Date: 09/23/15 07:23 am Title: ...at McDonalds
Oh yes do that please! But this time in Tom's POV. that would be cool. Btw, great story! Keep on writing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! ^^ Yeah, right now I'm planning on four to five little scenes, half of them from Tom's POV and a last one, a little longer, with the POV switching between the twins. ATM I have another oneshot in my head, but as soon as I have both time to write and inspiration for this series, I'll add another bit ;)
Date: 09/07/15 04:02 pm Title: ...at McDonalds
This was really cute and I would love it if you continued this as a series! I'll look forward to it if you decide to make them.
Author's Response: So happy that someone is looking out for it! Ideas are a bit muddled right now, but hopefully I'll have time to think after the challenge... Thx for reviewing :)
Date: 09/02/15 10:10 am Title: ...at McDonalds
This is the type of one-shot that leaves you with a smile :)
Author's Response: Glad I managed that :) Thx for reviewing ^^
Date: 09/02/15 07:38 am Title: ...at McDonalds
This is just lovely! I really like how you describe the scene, and the moment when Bill realizes he and Tom act like a couple in a certain way. It reminds me sort of an impresionist painting, -it catches the best of a really short moment :)
Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks. I don't particularly like impressionists, but I think they need to have great skill, so I'm flattered ^^ Any preferences for the next little glimpse of realisation? Thx for reviewing :)
Date: 09/01/15 08:21 pm Title: ...at McDonalds
This was an awesome little story. I loved the older couple and how Bill realized that Tom did the same thing. I would love to see more. What if they were walking down the street and something dropped from above. Tom could pull Bill out of the way and Bill might realize... Up to you to decide. :)
Author's Response: Oh yay, finally someone actually leaves a suggestion =D though I think it calls more for Tom realizing something... Hmm... I'll probably only work with it after the FIA challenge deadline, I doubt I'll have time before. Thanks so much for reviewing :)
Date: 09/01/15 04:51 pm Title: ...at McDonalds
This is so cute d84;
Author's Response: Glad you like it ^^ Thx for reviewing :)
Date: 09/01/15 02:30 pm Title: ...at McDonalds
Ahhh this is cute and I love the concept! I totally think you should do more. I always kind of find it interesting how Bill bemoans being lonely and wanting his 'big love' when he in fact already has Tom which is a relationship most people would kill for. So I like that you are taking this on! Also the twins totally act like a couple, in so many ways.
Author's Response: Oh I'm so happy to get a review from you, thx ^^ I know right, a twin like Tom or Bill would be great. :D No wait, then the other twin would be lonely, that's not acceptable :,( Anyway, while I love those stories where Bill is so in love and at some point Tom realises that he feels the same (or vice versa), I kind of started wondering how they noticed the feelings lately... Be warned, I might pester you for examples of couple-y twin behaviour if I get no suggestions, hope you won't mind too much ;)
Date: 09/01/15 02:25 pm Title: ...at McDonalds
Cute :) And yes, I would like to see that like series of oneshots!
Author's Response: Thanks. Great, now I just need to figure out how to continue... xD Thx for reviewing! :)
Date: 09/01/15 11:57 am Title: ...at McDonalds
I would love a series of these! The twins discovering their feelings for each other is one of my favorite things ever 💜
Author's Response: Good to know there's some interest :)rnrnYeah, it's mine, too. <3 I don't have it planned out yet, though. Probably a couple of short scenes like these, some from Tom's POV, too. Any suggestions for the next one? Or the conclusion for that matter? xD