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Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/15 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow they were so close when they were younger, I'm still wondering what happened to make them part ways. At least they're taking baby steps in the right direction, first texting, now this skype call with their friends, and next the music thing, at least when Tom keeps his promise and really texts Bill about it :) But the hardest part still has to come, and that will be the talk about what happened between them and that talk will show if they can work it out someday, or that they will live apart forever (Which I don't hope of course) Great chapter again :)

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review, that always maked my day. I am happy you liked this chapter as well. I can promise you that you will find out what happend to them :-)

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/15 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 5

Good. I was reading the whole skype call almost breathlessly with open mouth... My heart was aching when Bill and Tom communicated to each other, even just with their eyes. I hope Tom is going to keep that promise and send a message to Bill!

Author's Response: I am glad you liked it. Even though I am the one writing it my heart ached to. The twins apart- too sad. Why does my mind come up with these things? :-D haha

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/15 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 4

Georg is smart :D
Can't wait for that skype call!

Author's Response: Our Georg is a smart man, yes thats right :-) skype call coming up next. thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: elvisfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/15 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 4

*steps out of the lurker corner*

so yeah, this story sucked me in from the beginning, and i have no idea why i haven't reviewed before now.

anyhoo, the thought of the twins not being close makes my heart ache, and of course i'm dying to know what could be strong enough to drive them apart. although i think there may be some misunderstanding involved, cuz i got the impression a chapter or two ago that they both seemed to be blaming themselves.

so yeah, i'm curious enough to continue reading, and sorry for being silent. i know how...slightly frustrating that can be.

Author's Response: Hello silent reader :-) haha no its perfectly fine to just read. I am like that myself sometimes. But I am of course superhappy that you decided to leave a review. Glad to hear that you like the story. And keep on reading because you might just be right with your guess :-)

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/15 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 4

I don't mind that this chapter is a little shorter, I understand the reason for it, and there was still enough for me to read xD Georg was so right about the fact that it would be harder to convince Tom, but he also knew how to convince Tom after a while xD I still feel sorry for the guys, it's going to be hard to see eachother again, even though it's just via skype. I'm so curious about what will happen next :)

Author's Response: Oh my I am a little anxious of writing it bc there will be so much emotions...but they need it thats for sure :-)

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/15 01:14 am Title: Chapter 3

So, I may or may not have been crying/laughing at their texting. >.>
Loved this chapter and really looking forward to more.

Author's Response: thank you for taking time for reading and reviewing, really means a lot to me

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/25/15 01:06 am Title: Chapter 2

*Grabs kleenex* On to next chapter...

Author's Response: hahaha :-) have them ready ...

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/15 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm glad that they had contact again, even when it was just texting, and Tom still joking after all those years apart xD I hope they can work it out, it can't be that bad what happened between them, right? Okay it seems to be bad enough for them to part their ways, but I guess it's not bad enough for them to not work it out, I mean their texts were so normal :) But I can be wrong with the things I just said xD great chapter again :)

Author's Response: I went for a normal approach on the texts. I mean if I hadnt spoken to someone important for years I wouldnt start with the heavy stuff right away I would keep it casual just to see what happend. But we are all different and such situations are never easy, real or fictional :-)rnrnthanks for reading and reviewing I am so happy you did.

Reviewer: Deca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/15 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

aww at least a little hope now =)

Author's Response: Hope dies last right? :-) thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/15 05:00 pm Title: Chapter 3

Alright, I'm back. But where to even start? This whole chapter was perfection.

First, I love how Tom called Georg for help, and I loved even more how Geo decided to tell Tom what's going on and make him face the truth. Hell, he has to know how much his brother is suffering, it's so important. I don't care what happened between them, no matter who did what, Tom has to know that his brother is in pain. Damn, I'm crying again.

I'm so, so happy Tom texted Bill back, finally, and their small conversation was so sweet. It's surely a step, even though the road to them finding each other again might be long and bumpy. I just really hope they can do it, because even if this is just made up it hurts way too much to imagine our twins like this.

Again, thank you so much for writing this, and please don't let us wait for too long for next chapter. I need to know what will happen.

Author's Response: First of all: thank you for your support. I was so discourages before you did beta read the first chapter, I really wasnt sure if I should post this even though I had this story in me for months.rnrnAnd yes I totally agree with you. Even if its just fictional the twins apart...it even breaks my heart and I am the one writing it.rnrnIt was easy to write the part where Geo was involved. He is such a wonderful kind person I just imagined what the real Geo would do. rnrnThank you for your kind review and no the wait wont be too long because this story is pouring out of me its totally crazy. Maybe because I waited far to long before writing this.rnrnHave a nice day <3

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/15 02:13 pm Title: Chapter 3

Still the same pain and sadness... But also a little bit of hope now :)
How many chapters are you planning?
Oh, and I forgot to tell you - I love your banner!

Author's Response: Oh I havent an exact number but its gonna be around 20 I guess...:-D I dont want to rush things. Thank you so much thats good to hear bc I really have no experience with doing banners :-)

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/15 01:10 pm Title: Chapter 3

I'm so filled of emotions right now that I don't even know what to say or do or anything! So I'm gonna go out for a walk and then I'll come back and leave you a proper review, I just wanted to tell you that I fucking love this and THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing and sharing this story. < 3

Author's Response: OMG now I am super emotional because of your review. I am smiling like an idiot here. Wow this is just...thank you so so much!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/24/15 10:59 am Title: Chapter 2

Awh man, you made me cry again. I feel so sorry for them, for Bill especially, and I really need to know what happened to them, so badly!

Come on Tom, answer the text message :(

This is such a great start of a story, I really hope you will update soon because I need more of this!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review. I really love your stories thats why it means a lot to me that you like this one :-) rnrnYes and update will be online soon ( as in tonight) which means my soon not Bills soon :-D

Reviewer: jumbomarshmellows Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/15 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 2

or, that text could totally work.. haha. a lot better than how i message people.

Can't wait 'til the next chapter. super excited for it actually. X3

Author's Response: Hell yeah if any text would work then yours :-D You dont have to wait long, the chapters are literally pouring out of me. Thank you for your kind reviews :-)

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/15 05:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

Awh, poor Bill, I'm curious about what exactly did happen between them. Great chapter again :)

Author's Response: thank you, your reviwes make me so happy :-)

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/15 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

I feel so sorry for them both and for everything what has happened although I don't know anything about it... I wanted almost cry while I was reading that... :(

Author's Response: Its horrible I know :-( Everything will be revealed in time

Reviewer: Deca Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/15 05:04 am Title: Chapter 1

Interesting start! I'm very curious of next one

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving a review :-) I am glad you liked it

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/23/15 02:35 am Title: Chapter 1

I really like this, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: thanks so much! The wait is almost over posting the next one ASAP

Reviewer: tokitaalien Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/15 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 1

Poor them I wonder what happened please up date soon though story looks awesome 👍🏽👍🏽

Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review, made me really happy. I plan on updating very often, I waited to write this for month. Now its just bursting out of me😍

Reviewer: jumbomarshmellows Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/22/15 05:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

He should write: I have a ton of shit for you, dick. I even bought you a cap.

But then again, that's how I message people I miss XD I'm actually very interested where this is all gonna go. I hope you update soon

Author's Response: Lol thats hilarious😂 imagine getting such a text... Epic😂 thanks for your review next chapter will be online tonight!

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