Date: 06/21/16 12:25 pm Title: A twenty dollar bill for a murder
OH MY GOD THIS CHAPTER PISSED ME THE FUCK OFF. THAT STUPID PSYCHOPATH!!!! (Although super thrilling, seriously my heart raised 3273 times) I CAN'T BELIEVE HE ACTUALLY DID THAT TO SHANE. I really hope he's lying but it feels like it could actually be true, after all, he's crazy.
And Bill? BILL. I'm so pissed at him for not just throwing away the drugs. I knew he'd take them. Also, no matter how pissed I am, I also feel so fucking sorry for him. He's so lonely even though he has Tom and Nicholas who really love and support him. Hes's all alone in this and I wish someone could help him. But he doesn't want any help so he keeps damaging himself. Ugh you're breaking my heart Emilia. Keep it coming x
Date: 06/13/16 05:04 am Title: You could have been someone, but you let them into your head
You're the master of sex scenes haaah. I don't think it's wrong that Bill "forgot" about Shane for a few moments. He can't just cry his eyes out all the time, although I would totally do the same :( sigh.
I bet Philip will come back and make everything worse. Already scared tbfh.
Keep going :)
Author's Response:
Brb putting "Master of Sex scenes" on my resumé. :) He will, trust me.
Date: 06/12/16 08:26 pm Title: You could have been someone, but you let them into your head
Oh well Bill was made satisfaced a moment ;) so hot i loved it ! 👍🏻👏🏻 i really like drama angst fics where Bill suffer hahaha 🙈 So hope that his suffer become bigger and then he ll be happy hahaha ;). Great fic i missed a lot
Author's Response:
He got really satisfied huh? ;) Same here, I can't seem to write happy fics... Awww thanks! :D
Date: 06/12/16 03:15 pm Title: You could have been someone, but you let them into your head
Okay talk about things getting hot in here. I'm not gonna lie, I love it when Bill and Nicholas screw each other which means I absolutely loved this chapter.... :)
Although I haven't forgotten what happened to Shane. I literally grieve over a fictional character and that last part in this chapter kind of killed me. No one will ever call Bill babe the way he called him and that honestly breaks my heart.
Now.. where I'd like this fic go hmm.. I feel like Philip should come into the picture soon again? You obviously know I hate him but if he does, Nicholas will get all over protective over Bill and I think that's CUUUTE (sorrynotsorry). But even without our opinion I think you've done a great story by your own. I'll love it no matter where it goes and I'm sure others will too x
Author's Response:
You asked for it and you got it! Ughhhh believe me I still miss him.... He was the absolute cupcake :( You'll see what happens next!
Date: 06/01/16 01:16 am Title: The odds were always against us
To think "It should have been me. Not him" is the most sad thing :( poor Bill bad news don't leave him
Date: 05/31/16 06:07 pm Title: The odds were always against us
First off, thank you sO MUCH for posting this for me tonight. You know how much I appreciate it.
Second off, wow. The ending really got to me. The thing with the magnet ugh. I can totally imagine the pain because even though it was just a magnet, it still was important. He was supposed to come back home to LA, meet Shane and give that to him as a gift. But that's never gonna happen. It hurts so much. I loved Shane before, but I actually never thought he'd leave such an emptiness and sadness. Really really love how you write. Keep being amazing xx
Date: 05/23/16 04:22 pm Title: Denying you're gone now, and I am down here all alone
I fucking hate you, this is the most heartbreaking shit I've ever read. I usually avoid fics with character death but I love yours way too much to stop reading it. Now I have to deal with Bill's pain which is so real and also my own pain. Brb, crying x
Date: 05/23/16 01:12 pm Title: Denying you're gone now, and I am down here all alone
First of all, the god damn name of this chapter............ Only that made me sad right away and now, well now I'm sOBBING THANKS TO THIS HORRIBLY SAD CHAPTER.
I loved Shane so much. He was so kind, lovely and loving (despite his job and background etc). He was the person that truly ever cared about Bill and loved him unconditionally for who he was and even though Bill rejected him, he still kept supporting and loving him, being by his side. This is just so heartbreaking and I could literally feel Bill's pain. Seriously, my chest ached. How do you do this.
Also I'm really glad Tom punched Nicholas because of what he said but at the same time, I understand Nicholas too. So curious to see what's gonna happen next and how Bill is going to deal with all of this. The horrible death of his best friend but also letting his fans down and canceling the tour/considering doing it. Ily, you're the best x
Date: 05/19/16 01:52 pm Title: Til' my heart stops
OH MY GOD HOW COULD YOU JUST END IT THERE, I AM FURIOUS OH MY GOD YOU KILLED HIM DIDN'T YOU OR WHAT SKJHFDkh
I AM PANICKING AND I NEED A NEW CHAPTER.
P.S. The "scene" where Nicholas gave Bill a head was glorious.
Date: 05/19/16 04:53 am Title: Til' my heart stops
No. You can't do that... (but you will lol) ........................
Author's Response:
Not exactly known for writing about rainbows and butterflies, am I? .................hehe.
Date: 05/19/16 12:23 am Title: Til' my heart stops
Is Shane dead?! Just right now is very bad moment. So cold i am.
