Date: 12/07/15 10:43 am Title: Part Eleven
I can't even begin to tell you how heart wrenching this story has been, only in the best of ways, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much < 3 I'm glad I've been able to evoke emotion within you with this, I did try to splash all I could possibly give into it for my readers. Thanks again < 3
Date: 11/26/15 09:32 pm Title: Part Eleven
I need to say it, I hate to love this story and I can't wait for more!
Jost is a total asshole, I'm sure that it'll take a time but he'll be screwed and I'll be here to read it muhahahaha
I wonder if Bill will ever be free from prison?!?!
Author's Response: I love that you hate to love this story, it's definitely the perfect reaction to this story type. Bill will be released eventually, but sadly not before the end of this story, though. < / 3 Thank you so much!
Date: 11/25/15 07:27 pm Title: Part Eleven
I was shivering while reading this! It was SO good.
Author's Response: THANK YOU! < 3
Date: 11/24/15 09:37 pm Title: Part Eleven
I have just binge-read the chapters you have posted. I like the story so far, and how you're developing the characters. I can't believe Bill is acting so weird! I hope that more answers come to the light in the next chapters. Great job so far, lovely!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, eep! I'm so glad you've eventually joined me here. Yes, Bill's an odd one, isn't he? But all will be explained soon enough. Thank you again, my love! < 3
Date: 11/24/15 05:51 pm Title: Part Eleven
hmmmm...is someone else getting attached now?
Author's Response: "No feelings, no attachment, just sexual release." Let's remind Bill, shall we? Thank you < 3
Date: 11/24/15 01:48 pm Title: Part Eleven
This story always so much increases my adrenaline. Whatever happens, please, promise me it will have happyend! Otherwise, I will get a heart attack! :D
Author's Response: LET'S PRAY FOR A HAPPY END TOGETHER, OKAY? < 3
Date: 11/24/15 01:20 pm Title: Part Eleven
New chapter, yay! Thank you so much! :') I'm loving this story so far, I'm just starting to fear how this is going to end. I don't think any good stuff is going to come out of what Jost did to Tom in this chapter. :s What's Bill going to do now? Because it seems to me like he was really upset. :s But that's good too... Isn't it? I mean, Bill was actually worried to see Tom in that shape. He got mad about it... what the actual fuck! First he was being a total bitch to Tom, making fun of him for falling in love and trying to get on his nerves. And then he saw that someone beated the shit out of him and suddenly he's all freaked out asking Tom who did it. Why does he even care so much? I bet Tom is confused as fuck, hell, I'm sure even Bill is confused. Geez, I seriously thought he was going to kiss Tom. I almost go insane while reading the last three paragraphs! :p Anyway, enough of my ramblings. I'm sorry you've been so busy, but thanks for updating! :) Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Please don't worry about the end yet, we're not quite there < 3 Bill, deep down, knows what it's like to be overpowered and beaten down without the ability to defend himself, so he's definitely feeling something. I thought they were going to kiss, too! (Sadly the moment wasn't quite right!) I adore your ramblings, they're literally a highlight for writing this < 3
Date: 11/24/15 01:16 pm Title: Part Eleven
Great chapter!
Author's Response: THANK YOU < 3
Date: 11/24/15 01:08 pm Title: Part Eleven
i'm so loving this story. pls don't stop writing?
Author's Response: No matter how busy I am, I'll always find my way back here, (I promise!) < 3
Date: 11/24/15 10:58 am Title: Part Eleven
Finally! I read this chapter with bated breath, so good, so delicious, so perfect. The story's going amazing. For now, it seems fine but I hope by the end, Georg and Gustav will still be on good terms with Tom. And Oh! Heartbroken Tom getting pulped? ;_;
Bill's reaction is unexpected at all. *_*(I'm ecstatic)
Please,more.
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! I'm glad you've enjoyed this so far and I hope you do for the remainder of the story < 3
Date: 11/23/15 12:08 am Title: Part One
Oh god, it's so sad that you stopped posting chapters just when I started reading your story. I really hope you're ok though. Maybe just really busy? I'm crossing my fingers to see A Perfect Contradiction in the section of recent stories very soon again.
