Date: 09/14/15 11:22 am Title: Chapter 1
This was such a sweet and cute story. So simple yet it says so much. It's an issue a lot of couples, married or not, go through, and I think this was a good example of it. Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad I managed to describe it well, even though I haven't even been through any relationship problems ever :D Thank you very much!
Date: 09/14/15 11:00 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay so this made me cry. When Tom started crying I started as well. Real tears. I'm sensitive, okay?
I really, really loved this, you used your words beautifully and your characters were so nicely written. When Bill said he didn't make Tom happy anymore my heart broke, it was so sad.
Beautiful story! It goes straight to my favourites < 3
Author's Response: Hearing that I made one of my absolute favorite writers of all time (and a dear friend too <3) cry kind of makes me shriek every time I think of it! rnrnThank you so so much <3
Date: 09/14/15 10:56 am Title: Chapter 1
You left out the "touch me like a ritual", didn't you? I totally understand, but I would have loved it if you used it. In case I just overlooked it: so sorry!
I liked it anyway, it's sweet that they're trying to save their marriage and really hope that they can pull through. Good work!
Author's Response: You're right, I left it out. I almost didn't write the whole story because I couldn't fit it in... But then my dear friend told me I only have to use three :D It would have been perfect for some smut, but I don't really write any, so I decided to skip it.rnrnThank you so much for reading!
Date: 09/14/15 09:42 am Title: Chapter 1
Loved this! ^^
Author's Response: Eee thank you :3
Date: 09/14/15 09:37 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is sweet, my heart broke for them a bit when Bill suggested a divorce. I'm so glad they worked it out. Love how you worked your phrases together! "Why can't we fight about us" is one of my favorite lyrics. Great job :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :3 I like that phrase so much too!
Date: 09/14/15 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1
Really pulling on my heartstrings here.
So glad they decided to try to start over and give their love another chance.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review <3 I'm glad to hear I managed to get into people's feelings :3