Date: 12/02/15 03:02 am Title: Chapter 8
Another amazing chapter. The pancake making scene was so funny, and ended up so passionate. Understandable that Bill would turn to the one person he can trust absolutely to help erase the bad memories, and Tom's love and protectiveness of his brother has turned into a something more than brotherly love. I just hope it's not too soon, or that when Bill starts to recover from his trauma one or both won't end up getting hurt.
Author's Response: Yes it is indeed a tricky situation, emotional and confusing. Thats why there is more drama to come in the next chapter and I can even promise some sexy hexy stuff. I am glad you liked the pancake scene and that it wasn't to much. Fluffy cute things are not exactly my forte😂 rnBut to answer your concerns: in whose arms could you be safer than your soulmates?
Date: 12/01/15 05:41 pm Title: Chapter 8
It's so cute, I love it :)
Author's Response: Thanks dear, I thought we all needed a little break from the angst with some fluffy cuteness.
Date: 11/30/15 01:36 am Title: Chapter 7
Good stuff!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 11/29/15 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Bill's home again :) And it was so cute when Tom got jealous when he saw Bill and Gustav hugging xD And yaay to their kiss! I totally loved this chapter :)
Author's Response: Hahaha yes I admit it I am a sucker for overprotective and jealous Tom. Just cant help myself. Ohhh so nice that you liked it, thank you so much dear!
Date: 11/29/15 04:46 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, that kiss was amazing and that Billīs last question was...I donīt even have the right words for that!!!
Author's Response: Good morning, I am happy you liked this chapter as well. I am glad that I changed the genre, feels like natural progression for them. Makes me happy that you think I did well on the kiss, because writing kisses is not easy they are so intimate. Thanks for such a kind review
Date: 11/29/15 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh my... I'm in love with Tom! Your writings are so realistic and all. Tom is so cute when he protects Bill, and their kiss was beautiful. And I liked this chapter even more because the G's. :) That was really one of my favorite chapters in this fic. Keep going! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your lovely review! I am so happy you liked it! And Tom is as always just perfect I love him to, fictional and real Tom.
Date: 11/29/15 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 7
I like the way you write, it feels like I'm there watching all of this.
And yay that Bill is okay and reciprocating the kiss :)
Author's Response: Oh thank you how sweet! rnYes I was thinking long and hard about his reaction but couldnt imagine it any other way because Tom is the person he trusts and loves more than anyone else.
Date: 11/28/15 05:50 am Title: Chapter 1
This is my favourite story ever! Please continue writing, no matter if TWC or not. Protective Tom and weak Bill is heaven! So glad you write about it. Besides you are sooo talented! Congrats to this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. You really made me smile! And I totally agree protective Tom is just sooooo sexy. Thats why I tend to fall in love with my own characters. Hahaha😂 and ofc I continue this story until its finished I do not like unfinished stories
Date: 11/27/15 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 6
Awh, Bill is probably going to keep having those nightmares for a while :( and those words which Bill spoke: “Please don’t stop touching me. When you touch me it feels like you are erasing him from my body. Feeling your body besides me is like all the broken pieces of my soul finally stick together again. Just…if you want to do anything then touch me more not less.” They were so beautiful. And I would say, add twc to your genre :) Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks dear for that sweet review. I am so happy you liked that part bc I was in doubt if it was a bit to cheesy but in the end it felt exactly right! Yeah I think its gonna be twc, it just feels like it is the natural progression for this story. Plus I could add naughty scenes if I wanted to hahahaha. Have a nice weekend!
Date: 11/27/15 03:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
I am completely happy either way, but I can see twc being used as a way for Bill to forget guy that hurt him, but it could add angst because Bill could want it but tom is hesitant to cross that border
Author's Response: I kind of thought along those lines as well. I have to sleep over it but thank you for your imput. And as always thank you that you take time to read my story!
