Date: 07/10/15 02:47 am Title: Another Story of Bitter Pills of Fate
This chapter.
Seriously was something you'd see out of a horror movie, like Texas Chainsaw Massacre or something.
When you mentioned their mom coming in I was half expecting her to start screaming and losing her shit, not being almost calm and unphased by saying "I thought I told you not to play with your food."
KEEP IT UP!!!
Date: 07/10/15 02:43 am Title: The Beginning
As I was sitting here reading this, I could feel the cramped feeling of the club and smell all the orders that were swirling around.
It's really well written and kept me wanting more and to get to know the characters more too, I think its fitting how you had the twins described in a mysterious way.
Author's Response: Aww thank you very much. I honestly tried in my mixed up head. This story was SUPER SUPER important to me and I wanted it to be a certain way!