Date: 06/26/25 09:21 am Title: ...for love
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 09/23/15 09:30 am Title: ...for love
Awwwww, poor Bill. I feel for him. Don't worry, Bill! Tom will come around! :) Well done, this story took me back in time.
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't want to write the idea for the longest time because I dislike it when the twins don't get their happy ending, but then I thought 'maaaybe if I make it into a prequel, they would get together at some point without me ruining this by giving it a totally unrealistic immediate happy solution...' and then this happened. xD The sequel is my story Discontent btw. Thanks so much for reviewing this even though I've been a very bad lazy author and haven't even responded to your review on that yet (I'll get around to that sometime soon, too, I promise)! :) I hope to see more of your writing in the near future, too? *blinks puppy eyes*
Date: 09/21/15 04:31 pm Title: ...for love
Holy moly! Amaaaaaazingly written thought processes! Very eloquent feels!
Author's Response: Thx! :D I'm really digging that cause I'm not a native ^^ though some credit goes to Ghostie for breaking up some of my overly long sentences, too...
Date: 09/19/15 01:25 pm Title: ...for love
Ohh I really like this! The promise of something more. Was fascinating to be right inside Bill's head for this one. fab entry!
Author's Response: omg, I'm so honoured you reviewed this, I love your stories! :D Thx btw ^^ If you want to read the promised 'something more' the sequel is my story Discontent. It wasn't betaed by Ghostie, so it might be a little more chaotic than this, but maybe you wanna risk a look at Tom's POV? ;)
Date: 09/19/15 12:50 pm Title: ...for love
YES. Beautifully written. :3 This narrative pulled at my heart strings, but I loved every word! I think all of your sentences were entirely thought through and really helped push the conflict. The ending couple of sentences pulled everything together. Thank you, darling.
Author's Response: So glad you like it ^^ Well, I started thinking it through on a four hour drive back home, then wrote it down on paper, typed it up, proofread it a few times myself and finally improved it with Ghostie's help, so you could say I've given it some thought. Good to know it was worth the effort xD In case you're interested in the sequel, it's my story Discontent... ;)
Date: 09/19/15 09:26 am Title: ...for love
Wonderfully introspective and so well written. :)
Author's Response: I can't believe you reviewed me, your stories are classics o.O Thank you so much! :D Will you be writing twincest again in the near future? I would be very happy ^^
Date: 09/18/15 09:33 pm Title: ...for love
Aw, kind of sad :( but it seems to be looking up at the end. Have to read the next part now, Bill needs to get what he deserves (Tom, in bed). :)
Author's Response: Yes, I hestitated about writing it for that exact reason (I hate leabing the twins unhappy), butit does look up at the end. The sequel is actually my story Discontent, feel free to check it out. They don't quite make it to bed, but it explains Tom's take on things ;)
Date: 09/18/15 09:25 pm Title: ...for love
Poor Bill. I'm really hoping Tom will come around. I'm very much looking forward to seeing where this story goes. I'm off to the next part. :)
Author's Response: Don't worry, I didn't turn Tom into a total asshole xD The sequel is actually my story Discontent, but feel free to take a look at Tom's thoughts, too ;) Thanks for reviewing ^^
Date: 09/18/15 04:30 pm Title: ...for love
Gah!! I want more!!!! Oh, wait. There's a sequel. Guess who's reading that next? ;)
Author's Response: Yay, I made someone desparate for more! *evil cackle* xD *ahem*, no jk. You couldn't actually read the sequel until now I'm afraid, because it's my story Discontent and I - of course - wasn't allowed to pimp that until now because the identities were kept a secret. Go read it now! Oh btw, thx for reviewing :)
Date: 09/18/15 02:53 pm Title: ...for love
I must say this is the best story from this challenge so far! Although itīs a little bit sad I like it very much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D But because I hate making the twins sad, this has a sequel. Go and read my story Discontent if you're interested ;)