Date: 10/24/15 04:45 pm Title: Part Eight
That first part was actually pretty funny :DDD
I´m really curious how this will continue...
Author's Response: I'm glad you found the humour in there, I know it's rather vague in places but I am trying to make this a tad less serious and such. And I hope you like how this continues from hereon in < 3
Date: 10/24/15 09:18 am Title: Part Eight
Oh god damn *pants* that was.... so hot and dirty. the first part anyway. wow.
I feel that I'm learning more and more about the characters and get so much good smut ^^ each update is such a treat! :D you're doing the best job!
Author's Response: Thanks, babe. These days the need to write smut is coming at me real hard and I don't know how to control myself, any more. I'm glad you're liking this so far, though. It means a lot < 3
Date: 10/24/15 12:54 am Title: Part Eight
OK BUT LIKE THAT SMUT THO
Which was slightly comical at time lol
Aww Tomi seems to somewhat care about Bill yay
Author's Response: I'M REALLY GLAD TO READ THAT! And yes, I do like to balance my stories out - whether that's weighing smut out with humour, or angst with fluff, I don't like things to be too full on with particular genres. Yes, feelings are growing and all that. That should be fun, shouldn't it? < 3
Date: 10/24/15 12:28 am Title: Part Eight
Great chapter
Author's Response: Thank you ^~^ < 3
Date: 10/23/15 05:31 pm Title: Part Eight
i love seeing a little glimpse of the bill that's not trying...well, succeeding in getting into tom's pants! though the getting into each other's pants is good too.
you missed a lu-han though, during the blow job.
otherwise, woo hoo! more please!
Author's Response: Ah, I'm glad you're liking those glimpses of Bill within this, it was fun to write him from all angles. And they're so much better when they're in each other's pants, I've got to admit. Poor Tom, tho. He KNOWS he should really say NO, but nope, Bill's a master (maybe his master, who the fuck knows) < 3 (I FAIL AT LIFE, I WAS SO SURE I GOT THEM ALL BEFORE POSTING THIS. Let's take a second to thank Sandra for teaching me about CTRL+F because I wouldn't have ever found the missing Lu Han without that. LMAO; My readers are probably flagging this for plagiarisation AS WE SPEAK, ELLEN. But I assure EVERYBODY I can provide links and evidence that will prove that I haven't stolen this from some poor writer. Work is all mine, no matter which fandom it's from.) I do apologise, tho. It must have really been a pain to see a random Lulu in there < / 3 Thanks for pointing that out, tho. I do appreciate it!
Date: 10/21/15 07:02 pm Title: Part One
So in love with this fanfic
Author's Response: I'm really glad to hear that, thank you so much < 3
Date: 10/15/15 01:55 am Title: Part Seven
PLEASE UPDATE HOLY FUCKING SHIT.
Author's Response: I HAVE, I HAVE < 3
Date: 10/13/15 06:19 pm Title: Part Seven
I never know what to say after reading this. it leaves me craving more because i'm do drawn in and i just need more!
< 3
Author's Response: In that case, I hope you enjoy the latest chapter < 3 thanks babe!
Date: 10/12/15 03:08 pm Title: Part Seven
WELP IM DEAD FROM THE LAST TWO CHAPTERS
Author's Response: AH, I'M GLAD TO HEAR THAT (!!!) (Not the dead part, obviously. I'm just happy to see reaction to this!) Thank you < 3
Date: 10/12/15 01:33 am Title: Part Seven
I cannot get enough of this story, I didn't want to stop reading!
Author's Response: Ah, I'm happy to hear that. Thank you < 3
Date: 10/11/15 06:37 pm Title: Part Seven
wow. bill's mom sounds like a peach.
get it? peach? huh? get it?
okay i'm done.
Author's Response: Your reviews are so odd but amazing, you know that, right? Thank you for reading < 3
Date: 10/11/15 05:31 pm Title: Part Seven
Omg poor Bill 💕 I feel so sorry for him. I can feel his pain though. I know plenty of people who would do that to me (not
my mum tho.) Awh yeah its just so sad. The thing about Tom saying he wasn't friends with his mother (and I totally agree with that) I wouldn't class my mother as a 'friend' (or my dad or sister) but it reminded me of this girl I went to school with and now her mum really is her only friend. She left school at 12 and as a twelve year old I refused to speak to her (which sounds really really bad but I was so jealous) and Toms little speech just provoked a feeling of guilt in me 😂😱🙊
And the bible quote 😂 that's the only commandment I really remember (twelve years at a catholic school and I really should know but oh well. Lucky I didn't take religion 😂)
I have mixed feelings about Tobi. I mean he kinda needs to stay out of Bill and Toms relationship. I feel like he has an ulterior motive...
