Date: 11/22/15 06:10 pm Title: Who are you to me?
Amazing chapter :) Bill really should be his normal self again, but I guess he's on the right way now :)
Date: 09/20/15 05:29 pm Title: Willing to wait, willing to stay
I really hope Bill will realize who Tom really is soon, so they can have a good conversation, and hopefully get back together :) And can't Jasper just leave? Tom and Bill were finally alone, and than he has to disturb that again, of course :( But great chapter :)
Date: 09/13/15 05:55 pm Title: Come Back to Me
First it was Tom who couldn't remember Bill and now it's the other way around xD but it's clear that Bill still loves Tom, even without remembering :) Bill should stop sleeping around though :( He only one he needs is Tom :$ I hoped Bill would go to the after party, but he didn't :( I hope Tom and Bill meet again soon, for a longer amount of time. I can't wait for you to post the next chapter. Good written chapter :)
Date: 09/06/15 05:35 pm Title: Rescue me
I hope Tom can make Bill feel better when he's back, they belong together. Great chapter :)
Date: 07/19/15 08:14 pm Title: The Cabin in the Woods
😭😭😭😭😭😭😨😨😨😨😱😱😱😱😱😱 HOLY FUCKIN HELL !!!!!!! I wanna kill Andreas I hate him poor Billy I hope bushido dies I hate him too it's all his fault and finally that dumbass Tom remembered and I swear if he doesn't save bill I will kill him too
Date: 07/19/15 06:23 pm Title: The Cabin in the Woods
Wow, this was a hard chapter to read, I didn't mind that Bushido got beaten up, because I just don't like him, for me he's one of the things that is keeping Tom and Bill away from eachother to start a serious relationship. But the part where Andreas raped Bill, it just hurts to read that, oh God, poor Bill :( And also the way Andreas is talking, it's even scary, he really sounds like a pshyco you also see in horrormovies O_o And then Tom getting his memories back of him and Bill, I guess that's the only good thing happening in this chapter, because that will make it easier for Tom and Bill to talk about the things that happened, and things might get clearer for the both of them :) But good, great chapter :)
Date: 07/19/15 12:08 pm Title: Someone's Jealous
IF FUCKIN SOMEONE DOESNT TELL TOM THAT HES THE ASSHOLE THAT HURT BILL IN THE PAST I WILL FUCKIN EXPLODE !!!!!!!!!!!! SERIOULY SOMEONE ANYBODY JUST TEEELLLL HIIIIMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07/19/15 12:06 pm Title: Someone's Jealous
oooommmmggggg!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! HES GONNA MURDER BILL AND HIDE THE BODY DONT GO BILLLLL DONT GO OMG THIS IS SO NERVE WRECKING I MUST KNOW ASAP WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN !!!!!!!!!!! *CRIES AND BITES HER NAILS*
Date: 07/19/15 11:10 am Title: Someone's Jealous
I'm scared of Bushido and I really want for Tom to know the truth about their past!
Date: 06/24/15 06:04 pm Title: VIP Room
I want to answer Bill's question from the first part of the chapter first. So, Bill, you cheated on Anis because Tom was your first real love, probably it's even true love between you two, and if things happened diffrently in the past you two would still be together now, probably also the reason why faith made them meet again xD And Andreas is kind of stupid, I mean when Bushido and Bill break up because of his plans, Bill will probably end up with Tom after a while. Bill clearly only feels friendship for Andreas, and love can't be forced, but I guess Andreas is too obsessed with Bill that he doesn't realize that. I guess this is the first story in English on which I give those long comments, but that's because this story just gives me so many thoughts xD Great chapter again :)
Author's Response: I seriously appreciate all the comments you are giving me. It makes me happy that someone is reading it and making some points on it as well. I wanna thank you so much on that, hunny! <3 The fact that you give time in commenting gives me happiness ^_^
Date: 06/24/15 08:57 am Title: VIP Room
I'm so happy because you very quickly to the new part!
Date: 06/23/15 05:01 pm Title: It's all fake lines
Great chapter again! :) And oh God, Andreas seems to be crazy O_o And did Bushido hit Bill in the past when he thought Bill cheated on him? If I understood that part right, I would've already left him back then, but maybe I'm just a little bit stronger than Bill is in this story, and if it was only once, even though in my opinion you should never hit someone you Love, but okay :) And Tom acted like an ass, I understand that it's easier to act like he hates Bill, but his heart will always love Bill, you can never lie to your heart xD And the film is bringing back memories, even though Tom doesn't understand the small memories he has (yet) It's a cute film, and it would be even better if it was real xD
Date: 06/22/15 05:06 pm Title: A Rebound?
I guess they're both a little bit confused about their feelings at the moment. And I guess Tom is really using Andrej as a replacement for Bill, and is just denying that to himself, and maybe it's also a little bit of revenge towards Bill? But great chapter :)
Author's Response: Actually, you got it right! Hahahaha XD Thank you for the reviews, lovely :)
Date: 06/22/15 01:23 pm Title: A Rebound?
I don't like this situation at all...
Author's Response: Oh :(
Date: 06/22/15 12:25 pm Title: A Rebound?
Hm ... I loved the chapter till Tom said, he is going on a date with andrej.
Maybe you should put AndrejxTom on the Mainpairing, not as a Sidepairing. A Sidepairing is barly written in the story.
I have to admit, that I think I dont read this story anymore. Maybe I take a look later, but at the moment it's too much AndrejxTom for me. I dont like that. And its worse as usally, because I absolutly not like Andrej in this story, and even Tom is not much sympatic in this story. He just acts like a child, not like an adult - even not like an angry or hurt adult.
Also it's getting a bit unrealstic - too much drama, without really 'drama you can feel'. There is drama and there is drama and there is drama, but everything is changing so fast. Just .... about two dramapoints that goes deeper, would have been better.
But its your Story and it's absolutly okay.
Maybe I take a look later, in a few or more chapters. Then I might like that story more again. We'll see.
Author's Response: I have indicated that it's a side pairing..so there would still be a pairing. If I change it to main pairing, then the story should revolve around their relationship, which is not what I wrote. So, yeah. I may have forgotten to check the 'drama' , oops! my bad :D . I think the drama isn't too much... There's drama in their past and drama in their present. And it's not all drama...it's conflicts... rnBut thank you so much for reading my story. You might not just appreciate it as I do. But thank you for the reviews/comments. It helps me a lot. :)
Date: 06/21/15 05:46 pm Title: Let's sing the past
I didn't expect it to be a dream, lol xD And it's sad that Tom can't remember that he was the guy, because it makes him say the wrong things sometimes :( But he does remember that there was a person, right? So that means that Tom maybe will be able to remember everything someday, or? And Bill, he needs to know Tom's feelings from the past, from right after Bill left, and what happened till the carcrash, but he will never know as long as Tom can't remember anything, or is there someone else who knows? Yeah, this David guy knows, but he is only from the past, so he can't tell anything either. Maybe I'm thinking to much and just have to wait for more chapters and read more xD Great chapter again :)
Date: 06/21/15 04:02 pm Title: Let's sing the past
Good chapter ^^ hope tom will cry when he knows, that bill has a boyfriend! he is just still kind of an ass ...
Date: 06/21/15 12:43 pm Title: Let's sing the past
Bill should tell to Tom everything...
Date: 06/21/15 09:24 am Title: Clueless
I dont get it ... Tom fucks Andrej, the next day he dated him and the day after he openly admits, that he wants bill and wants to revenge the guy who hurted it, while he doing it at the same time with andrej Tom really is a child, and he is really silly ..., I still dont like him at the moment. But the chapter was really good.