Date: 12/31/15 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 4- Gustav's Hobby
Great chapters :D
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I appreciate it :D
Date: 12/30/15 07:52 pm Title: Chapter 3- Georg's Confession
Haha, Tom, I´m on your side. I would like to read them, too!!! :D
Author's Response: Same, Tom is me! I would totally be curious enough to break into the closet, too.
Date: 12/30/15 07:41 pm Title: Chapter 3- Georg's Confession
Now there is no problem, no, but in the ones I rejected they were all put together without any space between them. Trust me, I wouldn't reject a story without a reason, I know how to do my job.
Either way, I see it's fixed now so I'm happy to have validated it this time.
Author's Response: Sorry, I really wasn't trying to sound rude! Oh, that makes more sense. I only realized that they were missing just after submitting it, so I'm glad I edited it. Thank you!
Date: 11/04/15 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 2- An Awkward Morning
Another amazing chapter :) It doesn't matter that it's short, to me it's pretty hard to write a long chapter especially when you want to end at a certain point :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Yeah, I had to edit it to make it even that long. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for reading!
Date: 11/04/15 08:54 am Title: Chapter 2- An Awkward Morning
Bwhahaha I'm entertained by this. But my question is how did Georg know that Tom had gotten into Bills closet? (I reread chapter one but I might have missed it....)
Date: 11/04/15 08:26 am Title: Chapter 2- An Awkward Morning
No way, dude!! Don't tell me Bill has a closet full of twincest fanfiction he wrote!! Actually, totally write that! I'm so freaking excited now!! AHHHH!!! Ans Georg knew Bill was writing it?? ....Oh god, please tell me that that's what's going on because then I see glorious angst and twincest in the future for this fic. *sigh* Yeah, I'll be reading the rest of this for sure. No need to do cliffhangers, this is a great start. :)
Author's Response: I'm sorry, it doesn't feel right to tell you what's going on yet! Trust me though, you won't be disappointed (I hope). I'm glad you're excited! And thanks man, I really appreciate it. Thanks for reading! :D
Date: 11/04/15 06:43 am Title: Chapter 2- An Awkward Morning
Bwhahaha I'm entertained by this. But my question is how did Georg know that Tom had gotten into Bills closet? (I reread chapter one but I might have missed it....)
Author's Response: Oh, sorry for causing so much confusion! It's actually not supposed to be clear yet, it's sort of like a surprise I guess? I'm glad you liked it though! Thanks for reading :D
Date: 11/03/15 07:58 pm Title: Chapter 1- Bill's Closet
The insults flying between the twins in this chapter sound very scripted but they're priceless. Love it. hahahaha! I love how you've created a mystery... I can't wait for more! Yes, I'm actually excited to read more of this fic. Keep going. :) Great start. :)
Author's Response: Yes, I did get a little carried away writing the banter section. I kept finding more things that I wanted to put in and it got a bit crowded. Thank you, I'm so glad that you enjoyed it and the next chapter will be up soon (I'm actually just about to post it). Thanks for reading!
Date: 11/03/15 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 1- Bill's Closet
Adding into the reviews as I didn't know there was a question. I like finding things out when the characters do :)
Author's Response: Sorry, I forgot to ask you! All right, thank you for the input! Though I did get another person telling me before, so I'll try my best to split up the pivotal moments between the two evenly. :)
Date: 11/03/15 04:04 am Title: Chapter 1- Bill's Closet
I guess I would choose for before the characters find out :)
Author's Response: All right, thank you for the input! I did get another person telling me during, so I'll try to split up the pivotal moments between the two evenly. :)
Date: 11/02/15 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 1- Bill's Closet
Great first chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it! A new chapter is on it's way and will be up soon but I'd like to get some opinions on this; When finding out plot twists in a story, do you more like to know before the characters find out or when they do?
Date: 11/02/15 01:24 pm Title: Chapter 1- Bill's Closet
I don't know where this is going to go but I like it so far!
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate it! Anew chapter is on it's way but I'd like to get some opinions on this; When finding out plot twists in a story, do you more like to know before the characters find out or when they do?
Date: 11/02/15 01:45 am Title: Chapter 1- Bill's Closet
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you, a new chapter is on it's way! But I'd like to get some opinions on this; When finding out plot twists in a story, do you more like to know before the characters find out or when they do?
Date: 11/01/15 07:43 pm Title: Chapter 1- Bill's Closet
Oooh very intriguing. I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have the next chapter up soon, hopefully. Shouldn't be too long. :)