Anyway loved the chapter as usual 💙
Author's Response: Hii < 3 And yes, Bill is quite a tortured soul, isn't he? It's a shame, because he could've been a super nice person if given the care and affection he deserves. And my mom is my best friend, I've got to admit but a lot of my friends never really understood it? So I guess it was understanding to use that within this. (I want to hug that girl, poor soul < / 3) I'm not in any way religious, so I had to google majority of what I wrote concerning religion, lmao. And Tobi's motives and whatnot will be explained in later chapters, I assure you < 3 thank you, lovely!
Date: 10/11/15 05:29 pm Title: Part Seven
Great chapter, like always :)
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 10/11/15 03:09 pm Title: Part Seven
And I'm like,"Over already?!" Sigh** Words fly when you're reading. Again,I say,I love this fic!!
Bill is kinda sweet,which is suspicious and Tom,his worked up mind(body too,I guess) makes him more loveable.Tobi seems nice.Maybe he plays an important part later.
This fic has me even more restless,gonna stick to,"Patience pays" ,though.
Love,
An ever-"WAITING" readerXD
Author's Response: Ah, you're far too sweet! Bill IS kinda being sweet, isn't he? But wouldn't we all be if we wanted something? And Bill does want something, he's made that more than clear - he wants Tom('s dick, lmao). And yes, Bill is definitely giving Tom something to think about and such, poor fucker doesn't know where he's at most of the time. And yes, MAYBE Tobi does! < 3 Thank you so much, I'm really grateful for your love for this! < 3
Date: 10/11/15 01:10 pm Title: Part Seven
good chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you thought so! < 3
Date: 10/08/15 12:46 am Title: Part Six
Also - forgot to add this last night: That dryhump scene? aaaahhh *_* omg! HOTTTTTT!!
Amazing job hon!
Author's Response: BUT YOU SHOULD'VE EXPECTED IT FROM ME, HOMODRYHUMPINGISSHITHOT&IAMWEAKFORIT < 3 Thank you so much, I just wish it was easier to write than it is to enjoy it, or else this would've been perfect < 3
Date: 10/07/15 07:10 pm Title: Part Six
Omg!!! I'm so in love with this fanfic *_____*
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much for giving it a chance. I know a lot of people would've seen the warnings I've got listed without clicking into it and would've continued to scroll down their most recent. So I'm really grateful for those who have read the story notes and gave it a chance before judging. Thank you so much and I hope you continue to love this < 3
Date: 10/07/15 06:16 pm Title: Part Six
It really just gets better and better. Last part? So intense. Wow!
I don't think you'll disappoint me at all, hon!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you're enjoying this < 3
Date: 10/06/15 05:34 pm Title: Part Six
Ahah again I probably shouldnt be reading this. I have some stupid test Ive supposed to have revised for. I didnt revise first time round so I probably should have revised!!! But Yolo 😂 I saw this was updated and I just had to read it. 😂
Fuck. Toms dads an asshole. I wonder what Tom did to Natalie's boyfriend. Maybe he killed him?
Oh fuck Bill 👌 you've really crawled under Toms skin.I really like it!!! can't wait for more (even if it distracts from my a levels 👌d84;💕)
Author's Response: A LEVELS ARE HELL, YOU SHOULD really REVISE FOR THOSE ;_; < / 3 And yes, Tom's dad is an asshole, I have to agree. If you're unsure of what Tom did to Natalie's boyfriend, you'll definitely find out in the new chapter I'm about to post. He really has crawled under Tom's skin but it wasn't really hard for him, Tom's been quite a puppet for his use within this. But then that leads back to Tom's lack of willpower and control, too. So it ties in nicely. Thank you so much < 3
Date: 10/06/15 05:19 pm Title: Part Six
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much < 3