Date: 03/05/23 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG this was SO CUTE! Tom channeling his real life current cocky attitude (or perhaps a mix of confidence and hopeful lol). I laughed so many times and it was so damn cute when Bill was nearly sputtering about "But I'm a boy" lol! I've read this several times since I found THF a year-ish ago. One of my 'comfort fics'.
Date: 01/07/20 09:32 am Title: Chapter 4
this was a really good story!
please do a sequel to this!
Date: 10/04/18 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 4
this was a good story!!
you should do a sequel to this!
Date: 08/25/16 06:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oooooh! Damn! I'm so glad I finally read this! Such an amazing work!!!! I kinda wanna read more XD I'm a bit sad that there wasn't their first real sex there bjt I'll settle for the hand stuff XDD anyhoo. I simply loved this!!!! I just love teenage Bill and Tom being all romantic
Date: 10/10/15 05:51 am Title: Chapter 4
this was a really good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 10/07/15 12:26 am Title: Chapter 4
Eeee! I loved this! The characters were adorable and perfect, and I didn't skip the sex scene. I almost always skip the sex scene, so there you go. lol Well done, you! ♥
Date: 10/05/15 12:28 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hi, Em! It's been a long time since I read any fics. Hadn't been in the mood, you know? :c But I came to THF today and saw your pen name as the winner for the FIA challenge and oh, I had to read it! Love all the cute things you write even though fluffy stories are not my thing. :P You're like the queen of fluff or something.
...Or something. xD -Must say that I absolutely loved that phrase in the story. It made laugh, 'twas so adorable!-
I think their first date was lovely. The personalities, four chapters, and the way you developed them were enough for me. If I were Bill, I would have probably acted the same around Tom because well... why the hell no? ^^ It was just perfect. And I loved that they waited 2 months to make love. Aw, that was so sweet. Thank you for submitting and sharing this. :3 It's lovely.
Congratulations!!
Date: 09/24/15 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
You know what's the best part of having friends to discuss fics with? That they point out stuff you missed. So they didn't actually go all the way first night? Well, let me tell you, that made me a whole lot happier, because like I said, I really loved this story and your Tom was probably the best character I've read about in a long time.
But yeah, apparently I missed the whole season change. Oops, my bad!
I do still think they rushed it a bit on the first date, though, but that's just me. Either way, a whole lot better than them having actual sex.
Once again, thank you for sharing this with us :)
Date: 09/24/15 03:09 pm Title: Chapter 4
Tom's family seems so nice, and awe, Bill was so sweet to little Evie. I bet he's gonna be a new favourite in this family.
I'm gonna be honest and say I think it was way too early for them to have sex, though. I mean, I know a lot of people do it on their first date, but... Neh, didn't feel right to me. Especially not since it was Bill's first time.
Except for that I really liked this story. It's surely one of my favourite entries so far. Thanks for sharing it with us!
Date: 09/24/15 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 3
Again, I really like Bill's friends. They're protective, like friends should be, but they're not really trying to stop him from seeing Tom either. I like that!
Again, Tom and his timing. Gotta love it.
Really like how Tom stood up for Bill again, it's not always easy to do the opposite of what people expect you to do, and him telling Geo to leave Bill alone was really big of him.
Their date, though! So cute so far! I love how Tom was like, properly serious for a bit when he tried to explain why he wanted to go out with Bill and all. That was really sweet. He seems to be such a nice guy. I just hope this won't end up being one of those few stories where Tom is actually a dick and has been playing Bill all along. I don't think so, but I've learned to never trust writers ;)
Amazing chapter, moving on to the last one!
Date: 09/24/15 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Tom's timing is perfect, gotta love that guy.
I really like Bill's friends, and believe it or not, I love that Andreas is a bit anti Tom, it makes it all more realistic and I like that :)
So Bill is crushing on Tom, huh? Well, I'm not surprised. I mean, who wouldn't? And Tom.. Well I like him more and more the more we see of him.
Dinner and movie, that's so sweet, and I bet it's very surprising to everyone that Tom is actually interested in Bill, with them being so different and all.
Another great chapter, will come back for the next one later :)
Date: 09/24/15 11:28 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm reviewing from my bitchy phone, so I'll already now apologise for weird mistake or random words in this and my upcoming reviews.
Anyway. I really like this first chapter. I haven't been reading a lot lately because of many different reasons, and even though I really do want to catch up on all these challenge stories it doesn't seem to be happening. The summary to this sort of caught me, though. I really like the classic high school stories where Tom and Bill are so different no one ever thought they'd be friends and then they're somehow brought together and starts hanging out. It's cliché but I can't deny that those are usually my favourite kind of stories. I mean, clichés are called so for a reason, right?
Tom seems to be a very interesting character. I love his teasing and smirking and how he's almost a bit.. Not sure if cocky is the right word to use, but something like it, and yet he's somehow sweet at the same time. Really liked how he kept talking to Bill when Geo was there and I'm really looking forward to get to know more about him.
Great first chapter, moving on to the next one :)
Date: 09/23/15 09:50 am Title: Chapter 4
I have to admit I read all of this during the site blackout because it was open on my phone. Now I'm back to pay my respects! I so so loved this little gem. These kind of stories really make me want to go back to high school for a do-over as my current, more-confident self. This love scene was sooo good, I adored it. And I have no idea how they managed to go another couple of months without going all the way, but I appreciate that they took their time. It's much better in my eyes to love someone and then have sex, more fulfilling and less risk to the heart. Anyway, I loved all of this. And the detention at the end is sure to result in more punishment if they're gonna do what I think they're gonna do. I can just see them making out quietly while the teacher sits behind a pile of books again next time they have detention, but that wont work if they're caught too early haha xD.
Date: 09/23/15 09:44 am Title: Chapter 3
Oooooh kissy kissy! Bill is so ready to go all the way right now. How easy ;) This is perfect.
Date: 09/23/15 09:42 am Title: Chapter 2
I'm in love with this. Tom's timing is impeccable and Gustav is the best! Way tontrun that conversation to where it needed to be! Also, Tom is freaking adorable. I think that is the teen dream, that a hot, popular jock would actually be super sweet as well and want you!
Date: 09/23/15 12:53 am Title: Chapter 4
Great story! Really hot!
Date: 09/22/15 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like confident Tom and shy Bill. It's an attractive trait that Bill is so falling for.
Date: 09/22/15 01:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aaaawwwwww! So far so great, loving all the big personalities. And the coffee and the details. Everything is perfect :)
Author's Response: thank you so much my darling!!
Date: 09/22/15 04:58 am Title: Chapter 4
I like Simone in this.
This was so sweet (and hot) and well-written and like the perfect ending for this piece of fluff (though I wouldn't have minded more glimpses into their time as a couple, especially that loosing virginity thing) and I really loved it. I think it's my favourite of all the challenge fics so far. ;)