Date: 04/27/08 09:14 pm Title: 1 - The New School
ah. this gets better every chapter. i have soo many questions, so keep writing. so good.
Date: 04/27/08 08:37 pm Title: 17 - Favorite Victim
brother vs. brother
HOT
i hope Bill wins. :) but hey that's just me.
thanks for the update!! update again soon?? :)
Date: 04/27/08 07:48 pm Title: 17 - Favorite Victim
ooowww! this girl isn't happy with just one of them?! xD
... god... some more question popped up during this chapter:
- is the twins father/mother a vampire?!
- is the age they appear to be, really his age?!
- are they mean?! have no heart?!... or is it just a thing of bill's?!... i mean, what bill said to vanessa was really mean :/
Date: 04/27/08 06:49 pm Title: 17 - Favorite Victim
continue
Date: 04/27/08 05:18 pm Title: 17 - Favorite Victim
Damn your chapters keep getting better and better
Date: 04/26/08 07:27 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
i seriously can't stop reading this story.
update, update :)
Date: 04/25/08 06:49 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
awwww so cute
continue bba
Date: 04/25/08 06:17 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN!!!! That is such a great chapter!!! I so cant wait for more!
Date: 04/25/08 06:02 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
argh...u cant stop there!!!
Date: 04/25/08 03:29 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
she's must be crazy, looking into his eyes... it was luck her brain didn't explode xD
god, you're making me so curious!:
- i still can't figure out if tom and bill really like her or if she's like just one of their puppets;
- why did she bleed so much the first time and why is tom feeling pain too?! is she special?! o_O
- WTF: they talk to animals?!
you gotta answer some things... can't wait to read more of your fic :D post as soon as you can :D
Date: 04/25/08 02:00 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
Wow i really enjoy reading this. So many questions i want answered like what's with Bill and Why Tom feels her pain..... I can't wait to find them out XD
Date: 04/25/08 12:11 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
awwwwwwwww this is so gr8 as always this is so gr8 love it
ly
100/100
xx
Date: 04/25/08 08:54 am Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
great part! x)
love it =)
Date: 04/25/08 03:28 am Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
I love this story!
I have so many questions that I don’t even know where to start..
Like a few chapters earlier, after the first time Tom bit her, when Bill was driving her home, why did she want to “jump him right there and then and bite his neck as Tom bit her” ? :O
And that Tom can feel the pain too when he touches her, I want to know why :P
And does Tom sneak over at night to all the girls he bite?
Please update soon I’m going crazy whit all the questions in my head!!
Date: 04/24/08 10:39 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
this is great. pleaseee write more
Date: 04/24/08 09:42 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
she is brave 0.0
Date: 04/24/08 06:57 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
ohohoh. this is so sweet. awwww. but will Billy get his fun too? update.....:)
Date: 04/24/08 06:24 pm Title: 16 - My Nightly Surprise
wow is she really going to look straight into his eyes
awesome chapter
Date: 04/22/08 12:04 pm Title: 15 - Brothers Fighting
Aah more more more!!
Love it :D
Date: 04/21/08 05:04 pm Title: 15 - Brothers Fighting
amazing