Date: 03/08/10 11:02 pm Title: When Can I See You Again?
Sad but beautifully told.
Date: 07/22/08 02:01 am Title: When Can I See You Again?
Awww poor Bill =[
Tom sucks -_-
Date: 06/13/08 12:16 am Title: When Can I See You Again?
This is amazingly well written!
It's really sad though, but it's a great idea for a story.
"When can my heart beat again? You are my the beat of my heart!" -I bawled!
Date: 05/19/08 04:10 pm Title: When Can I See You Again?
sad story :'/
I like the story ^^
Date: 04/17/08 09:34 pm Title: When Can I See You Again?
wow. that was amazing.
and sad.
are the lyrics your own or from a song?
Date: 04/06/08 09:19 am Title: When Can I See You Again?
lonely bill...
Date: 03/23/08 10:51 am Title: When Can I See You Again?
God, so sad, and so well written. I loved it!
x
Author's Response: thank you :)
Date: 03/23/08 04:58 am Title: When Can I See You Again?
Owww :( you made me wonder... o.o what if... o.o while getting older... o.o omfg. Just continue (if you get a beta those little mistakes wouldn't kill the chapter ;)
Author's Response: yea i know, i neglect to do the beta thing though i know its needed
Date: 03/23/08 12:07 am Title: When Can I See You Again?
what song was that, by the way?
Author's Response: when can i see you again by babyface
Date: 03/23/08 12:05 am Title: When Can I See You Again?
motherfuck.
i think that last line actually broke my heart. this was so sad and now im sad and i feel like writing some angst but it wouldnt match this XD god, favourited.