Date: 09/20/15 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 14: Sick
Oh my god...Tom is such an ass! He better get ready to be a father real quick because soon he won't have just one child!
Author's Response: Yes, Tom totally is an ass, Let's hope Tom is ready for being a dad when his second child arrived, hopefully even earlier, but you'll know soon enough :) Thank you for reviewing.
Date: 09/20/15 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 12: Out for dinner
It was a sweet conversation between them. :) its good that Tom has got someone to talk to!
Author's Response: Yes, that's one thing for sure, because Tom really needs that :)
Date: 09/20/15 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 13: Tom gets a surprise
Figured I should leave a review here too, since there weren't any. And I think it's a shame because this story is so good!
Author's Response: Awh, thank you, that's so sweet of you :)
Date: 09/20/15 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 14: Sick
Just read it all in one sitting. I am really enjoying this. ^_^ You're doing a good job, keep going! :D
Author's Response: Awh, thank you so much, you just made me smile :) I really appriciate this :)
Date: 09/20/15 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 14: Sick
Again, I'm sorry that I don't review that often, but I always read everything. And I really like this story, and I'm sad because of Layla, hope Tom is going to become a good father, or at least a good person, at first. Anyways, put something soon so I can read....:D
Author's Response: It's okay, I'm glad that you're at least reading it :) Even though I'm happy when you do give me a review, like now :) And yes poor Layla :( Someday Tom will be a good father, there must be something to make Tom's fatherly feelings start running xD I try to update a new chapter soon :) When I'm lucky I can get something written before Wednesday, and if not it will probably be up on Friday, but I can't make any promises, because I don't have the next chapter planned out yet, but the same was with this chapter and I wrote it in 30 minutes, so you never know :) But I do hate to keep my readers waiting, so yeah you will be able to read more soon :) Thanks you for your review :)
Date: 09/14/15 03:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: The beginning
I didn't review till now, but I read it from the beginning. I like this story and I think that something great will happen between Tom and Bill. And I'm happy that Tom wanted to speak with Bill about being gay. Put some new parts soon.... :D
Author's Response: It's okay, I'm happy you're giving me a review now :) And I'm glad you like this story :) And yes, something great will happen between them for sure, I don't know when yet though. I do have the ideas for this story, but that's not enough to know when it will happen :$ And yes, Bill is the only gay person Tom knows, so he did put his hate for Bill aside to talk about it with him :D I didn't write the next chapter yet, but I am free tomorrow afternoon, so I will start to write on the next chapter tomorrow, so I hope I'll get it finished tomorrow, but I can promise one thing, it will be up before the end of the week :) Thank you for your review :)
Author's Response: It's okay, I'm happy you're giving me a review now :) And I'm glad you like this story :) And yes, something great will happen between them for sure, I don't know when yet though. I do have the ideas for this story, but that's not enough to know when it will happen :$ And yes, Bill is the only gay person Tom knows, so he did put his hate for Bill aside to talk about it with him :D I didn't write the next chapter yet, but I am free tomorrow afternoon, so I will start to write on the next chapter tomorrow, so I hope I'll get it finished tomorrow, but I can promise one thing, it will be up before the end of the week :) Thank you for your review :)
Author's Response: It's okay, I'm happy you're giving me a review now :) And I'm glad you like this story :) And yes, something great will happen between them for sure, I don't know when yet though. I do have the ideas for this story, but that's not enough to know when it will happen :$ And yes, Bill is the only gay person Tom knows, so he did put his hate for Bill aside to talk about it with him :D I didn't write the next chapter yet, but I am free tomorrow afternoon, so I will start to write on the next chapter tomorrow, so I hope I'll get it finished tomorrow, but I can promise one thing, it will be up before the end of the week :) Thank you for your review :)
Author's Response: It's okay, I'm happy you're giving me a review now :) And I'm glad you like this story :) And yes, something great will happen between them for sure, I don't know when yet though. I do have the ideas for this story, but that's not enough to know when it will happen :$ And yes, Bill is the only gay person Tom knows, so he did put his hate for Bill aside to talk about it with him :D I didn't write the next chapter yet, but I am free tomorrow afternoon, so I will start to write on the next chapter tomorrow, so I hope I'll get it finished tomorrow, but I can promise one thing, it will be up before the end of the week :) Thank you for your review :)
Date: 09/13/15 01:45 am Title: Chapter 11:The sex scene, this time for real
Hmmm...interesting. I'm curious about what Tom wants to talk to Bill about.
Author's Response: You will find out in the next chapter :) I didn't start writing on it, but I will this afternoon and I will post it as soon as I finish the next chapter :) Thanks for your review :)
Date: 09/12/15 03:45 pm Title: Chapter 11:The sex scene, this time for real
Ted, you suck dude!!!! ¬_¬'
Did Bill prepared himself first? 'cause that was way tooo fast!
Author's Response: I agree with you that it was way too fast, which is partly Ted's fault, because Bill and Tom couldn't take it slow, because Ted said so, but for a part it was also mine fault, because I'm very bad in writing sex scenes: $ I'm going to practice on them though :) But let's say that Tom prepared Bill enough with 3 of his fingers, it probably did hurt more in the beginning for Bill than it normally would, but in the end he did enjoy it, at least as much as he can enjoy it with all the camera's around and people watching, it was after all the first time both of them had sex in front of a camera :) I just realized while writing this that I probably should write more details :$ But good, thanks for your review :)
Date: 09/06/15 03:19 pm Title: Chapter 9: Day off Part 1
omg its was short :( but good I can't wait to read the next chapter.
xx
Author's Response: Sorry that the chapters are kind of short, I'm just very bad in writing longer chapters :$ and tomorrow I start school again, so with school and all it will be hard to make it work, or I just post one time a week, maybe that will work, but I'm probably to impatient for it :$ Who knows, maybe one day I'll make it work, I'll do my best :) Next chapter is already written and will be up on Thursday :) Thank you for your review xxx
Date: 08/24/15 07:21 am Title: Chapter 5: Bill's complaints
Omg! I'm so eager for the next chapters, this ideea is so good! Love this, I'm looking forward the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) The next chapter will probably be up on Thursday(earlier if I get some more chapters finished before then) I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far :)
Date: 08/23/15 11:44 am Title: Chapter 5: Bill's complaints
😂 love it
Author's Response: Thank you ;)
Date: 08/20/15 06:25 pm Title: Chapter 1: The beginning
I am quite intrigued.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Date: 08/20/15 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 4: The first scenes
I like it :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I try to improve my ways of writing while working on this story, so I hope you will like this story even more later on :)
Date: 07/31/15 09:10 am Title: Chapter 2: Tom's script
And I thought that Bill was the complicated one xD
Author's Response: Not in this story, lol xD Thank you for commenting :)
Date: 07/29/15 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1: The beginning
This is good start!
Author's Response: Thank you :) I wasn't really sure about it myself, so comments like this are making me very happy :) I've a few chapters written already. I've decided to post 2 times a week, so that I have time to write more chapters in between :) Hopefully the next one will be up tomorrow :)