Date: 07/14/08 11:12 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
Ugh.. That was mean of Tom to do,
just leave like that to go to Mai.. :/
Especially since she told him she liked him the night before..
Even I godt jealous :P
And why did it bother him that she likes Bill too? He don's seem to mind otherwise, Hmm..
Sooo is there gonna be a sexy threesome or what..? ;P
Date: 07/14/08 11:02 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
finished as in the story? or the chapter?
eeep
please write moreee
i neeed to know if and WHO she chooses eeep! and more about this mia person and her significance other then tom likes to bite her hah more more more!
Date: 07/14/08 07:48 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
Oh
My
God
YES!
Write more!!!
You've got me ADDICTED to this story!
Date: 07/14/08 07:47 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
oh man that sucks liking them both so much XD. UGH TOm went to here again:( i don't like mia:( and apparently Paul IS a vamp ^^ awesomeness XD
Date: 07/14/08 05:24 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
is this the end of this if it is i was so gr8 i loved it so much
if nto eye means i get more
anywasy i lvoe
this
ly
xxxx
100/100 and more
Date: 07/10/08 01:34 am Title: 24 - The Argument
eeeeeep please update soon!!!
Author's Response: We are now back from Roskilde Festival and we're working on the next chapter. It should be up and running in the next couple of days. . . :) Thank you for the reviews and for sticking with the story through good and bad times.
Date: 07/03/08 06:04 am Title: 24 - The Argument
Awwww Tom
Love it! More when you can pleaseeee!! I really love it!
xXx
Date: 07/01/08 08:35 am Title: 24 - The Argument
ahaa ; )
i love that mind reading thingy xD
and update soon!
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Date: 06/29/08 05:10 pm Title: 24 - The Argument
XD ohh getting excited^^
I was also wondering if they ever had sex XD
I like it that tom goes over to her and stays with her ^^ so adorable!
Wonders what the fight with their dad was about...*rolls eyes*
You girls have fun!
Date: 06/29/08 10:22 am Title: 24 - The Argument
yay update:)
it'l be sad not being able to read any more chapters for a bit but i can wait.
this has got to be my favourite story on this site
Date: 06/28/08 12:36 am Title: 24 - The Argument
haha hes just so cute
Date: 06/27/08 07:47 pm Title: 24 - The Argument
oshgoiagsjaoghasgjaoighalgsaogiahlgasg
amazing.
Date: 06/27/08 05:38 pm Title: 24 - The Argument
ohh woow this is so gr8 omg im dieing i need more oh no im addicted hioooked
lol
updatye soon
ly
xx
Date: 06/27/08 05:00 pm Title: 24 - The Argument
Le gasp! Okay, The middle I sort of expected, the ending was like WOW. I probably should have expected something of the sort though. Amazing chapter. I loved it. ^____^
Date: 06/27/08 03:29 pm Title: 24 - The Argument
Ok I so want to know why Paul was so angry with the boys and why they were trying to hide everything!
Date: 06/27/08 12:21 pm Title: 24 - The Argument
WTF WTF WTFFFF
NOOOOOO
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO
ENDS SO ABRUPTLYYY
I THINK IM GNNA FAINT......
FUCK FUCK I LOVE WHEN IT'S ALLL LONGG MORE I BEGGITH YOUUU
UM UM MAKE HER MOVE IN WITH THEM FUCKKK PLEAAAAAASEEE -bursts into tears-
Date: 06/27/08 08:50 am Title: 24 - The Argument
*squeals* I'm so happy you guys updated.
This chapter was so good. What's up with Paul? why are he and bill arguing?
so many questions.
Date: 06/26/08 10:59 am Title: 23 - Go Fish
More :D
Love it
Date: 06/24/08 09:59 pm Title: 1 - The New School
more more more!!! i'm in love with this story!!
Date: 06/24/08 10:05 am Title: 23 - Go Fish
oooooooooooo
Love the new update! More now its summer? Pleaseeeee! I REALLY love it!!!
xXx