Author's Response: Hii, I'm so sorry for the delay. I've been working and studying a lot lately, I've barely had time to breathe. I do apologise for that but I can promise you that I'll get the remaining chapters proofread and ready to just upload when I come home from work on a night. < 3
Date: 11/03/15 09:18 pm Title: Part Ten
No, I don't want to shoot you, haha. I actually liked this chapter quite a lot. I mean, of course i think it's sad Tom is feeling so broken, poor thing. :c But I liked Bill acting cold and all the things Tom confessed to him.
I wonder, by the way, why Georg seems to be terrified of Bill? And I wonder if eventually Tom is going to bend the same way. Hope not. I like when he confronts him.
Can't wait to read the next chapter! Hm, just a question before I go, how often do you post the chapters?
Author's Response: Hi, wow? I'm really glad you enjoyed this chapter and I'm so happy you're liking Bill throughout this, I honestly expected everyone to hate him for what he's done. I don't think it's so much that Georg's terrified of Bill, I think it's more along the lines of Georg knows Bill can break him emotionally quite easily. And in a restricted place like prison, I suppose emotional pain would feel amplified and a lot worse than physical pain where you're able to heal? Tom may bend that way, too. Who knows? ANDD I usually post every other day? But these last few weeks, I've been too busy. < 3
Date: 11/03/15 08:35 pm Title: Part Nine
Oh my god. Why did it take me so long to start reading this story? I'm loving it. All of it.
Ooh! Tom is falling in love, and being jealous comes as a proof to that. I loved that he actually had the balls to tell Bill not to fuck with Bushido anymore. Loved it. But I'm pretty sure Bill didn't like it as much.
Author's Response: Ah, thank you so much! < 3 I think the jealousy overrode any common sense he may have had when he told Bill to stopping fucking Bushido < / 3 poor baby, it obviously wasn't going to work. < 3
Date: 11/03/15 08:04 pm Title: Part Eight
"It's twitching?" HAHAHAHA, oh my god, I loved that. I laughed so hard at it. And Bill's "Does it feel like an asshole to you?" was perfect.
Oh, Bill seems to be opening a little and it also seems like Tom is growing fond of him?
Author's Response: I'm so happy you're able to find the dribbles of humour within this, I know there isn't much. Bill had been opening up and Tom had grown fond of him, it was all going well, wasn't it? Stupid Tom < / 3
Date: 11/03/15 05:45 pm Title: Part Six
I just started reading this a few hours ago, and I can't stop!
I must say that I felt like I had read the first chapter before. It reminded me a lot of another story posted here, which is by the way abandoned, but it was just in the first chapter.
Oh, lord! I had to leave a comment on this chapter because that grinding scene was so damn hot! Holy shit, it's been a while since I read something as hot as this, I'm not kidding. So, thank you and congrats for doing a fantastic job with it!
I'll go check the rest of the chapters now! :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you've given this story a go (and I'm working on your reviews backwards, forgive me.) Oh dear, I really do hate it when I write something that sounds similar to another piece of work, but I can honestly say that I haven't read anything like my first chapter, but I would be interested in checking that out? AND DRY HUMPING/GRINDING, YES, MY FAVE. And smutty scenes happen to be my forte as much as I hate writing it, lmao. I hope you've enjoyed the rest < 3
Date: 11/03/15 04:37 am Title: Part One
Please update omg i love this so much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like this < 3
Date: 11/03/15 04:37 am Title: Part One
Please update omg i love this so much.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like this < 3
Date: 11/02/15 05:52 pm Title: Part Ten
Awh Poor Tom I feel so sorry for him. I'd hate to be in prison it seems so lonely and Id love to write more but I have to get up supppeeeerrrr early because I stupidly left some of my school clothes at school (I'm not actually sure how it happened) and it means I have to get in early 😭😭😭 loved it tho
Author's Response: It's fine, darling. Thank you for reading and reviewing, as always < 3
Date: 11/02/15 01:10 pm Title: Part Ten
oh poor tom D:
Author's Response: Thank you ^~^ < 3