Author's Response:
My lips are sealed.... For now!
Date: 05/13/16 07:17 am Title: Phone sex on the freeway
Okay oH MY GOD? It's getting hot in here, for sure. Bill you dirty little.... ;-) I would seriously die if I was Nicholas lmao, but this is going to be so awkward the next day haha.
And Philip that fuck, he can honestly go to hell. I'm not even worried about him. It's just empty threats, but I get that it really terrifies Bill. Ugh poor baby. Can't wait for mooooooooooore.
Date: 05/02/16 04:01 pm Title: Forbidden love
Oh apareció Philip! Yeah! 🙈
Date: 05/01/16 03:56 pm Title: Forbidden love
OH MY GOD THE ENDING????? When is that jackass ever going to leave Bill alone? He's honestly a true psychopath. What if he's in the crowd at the concert?
I love Tom lmao "you have been sucking his lips!". And also the fact that Nicholas is so damn cheesy? Here I am thinking Bill is the biggest of them all HAHA. Can't wait for mooooore x
Date: 04/22/16 06:05 pm Title: I want to make love to you
Okay first of all, thanks for a great song. Added it to my playlist immediately.
Second of all, this was a cute and funny chapter. And LMAO Steffen that little snitch?!?! Totally cracked me up. The ending was so confusing, what does he want from Bill? I swear something's big happening soon, I can't wait bcs it actually needs to happen. Both you and I know it. I just hope this doesn't get Bill in trouble or get him hurt. It's tour and these kind of issues is the last thing he needs. xo /N
Date: 04/10/16 02:34 pm Title: Our love ain't water under the bridge
Oh my god what a cute chapter. Kinda choked on my juice when Nicholas said "What do you want to eat? Don't say dick". Somebody knows Bill too well lmao. Nice to see they can talk like normal people to each other at least.
Loved the ending too btw. Simple but super sweet. Really kind of Nicholas to just let Bill sleep in his room with literally no words needed. Something's telling me more things will happen and goD KNOWS I'M EXCITED.
Date: 04/06/16 09:29 am Title: February 27th
Hey, I've been following this story since the beginning and I've also read Covered In Gold. I really love both. I love the fact that they are realistic, funny and sad at the same time. These two stories are the best stories on this website! I'm always excited when you post a new chapter. I love your work :)
Author's Response:
HELLOOOOO! I wish you would've reviewed a long time ago so I could've told you how much this means to me earlier. I'm blown away by your kind words, thank you SO much. I am so grateful, you have no idea. And I'm also happy that you're here since the start. It makes me so so so happy. THANK YOU! <3
Date: 04/04/16 03:50 pm Title: February 27th
Oooh I really liked this chapter. I love how you always make the characters so real you know? I'm talking about small details, like e.g Bill saying he's been wearing the same sweater and that he hasn't washed his hair. I like those details.
But oh my god, he actually got a divorce???? This changes everything so much now. The tour has started and they're gonna be closer than ever, so wHAT IF. I'm pretty sure something's gonna happen. (I hope it does because I'm extremely positive).
Overall, cozy chapter but also funny haha. Love the irony and the sarcasm. Like how they got close seats and how Bill was like "“The ring you supposedly got from your dear, dear, father.”" Cracked me up lmao. But also, Steffen HAHA. I'm just imagining how this would be in real life. I truly believe you couldn't get any closer to reflecting it into a story. Can't wait for more :-*
Author's Response:
Babeeeee ilysb. You're the best and I'm so thankful to have you as my friend and reader. <3 And I'm also very very happy when you say that you think the story is real, that's what I'm always trying to portray and it makes me super happy to know that I've succeeded. And I LOVE writing sarcastic dialogue hahahha it's the best tbh. Let's wait and see what happens! :D
Date: 03/28/16 04:47 pm Title: I'm starting to hate California
Ohhhh my god. First of all, PHILIP THAT PSYCHOPATH. Honestly he's a maniac and he still thinks Bill is his property. Thank god that Bill didn't actually give in and let Philip do what he wanted.
Also. Despite how much empathy I feel for Nicholas bcs of the things he told Bill, I'm still fucking upset about the way he spoke to Bill. Does he actually think they're still together and Bill even owes him anything after what he's done to him? I'm glad Nicholas crying didn't affect Bill as much as I'd expect them to do.
One last question though, is Eric thE Eric as in our Norwegian troll or is it a random crew member? lmao. Great chapter bb, looking forward the tour xx
Date: 03/18/16 09:32 am Title: You've got to make a friend of pain cause' hurricanes makes flowers grow
Well, I really like Jacob tbh. And I love how everyone knew Shane is in love with Bill lol...
But what the fuck is happening at the end? Bill is so so fucking stupid, I don't even have words for him. Why would he go to Philip's house alone and don't tell anyone about it? Jeez, this boy obviously needs drama.
Can't wait to read more xx
Author's Response:
I like Jacob too! And yeah lmao I felt like that honestly would be the most realistic thing. Bill is so pre-occupied with himself. I'm sure he wouldn't notice when someone is in love with him if he's interested in someone completely different... :)