Date: 01/30/18 08:42 am Title: Chapter 1
I know you posted this a long time ago but it's never too late to read a beautiful story like this one.
I love everything about it, the describtion, the details and the dialogue. And your writing is amazing.
Date: 02/07/16 02:28 am Title: Chapter 1
What a sweet poignant story!
Loved these lines:
"You know what my definition of beauty is, though?" --- "Waking up next to my boyfriend instead of an empty bed,"
Date: 10/05/15 01:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh! :3 This was too sweet! But these lines;
"God, you and that mouth"
"What about my mouth"
"It's not where it's supposed to be"
*-* hahaha I'm such a pig, I thought something else... e_e You did an amazing job with the description of the scenery. :) And their interaction was oh so adorable. -sigh- Loved it!
Date: 10/05/15 12:17 am Title: Chapter 1
This was gorgeous. The imagery was perfect. Thank you for posting this. :)
Date: 09/29/15 02:33 am Title: Chapter 1
VERY lovely prose here ^^ You perfectly captured that "cabin in the snow" feeling.
Date: 09/24/15 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
beautiful! What a lovely thought, Bill and Tom together in a cabin somewhere out there. Lovely entry!
Date: 09/24/15 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet :3 very peaceful and vivid
Date: 09/23/15 02:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
The imagery is just amazing. I love the concrete details of your setting. I love that Tom is a writer. I love that Bill wants to wake up next to him. Ahh. So so sweet. 🙈
Date: 09/22/15 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is too beautiful. I actually felt like I could experience that moment by the lake with Tom. I'm definitely no writer but, as an artist, that view would have held me just as captivated as it did him. Whoever you are, I'm in awe of your writing abilities. This is definitely a favorite and one I'll be returning to.
Date: 09/22/15 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a great little story. :)
Date: 09/22/15 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Such a wonderful piece! The words are set so perfectly and beautifully. This left me fully satisfied.
Date: 09/22/15 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was beautiful...