Date: 08/01/16 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
So I just read this again and I don't know if it's even possible but any chance we could get more stories from this universe? Because... well I'd really like to know what would happen next time they meet :o
Author's Response: Hehe, sure thing! I bet I could think of something for another one-shot...
Date: 09/24/15 07:22 am Title: Chapter 1
This was brilliant! I'm not usually one for ninja fics but you wrote really well, everything from the pursuit to the scenery depictions to their interactions was lovely. I thought you incorporated your challenge phrases into the story really nicely! Especially the lucky socks haha. Looking forward to finding out who you are, wanna check out more of your fics x
Author's Response: I tried my best not to make it stereotypical and faux Japanese, lol. Really the only trope I put in was the "ninja run". And thanks! I really had fun with this challenge XD Thanks for your read and review!
Date: 09/22/15 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
How interesting. I don't think I've ever seen a ninja!AU with the twins before. Assassins, sure, but never ninjas...
The idea is really cool though and the story was cute, good work. :)
Author's Response: Hehe, that's true. I've seen (and enjoyed) a lot of assassin fics. But I wanted to do something silly and different. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^
Date: 09/19/15 12:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw. This is adorable and super creative. :3 I think the ending is great. I see this camaraderie and equal balance between them. I hope you continue this story!!
Author's Response: Thanks :D Glad you liked the ending. And I do try to make them equals, without one of them being the "damsel in distress" ^^
Date: 09/19/15 09:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Cute ending! I really enjoyed how well you wrote the pursuit. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The pursuit was the hardest part to write, especially after they came face-to-face for the first time. And I didn't want it to drag out either, so glad you enjoyed ^^
Date: 09/19/15 09:36 am Title: Chapter 1
haha awww this is so lovely! What an awesome and original idea. I love all your description, it's beautiful, very exciting to read Bill all stealth on top of those rooftops.
Absolutely loved this entry!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D I do try to place atmosphere with as much description as I can without it being bloated/boring. And I'm a sucker for stealth, lol, in games or stories.
Date: 09/18/15 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bill and Tom as ninjas. Who hasn't thought that 100 times? No one but you! This was absolutely adorable and I loved every word. :)
Author's Response: Haha, I was playing a lot of Assassin's Creed when I first entered this challenge, but B&T have been written as assassins tons of times, so I went with ninjas XD Thank you so much! ^^
Date: 09/18/15 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahah, cute!!! I want a sequel with secret super-ninja kisses and dates where no one can find them xD
Author's Response: Hehe, I'll think about making a short follow-up, probably another oneshot like this one. Thank you for reading and reviewing! ^^
Date: 09/18/15 04:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love the ending!! They would totally work better if they worked together. They're just too good for each other!!!
....and autocorrect almost corrected "they're" to "neutral". I have no idea where that came from.
Author's Response: Auto-correct is damn strange, lol. And yeah, it would totally be awesome if they worked together. Too bad the training is intended for each ninja to work solo =P Glad you liked the ending! I actually rushed in writing it, so I'm glad it didn't come off that way.
Date: 09/18/15 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1
That's all? I want more! I would definitely appreciate a sequel for this one ;)
Author's Response: Hehe, I'll think about doing a short follow-up. Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Date: 09/18/15 11:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I really loved this. Such great imagery and characterization, and you did a fantastic job using your phrases! I can't wait to find out who you are so I can read more of your stuff. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I really try to put in as much imagery and atmosphere as I can. Ah, I barely have anything at this point, but I'm trying to be more prolific!
Date: 09/18/15 10:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Just wow. This was... I have no words.. I loved it! Really loved it! Just the idea had me taken, I mean, I wasn't even supposed to read right now, I'm busy with other things, but the summary got to me and when I started reading I couldn't stop.
This was brilliant, really, and the writing was beautiful! I felt like I was watching rather than reading, and damn, it was so, so good!
Really, really loved how you used your words, and the ending with Bill's blue socks had me laughing out loud. It was such a great little touch, I think!
Really, really liked this, and I seriously can't wait to find out who you are. Great story!
Author's Response: Yay! So glad you liked it. I was iffy because I'd never written something like this before, but it was really the only way I could include all four phrases/words. Ooh, that's like the best compliment you can give a writer, I think, that it felt like watching rather than reading ^^ Thank you!