Date: 05/20/15 11:35 am Title: “Dates sound fun, we should ask are parents to take us on one.”
this was sweet :)
Author's Response: Thank you. 💜
Date: 05/19/15 02:17 pm Title: “Dates sound fun, we should ask are parents to take us on one.”
Two things you should watch out for though are technical errors (grammar, punctuation, and spelling mistakes - a beta would be a big help) and continuity problems (how smoothly you transition between scenes and stuff). These can pretty much be fixed with experience so keep on writing! I hope you don't think I'm too critical. I really do love your stories. :)
Author's Response: I know. I really need to watch that, but at the moment I'm so freaking bored. I am on 'study leave' and I am so sick of studying for my exams (I have physics and Biology tomorrow which is going to kill me) I can't even proof read my work. Its so frustrating all I can think of is how a business is structured. I don't think your critical :) it's true. I think at some point (not today) that I will go over my work and I will find tons of mistakes that (Hopefully) I can edit. Thats really sweet thanks :) I have tons of stuff written but idk if I will post it (Theirs this one story I've been working on for like ages and I can't get past a certain point I can't even begin to explain my frustration with it...) but thankyou that made my day :)
Date: 05/19/15 02:14 pm Title: “Dates sound fun, we should ask are parents to take us on one.”
This was so adorable! I like how you showed them at all those different ages.
Author's Response: Aww thank you <3 <3 <3
Date: 05/19/15 01:17 pm Title: “Dates sound fun, we should ask are parents to take us on one.”
awwwwww!!! so fucking good!" haha love it!!!
Author's Response: Aww thanks 💜
Date: 05/19/15 01:14 pm Title: “Dates sound fun, we should ask are parents to take us on one.”
Wonderful story. You should get a beta however. Too many grammar mistakes distract from the story.
Author's Response: Thank you and I know sorry 💜
Date: 05/19/15 01:02 pm Title: “Dates sound fun, we should ask are parents to take us on one.”
I really really want sequel for this!!! It's great! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!!!! Maybe I have thought about it but idk. I might but after my exams... I'm glad people like it. I didn't know how people would find it so I'm glad that people like it!!!