I can't make any promises! :D
Date: 12/13/15 09:42 am Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
I agree with the sequel (or just an epilog) Maybe a few months/years later, when Tom will realize that he really loves Bill... :)
Anyway, it is a great story! Thank you! :)
Author's Response: Well that wouldn't be a bad idea. I'll give it some thought and decide it then, but I won't make any promises! :D Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!! :DD
Date: 12/13/15 06:43 am Title: What Are You Doing New Year’s Eve
this was a really good story!!
u should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: Awww thank you! I doubt I'll make a sequel, there's not much to go with, but I'm glad you like this so much! :D
Date: 12/08/15 07:40 pm Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
Hahahahahahah Tom you're a dumbass buff said
Author's Response: Perhaps a bit yes :D thanks for reviewing!! :D
Date: 12/08/15 12:37 pm Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 12/08/15 05:48 am Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
Lol at the end note. Hot first time sex left him in tears, why should i want that?
Author's Response: Hehe. Well because it's hot first time dex XDD
Date: 12/07/15 03:30 pm Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
So sad at the end... :( But Tom is still a great guy! I can´t wait for more!
Author's Response: It kinda is, isn't it? Yes he is. And you'll have to wait 'till Sunday for the final chapter ;)
Date: 12/07/15 02:15 am Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
Not as easy as Bill thought it would be. I do love Tom's character & his reaction afterward.
Author's Response: Yes Bill was kinda stupid for thinking that it would be easy, but I guess we can all be a bit stupid when it comes to the people we like :P I'm glad you do! I didn't wanna make him out to be a bad guy so I'm happy that the good guy vibe works! Thanksies!
Date: 12/06/15 07:28 pm Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
very hot smut here, yes ^^ Loved it! I felt sorry for Bill, and a little bit for Tom as well ;) He isn't an ass, he felt bad for Bill, and I'm glad. I just hope that it'll work out, maybe Tom will realize that he feels the same and we get more smut? ;D or something! can't wait for next sunday!
Author's Response: Yay I'm so happy you do!! Tom is a nice guy, he doesn't wanna hurt Bill but yeah. We'll see what happnes next Sunday ;) Can't really say anything else at the moment. :P
Date: 12/06/15 05:29 pm Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
Yaay Tom gave in :) but yeah who's actually able to resist Bill? XD but it's sad that Tom can't answer Bill's feelings :( but it shows that Tom's actually a nice guy, by seeing how guilty he felt, and about how much he wished that he could answer those feelings, but maybe someday he can, we'll see :) Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Of course Tom gave in! It's like you said, no one can resist Bill ;) qnd yes Tom really is a nice guy anf well we'll see what happens in the final chapter next Sunday ;) thanks! I'm tlad you enjoyed it!! :D
Date: 12/06/15 05:10 pm Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
Love it d84;d84;d84;
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you do!! :D
Date: 12/06/15 02:32 pm Title: All I Want for Christmas Is You
I'm so confused right now. That was undoubtedly extremely hot but I'm crying so hard. I don't know what to do with myself!!!!
Author's Response: I'm sorry for making you confused. Aww. Don't cry! Next Sunday you'll find out how this will end! Hang in there!