Date: 11/02/15 11:17 am Title: Part Ten
I've read this over and over, trying to find out what to say in my review. I don't know what to say. I'm speechless. This story has fascinated me since day one - it's so different from what I usually read, and it takes my breath away (In good ways, and bad ways as well) And well, I love it so much. You're doing a great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, gorgeous. Praise from you always means a whole lot < 3
Date: 11/01/15 04:25 pm Title: Part One
I super love your story and you know it!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks, darling < 3 I appreciate the support a whole lot xo
Date: 11/01/15 02:08 pm Title: Part Ten
oh, poor tom. poor stinky lovesick tom. can't believe he just blurted out his feelings like that! now bill just has to quit torturing him!
Author's Response: Stinky, lovesick Tom doesn't know how to keep his feelings to himself, evidently. < / 3 poor fucker. Thank you so much < 3
Date: 11/01/15 11:15 am Title: Part Ten
I feel sorry for Tom! He could start to be strong and selfconfident again and show Bill that he can live without him. Maybe Bill will figure after that what he could have and what he lost...
Author's Response: I don't think Tom's ever been self-confident, he's always been quite demure within this? So I think that could be a struggle for him. However, Tom isn't actually dumb so I'm sure he's capable of PRETENDING to Bill that he can do just fine without him? And Bill's a complicated guy, it's gonna take a while, lmao < 3
Date: 11/01/15 07:43 am Title: Part Ten
Tom really needed the wake-up call. Not sure of the direction but Tom really needs to show Bill he is not the center of his universe. And skinny Tom is not cute lol. I picture Tom as a buff prisoner all nice arms and abs and stuff lol.
Author's Response: In some terms, I think he did, too. It was too comfortable for him, things were going so perfectly for him and in a situation/within circumstances like these, it's never going to last. Plus, Bill told Tom straight-out right at the beginning what they were too each other, so I can totally understand why you think that. I think it would be the best idea to show Bill he's not the centre of his universe, however it's bound to be hard when they're literally living in each other's pockets. And skinny Tom isn't cute, no < / 3 Thank you so much for reading < 3
Date: 11/01/15 02:57 am Title: Part Ten
Yep,let's begin the wring-Bill's-neck crusade. Ohhh...I just so wanna cradle Tom.The state that he's in? ...it's so painful.This chappy got my heart stabbed to a pulp.Tom....oh Tom.... ;_;
You're handing out the story real awesomely. It's amazing how you lay out the story and characters.Reading it brings out the itch in me. XD
Author's Response: Yep, I think it's about time we all wrung that little neck of his for what he's putting Tomi through. And Tom's in pretty bad shape. Falling in love within a prison is a lot more magnified than if he were to fall in love on the outside world. Feelings are emphasised a great load in there, there's no way of escaping to collect yourself and he doesn't have anywhere/anyone else to turn to. It's all compressed and the pressure is breaking Tomi. And thank you so much for that lovely praise, I'm so pleased you're enjoying this as much as you are < 3
Date: 11/01/15 01:26 am Title: Part Ten
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you so much ^~^ < 3
Date: 11/01/15 01:15 am Title: Part Ten
WELP I feel bad for Tomi :(
Hopefully Bill will come around.
Author's Response: Tom is such a sucker, isn't he? He fell too fast, too soon and couldn't stop himself before it was all too late (which isn't all that surprising, I don't think. He's deprived of so many things in there and all he really had was Bill?) And maybe Bill will, maybe Bill won't, but whatever happens, it's definitely going to be a challenge (Is Bill worth a challenge, though? Hm) Thank you so much < 3
Date: 10/31/15 02:40 pm Title: Part One
Update please. ;-;
Author's Response: I AM, I AM < 3
Date: 10/27/15 02:36 pm Title: Part Nine
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you < 3
Date: 10/27/15 12:47 pm Title: Part Nine
Ah, loving everything, from the smut to the characters. They're very interesting and Im all drawn in.