Date: 11/27/15 01:37 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm certainly all for twc, of course! This is the perfect beginning of a beautiful and romantic relationship. And I think that Tom is the only one who can help Bill now and who Bill let to be close to him. Please, let them be closer and closer!
Author's Response: I am inclained of agreeing with you. Strangely I started it without twc in mind but it is threre between the lines anyways. Thats why I thought I ask you all and see what you guys think. Thanks for letting me know.
Date: 11/27/15 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 6
Lol I can just imagine him in bitchy mood.
Author's Response: Omg me to. Honestly I do think bitchy Bill surfaces now and them even irl
Date: 11/26/15 01:13 am Title: Chapter 5
Is so lovely Tom whit his brother:)
Author's Response: They are adorable right? I wanna eat them up... Haha and yes as usual I am way to invested in my own characters. Thanks for reviewing
Date: 11/25/15 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oh God, I actually hoped that it was just an attempt to rape, but he actually did it :( Poor, poor Bill, I hope that he gets over it someday, which will be hard, especially the upcoming time will be hard. I'm so glad he has Tom :) Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you and yes its so horrific no one shoukd go trough this. It would probably be easier if it was just attempt but I needed poor Bill to suffer for my storyline.
Date: 11/25/15 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
That was a very nice chapter! It doesn't have to be drama all the time, I like a lot of this kind of chapters, too. :) And as I have said, I love your super quick updates! It's just so cool, and I have to say thank you for it.
Oh you're ill? I'm sorry to hear that, hope you'll get better soon. :)
Author's Response: Oh thats just so sweet and I have to say thank you because you take the time reading my story and even reviewing. That really means a lot to me! Yes you are right sometimes we need a break from all the drama and have just normal chapter . To be honest I wasnt to kean on coming up with more horrible details of Bills ordeal. I am on my way to getting better- first day at work but I hope that I still can keep the updates coming
Date: 11/24/15 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
I really can't imagine how that must feel. And I think this reaction is quite realistic.
Author's Response: Thank you I really hoped that I portrayed the feelings realisticly however I have never endurred something like that (thank God) so thats why I just needed to rely on my imagination.
Date: 11/24/15 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bill, I knew something like this must've happened to him :( And Tom, please don't blame yourself, it's just impossible to always be at the same place where Bill is, but good, poor Tom too, also because he just heard what happened to his brother, and because feeling guilty must be a horrible feeling, even though he doesn't have any reason to. Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Yes you are absolutely right. Of course it isnt his fault but being a big brother for all his life made him very protective so for him its easy to assume that he could have prevented it all from happening. He wants to be his baby brothers superhero and he failed in his own eyes. rnThanks for reviewing I am happy you liked this ( I admit it kind of sad) chapter!
Date: 11/24/15 04:03 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh that was a sad chapter! But it was good to know what happened to Bill even though it's so horrible thing. I feel so sad for Tom, he should not think that everything is his fault. And I feel sad for Bill, too. I can only wish for happy end.
How many chapters you're planned to write? Or are you not planned it yet? You're updates are super quick, and it's awesome! :)
Author's Response: Hiya Jenney, yeah I agree with you it was really a sad chapter- even writing it was kind of sad because I just dont like imagening Bill hurt even though I came up with this story. rnI have to say I dont have a exact plan on how many chapters because this story happend spontaneously. However I am sure there will be not less than ten. Haha yes my updates are quick this week because I am lying in bed with the stomach flue and there is not much else I can do. Thanks for reviewing and have a nice eveningd84;a039;
Date: 11/24/15 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh god, I don't know if I could feel more sorry for Bill or for Tom... :( They both will need a long time to recover and heal. Fortunately they can do that together!
Author's Response: Yes its definately not easy on either of them. But they have each other to hold on to. Thanks for leaving a review dear <3
Date: 11/24/15 01:21 am Title: Chapter 3
Grabs a Kleenex.
The shower scene, so beautiful...you could feel the love and caring from Tom.
Author's Response: Thank you so much dear. I am glad that you liked it. I rewrote this scene twice because its just so important