Date: 09/10/15 04:18 am Title: Chapter 1
YAY! Twin birthday smut!!! This was awesome. hehe. Thank you for writing something I was really in the mood for tonight. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 09/05/15 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
amazing oneshot!!!! :') I really liked the first lines hahaha poor Tom, he actually did look like the lame boyfriend hahaha but oh he was so cute in the video and I have to say that I hated Bill for those few seconds, like COME ON, GO HUG YOUR BROTHER YOU MORON! anyway, I guess the hug was a bit forced? but kinda cute! ...
the birthday blowjob!!! yes!! :'D Tom deserved it!
this one shot goes straight to my favs!! :')
Author's Response: Hahah, thank you so much! OMG I KNOW RIGHT I WANTED A FULL ON TWIN EMBRACE MAYBE EVEN A KISS. Is that too much to ask. Thanks for a lovely review!
Date: 09/05/15 03:50 am Title: Chapter 1
this was a good story!
Author's Response: thank you!
Date: 09/04/15 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
:)
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Date: 09/03/15 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Amazing ^^
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 09/03/15 03:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
That video was super cute! And so was your story. Tom was sweet and a bit silly when he was embarrased about the vid. The whole thing was very intensive and I loved it! You're really good writer, and I hope you write more stories. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm sure I'll write more, I could never stop writing twins!
Date: 09/03/15 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
What the hell kind of shoes did Bill wear?! He isn't usually that much taller... xD
Yay, someone actually posted something birthdayish! :D I almost thought there would be no birthday twincest this year at all. I'm mean, there were only 2 posts and neither was particularly birthdayish... *pout* So I'm very glad you did this!
You write good smut, whether you acknowledge that or not *thumbs up* And smuff; insecure Tom is adorable!
Would have loved to see the bit of Tom blowing Bill written out, too, I like them being completely equal (even in bed), but this is still going to my favourites the minute I finish writing this ;)
Author's Response: omg I know right?? Glad I could fulfill your birthday needs. Twins always deserve some fanfiction attention for their birthday. Aw, thank you so much, I'm glad you think so (even if I don't).
Date: 09/03/15 03:16 am Title: Chapter 1
THANK YOU SERIOUSLY THANK YOU! Somebody needed to write about that video because it was so freaking funny! Lol it was so awkward! Omg and Bill's hand on his hip wtf?
This was really nice, Bill owed Tom that bday bj! Haha
Loves a86;a039;a86;a039;a86;a039;a86;a039;
Author's Response: Hahahah I know all COME AND EMBRACE ME BROTHER WHILE I STAND AND LOOK MAJESTIC. Thank you so much for such a wonderful review!
Date: 09/03/15 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
Love that Bill would notice how good he looked. Haha! Hope this is how the day ended ;)
Author's Response: Haha I hope so too!
Date: 09/02/15 11:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
Birthday sex!!!! I loves it! *wipes up puddles of drool*
I literally spent all of yesterday singing all the versions of Happy Birthday that I know. My sister officially branded me "obsessed".
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 09/02/15 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Haha Tom is such a tease. Anyway yes!! This was amazing obviously. I like how insecure Tom was about their video. Cute silly boy. Anyway I'm bad at reviewing smut but good yes well done. *thumbs up*
Author's Response: Thaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaanks pooface
Date: 09/02/15 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
What an awesome birthday! It was funny to watch the video and see Bill posing even while he was hugging Tom. I wonder if Tom really was embarrassed about it. Oh well, I guess we'll never know. Great birthday story Em. Loved it! :)
Author's Response: Haha I know, such a poser. Thank you so much!
Date: 09/02/15 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
okay that video was just too adorkable! bill did sorta look he was just tolerating the big brother hug. and i'm sure this is exactly how he apologized!
Author's Response: Hahah I'm also sure ;) Thank you!
Date: 09/02/15 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
a86;a039;a86;a039;a86;a039; having a shit day at work but got to read this on a break. THANK YOU 😘
Author's Response: aw, thank YOU <3