And oh wow. I feel for ya, Tom. Not okay being someones second best. And I agree, stop messing around with Bushido, Bill.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking all those. When I started this in January, the characters were quite complex to write and I struggled a shit ton trying to portray them properly, so I'm positively glad that all the suffering is paying off. Nobody should have to be someone's second best, so YAS, poor Tomi. < 3
Date: 10/27/15 06:55 am Title: Part Nine
I feel so sad and sorry for Tom. His feelings are growing and he's getting affected. :(
I just hope that somewhere deep down, Bill has some for Tom too. Maybe he's yet to comprehend them or something. I kinda wanna wring his neck though. Anyways, you described Bushido in a cool way and a protectively jealous Tom makes me go all jelly. X3
Cool chappy,this one too.
Author's Response: His feelings are growing, poor baby. Bill did warn him, though, right when they started out fucking around with one another. I think after the next chapter, we'll all want to wring Bill's neck. I'm glad you liked the glimpse of BUSHIDO, I love the guy and wanted to give him a certain spotlight for this. JEALOUS TOM, THOUGH? CUTE AS FUCK. < 3
Date: 10/27/15 04:35 am Title: Part Nine
I love jealous Tom! :D But I would really like to know what Bill's feelings for Tom are...
Author's Response: Jealous Tom is adorable. But who wouldn't be jealous? I mean, his fuck buddy is fucking other people, too? That's gotta be a stab to his ego (or his feelings, poor soul.) Bill's feelings are complicated, HOWEVER you can have a glimpse of those in a few minutes when I next upload < 3
Date: 10/27/15 02:04 am Title: Part Nine
OHHHH SHIT IS GOING DOWN LOL
VERY EXCITED FOR NEXT CHAPTER!
Author's Response: SHIT IS GOING DOWN. And thank you so much, I hope you enjoy it < 3
Date: 10/27/15 12:03 am Title: Part Nine
Tough Tom....I like it!
Author's Response: Yes, he has balls. TOM HAS FUCKING BALLS. It's a shock, isn't it? < 3
Date: 10/26/15 09:08 pm Title: Part Nine
ooooo, tomi's jealous!
Author's Response: Jealous Tomi is the best type of Tomi, in my opinion. So cute, I could squish him. Thanks for reading < 3
Date: 10/26/15 08:59 pm Title: Part Nine
Prison drama lol. Tom is being bold. I like that.
Author's Response: Oh, yes. Prison!AU wouldn't be the same without some good old drama, I don't think. Tom is beginning to find his balls now, which is a relief because I was starting to think he didn't have any. Thanks for reading < 3
Date: 10/26/15 06:41 pm Title: Part Nine
Awhhh I love the way Tom is all protective over Bill its so cute 💜💙💜
Author's Response: Tom's cute as fuck, whether he's jealous and possessive, it's definitely the best type of look for him wherever Bill's concerned, I think. Thanks for reading < 3
Date: 10/25/15 10:06 am Title: Part Eight
So I just finished reading a very delicious chapter and about to review when I see the end notes - "...that'll be simmering down" ....I'm trying to feel neutral about this. XD
Tom's on his merry way to developing feelings for Bill and Bill, well, he SHOULD, too. Maybe a teensy weensy bit, if not the same as Tom. But Bill is one complicated guy and..yeah.
Also, the last part was so dayum sweet!!! X3
Once again, awesome chappy.
Author's Response: I know I said the smut would be simmering down now, but I wrote another smutty scene and added it into the next chapter for you all to enjoy. But I promise it won't be as hot and heavy for quite a while after this, maybe snippets here and there, but not full-on 2000+ word sex scenes. Tom IS on his merry way to developing feelings for Bill, but we knew he would, right? It was inevitable and Bill is Bill, who knows what to expect with him? Thank you so much and I hope you continue to enjoy this < 3
Date: 10/25/15 06:16 am Title: Part One
this story is just...
Author's Response: ARE YOU NOTICING NEW SCENES? YAS? < 3