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Reviewer: ElyaTranshy2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/15 05:32 am Title: Chapter 7

This was my second favorite chapter so far. :3

Author's Response: Glad you liked it and even happier that you decided to leave a review...<3

Reviewer: ElyaTranshy2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/15 05:31 am Title: Chapter 15

I'm just sitting here blushing like an idiot, awwing to every sweet moment and 'holy shit'ting in every sexy moment. :) Love the chapter.

Author's Response: hahahaha then we are two because I blushed while writing the sexy moments :-) Really good to know that I got the feelings across. thanks for such a sweet review

Reviewer: princess26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/15/15 01:15 am Title: Chapter 15

Aw. So much sweetness.
So sad Bill was hurting himself, but I love what Tom told him about wanting him to wake up feeling loved and not hurt :')
And Bill replying he didn't know how, right through the feels.
Good job :) can't wait for your next one :)

Author's Response: Awww thank you for your kind review :-) I am glad you liked this chapter. Its not easy when you got issues but they got each other so they got more than many other people have.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/15 11:46 pm Title: Chapter 15

Lovely

Author's Response: thank you so much <3

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/15 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 15

Awh, they're so cute together, and their making love scene was amazing :) It's sad that Bill used to use sex to get hurt :( But I hope from now on it will always be making love with Tom :) Great chapter again :D

Author's Response: I am really happy that you liked it :-) Yes now they both can heal in each others arms :-) but its not over yet <3

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/15 03:12 pm Title: Chapter 15

Beautiful! I have no words.... Just, beautiful!!!

Author's Response: awww thank you dear <3

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/15 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 15

i swear, i love the slow soft making love just as much as the hard and fast sex!

Author's Response: I am glad you like it. I have such major issues with writing sex scenes because I am never content with how they turn out. However I am happy that I could get some of the feelings across :-)

Reviewer: ElyaTranshy2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/14/15 05:41 am Title: Chapter 14

UPDATE PLEASE I AM BEGGING YOUUUU.

Author's Response: sorry it took so long this time but new chapter will be up tonight :-)

Reviewer: ariana123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/15 02:49 am Title: Chapter 14

Omg I can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: thank you for reviewing, next chapter will be up soon <3

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/12/15 02:41 am Title: Chapter 14

How romantic. I need a Tom in my life!

Author's Response: hahahaha who doesnt? :-)

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/15 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 14

omg i can practically smell the romance in this chapter!

Author's Response: that means I succeeded...yay <3 thanks for reviewing dear <3

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/15 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 14

Awh, I love their relationship and that they're going on their first date *_* Great chapter, like always :D

Author's Response: Thank you dear <3 yeah I thought these two need a really good first date because they missed out so much.

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/15 11:49 am Title: Chapter 14

Right now I'm jealous! I want that date with this Tom too!!! :D

Author's Response: omg me too :-D I am actually a Bill girl but lately with every Tokio Hotel Tv I am like omg Tom is so hot its unbeliavable <3 yeah and who doesnt want such a suprise...sigh...

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/15 03:34 am Title: Chapter 13

I'm still so happy for them! I love how they can't be without other one now. They have to make up for a lost time... Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: thank you for your kind review <3 and yes they have been so long without each other so now they just long to be close...dont worry more is on the way :-)

Reviewer: princess26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/15 12:01 am Title: Chapter 13

Aw. I love the dessert story, it's so sweet. Somehow I think that's fairly accurate in real life. :)

I can't wait to read more and see their relationship build up again. They've missed out on so much from each other

Author's Response: Hahaha exactly right?! I think even irl Tom can barely resist when Bill wants something. I thought about the many times Bill punches Tom in the shoulder when he is all excited and Tom almost never punches back. Its the sweetest thing ever <3 rnYes they did and they have to rebuild the trust and get to know each other five years later...

Reviewer: LoveSuju_4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/15 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 13

Awww this history is so sweet and beautiful, I love it! ^^

Author's Response: aww thank you that makes me really happy <3 Its such a good motivation for writing to get such sweet reviews like yours.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/15 07:12 pm Title: Chapter 13

Great chapter again :D

Author's Response: thank you so much! <3

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/15 07:04 pm Title: Chapter 13

wow. sweet and sexy all rolled up in one. tom wanting to share everything with bill even when they weren't close just makes me melt!

Author's Response: thank you my dear I am glad you like this new chapter as well. Yeah its like confirmation for Bill that Tom really never stopped loving him. I thought he needed that. Have a nice weekend!

Reviewer: princess26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/15 10:08 pm Title: Chapter 12

How sweet that Tom wants to repair the twin bond. Idk that sounds sweet and heartbreaking all at once. But they love each other so much, it might be easy as breathing or really hard since they're different from 5yrs ago.

Well, so much for waiting. But what can we expect when Bill shows up in boxers and Tom's been deprived for 5yrs from his brother lol

Author's Response: Poor Tomi I mean Bill in boxers who would not go crayz? :-D ok different topic hahahaharnand as for Tom this was a necessary step in his healing process to accept his feelings instead of blocking them out.

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/15 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 12

I guess they will have to get to know each other again as brother sometime later because now they have more importand thins to do :DDD

Author's Response: hahaha yeah I guess you have to have priorities :-D thanks for reviewing <3

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