Date: 04/07/19 08:10 pm Title: How could we not talk about family when family's all that we got?
Omg this just broke my heart. So completely beautiful and honest.
Date: 05/29/15 12:49 am Title: How could we not talk about family when family's all that we got?
I remember reading this at work a few weeks ago, but for some reason never thought to leave a review. Idk, I was in the mood for something sad and thought provoking to read tonight, and then remembered this! I just want to say that this was beautifully written- even had me sniffing back a few tears. Idk, maybe I'm just a sad person but this type of fic genre is my favorite, and I thought you executed it perfectly. :) Thanks so much for the amazing read.
Author's Response: Thank you!!! AW I'm sorry I don't deliberately make people cry!!! When I wrote it I have no idea how it would go down but I'm really glad you liked it 😁. I'm so glad you thought that!!! It makes me so happy 💜 I'm gonna be happy the whole day ahaha
Date: 05/11/15 10:45 pm Title: How could we not talk about family when family's all that we got?
Tbh i never learned about paragraphing and lots of grammar stuff until thf when i was like 14. A beta started correcting my stories and i learnt lots of grammar from her tbh so thf is pretty educational when it comes to that haha, even if grammar is the only thing it's helpful for haha. But the best practice is just reading other stories and taking notes from what you read- where they put paragraph breaks, use certain punctuation etc. :) And not me because my english has gotten so bad in the last 4-5 years since ive lived in germany and never use english any more. 🙈
Author's Response: I don't know everyone else seems to know how to do it. Yeah O think I should probably get one but idk I don't think I would ever write like a 'proper' fic because my attention span is so short and it seems so much effort of a singular piece of writing... Yeah your right, thf are. In another fandom they didn't have all these rules but it does sometimes it makes it a lot nicer and easier to read because people abbreviate stuff (which I'm guilty as well but 😑) yeah I know!!! I feel like o probably should read the book(s) I am doing an exam on, on Monday but their soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo boring.... rnrnYour writing is good!!! All your stories are interesting!!! But I probably shouldn't spend as much time on here as I should be revising your but I have a book (or three) that I am supposed to be reading and its so much better on here than reading my book aboout bloody hibiscuses is just not 😑😑😑. Living I'm Germany??? That is so cool!!! I want to do that when I'm (finally) old enough to move out...
Date: 05/11/15 10:59 am Title: How could we not talk about family when family's all that we got?
Oh man, again this was so beautiful! Such an emotional account and i don't think i've ever read anything about adoption on this site when it comes to mpreg, so that was a first and you did it really well!
My only nitpick is the paragraphing, which would be easier to read if there was more paragraph breaks. But i know it's a letter and so that might be the reason it's structured like it is.
Anyway, really original and thought-provoking story!
Author's Response: Oh wow thank you 💜💜💜. Yeah Idk I haven't really read anything about adoption and nothing about mpreg adoption I'm not really sure where I got the idea. And thank you rnrnOh I know I'm sorry I'm just dreadful. I am working on it!!! It wasn't deliberately done!!! At my school they never taught me paragraphing until like April when my teacher pointed it out and I'm trying to learn how to do it before my exam in like four days otherwise I get a 'D' so thanks :)) rnrnAnyway thanks for reviewing 💜
Date: 05/11/15 03:00 am Title: How could we not talk about family when family's all that we got?
awwm this broke my heart. :(
I hope they meet again, and she'll understand why Bill did it.
I feel so sorry for Bill :(
But it was a good story though. You did a good job!
Author's Response: Aww sorry!!! Thank you 💜💜💜
Date: 05/11/15 12:58 am Title: How could we not talk about family when family's all that we got?
So sad :(
Author's Response: Sorry!!!
Date: 05/10/15 06:17 pm Title: How could we not talk about family when family's all that we got?
Very bittersweet but beautiful! :)
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 05/10/15 05:32 pm Title: How could we not talk about family when family's all that we got?
how sad...
Author's Response: Yeah sorry!!!