Date: 08/12/08 08:35 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
HOLYY SHIT YES!!!!!
Date: 08/12/08 07:00 am Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
I am still trying to identify the elements that make this story so attractive to me. Is it the writing? Is it the mystery? Is it the subtle sensuality? Is it the magic? Probably all of them. Please make me and all your readers the pleasure of tasting more and more of it! And SOOOON!
Date: 08/11/08 10:06 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
Ooh...Now that was smexy. lol
Love it.
Can´t wait till next chapter.
Date: 08/11/08 09:21 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
Daaaaaaaaaaang that is one SEXY game! lol
Date: 08/11/08 08:43 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
can't wait for next chappie !!!
Date: 08/11/08 06:27 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
sanggggg^^ damn that was hot! Lovely chappie! glad you two updated again:D
Date: 08/11/08 06:09 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
very good chap worth the wair
updat soon
ly
xx
Date: 08/11/08 05:57 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
oh geez i cant wait ffor the next chapter haha :D
Date: 08/11/08 05:03 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
omg LOL intense
please update ASAPPPPP!!!!
Date: 08/11/08 04:50 pm Title: 26 - The Art of Seduction
the guys scared me a little when they tried to force vanessa to drink the little pottion, but then they were back to normal and didn't force her to do anything. those are my boys! xD
but why would they do that? you gave all the explanation thing: it would be best for all, and that vanessa wouldn't be so addicted, but and the boys? aren't they as addicted as vanessa is? so why just make her forget things instead of all of the ones involved? just didn't made a lot of sense to me, sorry :S
i feel so sorry for vanessa 'cause she in the hands of these two guys and she "sofers" a lot, specially with bill who likes to tease her in every way possible. so it was really good to read this chapter where the girls had some power, at least had the illusion of possesing it.
but now, play the game but the other way around.... uuhhmmm... isn't that crossing the line? i mean, by playing the other way around the girls are just begging "something" to happen lol I just feel like these kids are playing with fire and then tey'lll get burned... xD
please, update as fast as you can, it's pure torture to have to wait so long for a new chapter :/
love your fic :D
Date: 08/09/08 05:05 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
Please write a new chapter to us !!
FAST !! We're dying to read more of your really really GOOD story !! :D
Please don't kill us, and write more !!
How much more do we have to wait? :)
Love yah
Date: 08/05/08 07:26 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
Please update soon? :)
Author's Response: We will. We promise we're working on it but there are so many things going on right now so we're a little slower than usual. . . So be patient, we promise the update is on its way. :)
Date: 07/28/08 02:37 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
omg i love this fic
Date: 07/23/08 03:27 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
more please... moreeee...
Oh Tom! Mai is no good
Date: 07/21/08 10:38 am Title: 25 - The Predator
First of all.. This is Amazing.
I stayed up all night and read your story. It´s freaking amazing. It really is.
I´m not fan of a vampire stories, but this is mein gott how good. lol
Anyway... Update would be really great. If you have time. Take your time. But remember... I´m very impatient. lol
Date: 07/17/08 08:18 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
lol the chemistry between these 3 is amzing
is she ever goin to have sex with one of them or better yet both lol
Date: 07/17/08 03:48 pm Title: 25 - The Predator
AWWE
haha I was missing this story moree pleaaase
Date: 07/15/08 10:17 am Title: 25 - The Predator
i think i am addicted to this story.
i sneeked downstairs turned on the internet then switched laptop on just so i could read this ...of course internet decided to turn off just before i could review
so here's my review
I LOVE THIS STORY:)
Date: 07/15/08 05:10 am Title: 25 - The Predator
Sweet. The mystery continues to envelop each chapter nicely. I really enjoy reading this, please go on!