Date: 03/23/25 09:33 am Title: THE WILD
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 01/28/23 08:08 am Title: THE WILD
Please write a sequel to this
Author's Response: Hello!! I feel like I know your username. We must have talked before, right?? Thank you for the review, I hope it means you liked the fic. :)rnrnUnfortunately I'm out of the TH fandom and have zero idea what our fav twins are doing these days. The last TH fic I finished was a rush to finish "Sense & Sensibility" a few years ago, after having it in-progress for about 6 years, and that was really my last contribution to the TH fandom. It was kind of terrible too so I know my passion has waned. :(rnrnI don't think I could write a sequel to The Call Of The Wild even if I wanted to, since it's pretty obvious that at the end Tom and Bill are on the same page/in love with each other, which means we've already reached the happy ending. I hope that's ok. Please imagine that they live happily ever after. :)
Date: 01/23/18 10:35 am Title: THE WILD
It's been a while since you posted this story but I just read it and I love it! The ending is good, Tom realize he's in love with Bill and he drop everything for him... It's amazing !
I also love your writing and how you portrayed Bill and Tom.
Author's Response: Awwww, thank you so much. I'm so glad you like this story--it's never too late. It's one of my favorites too. :) This is one of those ones where the story and their personalities flowed easily and writing it was a pleasure, even though I wasn't sure where it was going at the beginning. Glad it turned out well, eh? ;)
Date: 07/29/16 02:35 am Title: THE WILD
There needs to be a 3 part to this story. Lol it can't just end haha
Author's Response: Very funny. Ha. Ha. lol. I thought the ending to this fic was pretty good. :) I hope you enjoyed it.
Date: 09/19/15 04:16 am Title: THE WILD
This!! This story....is AMAZING!!!@o@ Tom's portrayal here is magnifique. I just love your writing!
Author's Response: Awww!! This review is awesome, made me so happy. Yay! :) Thank you so much. Super glad you liked it.
Date: 06/07/15 12:58 am Title: THE WILD
You literally had me screaming at the screen! I was so worked up throughout the whole thing and then you had that awesome ending. I've had this on my tracked stories for a too long. I'm so so soooo glad I decided to finally read it.
Author's Response: Haha brilliant! This is such a happy surprise of a review. Thank you so much! :) Screaming? Haha, I do that for some fics so thanks for the huge compliment. I'm glad you liked the ending too, since it's not really smutty, but I think it shows Tom's feelings better. Thanks again, u totally made me smile. :)
Date: 05/21/15 06:20 pm Title: THE WILD
Waaah *-* Amazing :B I know maybe was so difficult for Tom to clear his feelings, but in fact I'm so happy he finally chose Bill. As he said, he was in love all his life and he even didn't realize it! :B
Lovely story, I wish something like that happens in the real life *~*
Fav of course! :D
(Sorry for my english, I don't speak it very well :S)
Author's Response: Awwwwww Thank you so much!! Yeah, Tom finally figured out that the reason he was so ok, why it was so easy to push boundaries with Bill, was cuz he was already in love. :) I love happy endings too!! And haha, yeah I'm totally rooting for some RL twincest. Hehe. Your English is fine-- I'm so glad u liked the fic! :)
Date: 05/17/15 09:32 am Title: THE CALL
Oh, I forgot to say (yeah, I'm a little scatterbrained atm xD): It doesn't have to happen, but if you'd write a third part and if there'd be a smut scene, I would find it very interesting if Tom let Bill take the lead. Like to show him that he's more than just a replacement for Ria and that he really accepts all of him. Bill could have the fears but not voice them in order not to scare Tom off...
I know they're gonna work it out, but this is just such a perfect opportunity for smuff and I love reading that (& botTom) *sigh* please? :)
Author's Response: Sorry, nope. :( :( I'm so glad you liked this fic, but I explained why in my last response. Just wait for Sense & Sensibility. ;) Thank you sooooo much for your reviews, they made me smile and think of smutty twinsex and I love you. Thanks so much for the support. :)
Date: 05/17/15 04:15 am Title: THE WILD
*snaps fingers* I knew there were some emotions missing! xD
OK, I liked the first part, but I absolutely loved this one. The ending is so wonderfully sweet! :D But... *ducks head* that was a really implicitly cute ending and we all know they're twins and awesome and stuff, but couldn't you please maybe write an explicitly cute ending to round it up? *bats eyelashes* Tom could be hesitating a little cause he knows it's gonna be a commitment for life and Bill could need some time to accept it and then they could have really sweet smuff (which you are able to write really well btw)? :))
And just as a sidenote: I'm so glad I read some of the other reviews for this! Could you maybe post links to those two videos? They sound so awesome but I'm sadly very unskilled at finding such things... :( I'd really appreciate that.
Author's Response: Yeah!!! Hahahaha, so you get what was happening in Part 1 better now that Part 2 happened, right? Good. :) I'm happier with the fic now that there's a second part too, it feels more complete, and makes me love everything as a whole so much more. I'm soooooo glad you liked it. :) :) Hahahahaha, okay, I'm not gonna chop your head off for asking for a smutty Part 3, cuz you're not the first person, but I tried so much to keep this not so "explicit"... that's a good word. So I'm sorry to disappoint, even though your idea is good and pretty close to what would likely happen, and I'll tell you that I really did spend some time thinking about that scenario --and it gave me a really good idea that I won't use here. So, I'm not going to write more for this fic. I really like it the way it is now. I'll tell you something else though-- I'm writing another twincest fic, called Sense & Sensibility, I started it after I finished A Wrinkle In Time, and it's so freaking porny.... so that's part of the reason I'm keeping this one a bit more on the down low, cuz Sense & Sensibility is going to be everything you're asking for and more. And (unfortunately for me) it looks like it's going to be pretty long. I have so many ideas for this fandom and I've been trying for years to stop writing them, but they always pop up. Anyway, so I promise that even though I'm not continuing this fic, this isn't the last of my twincest fics. And I looooooove botTOM, so I'm dying to write that again. :) Actually, I hate writing smut, but S&S I swear is going to be lewd. lol. Just, don't hold your breath cuz it's in pieces and it's gonna take me at least a few months to finish it. ............................Ok, moving on to the links... I found them on youtube, just for you, and then I realized that the two videos are actually of the SAME DATE (look at their clothing). The THTV one: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=93NLqakOtDQ (at 0:52), and then it cuts off the rest of what they're saying, but a fan caught it on her phone, and the full Torg and Tom-twincest-awesome and Biiv Q&A is here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HHdGzWB5qxg....... I had only seen the incomplete THTV version, and then emerald sea pointed out the full fan video for me. I had not seen the full Q&A when I wrote this fic. Enjoy! :)
Date: 05/17/15 03:58 am Title: THE CALL
well, wow. xD I really liked the humour of this, but I was surprised that you had written it, because this is just so lighthearted and not like your other works. Since you normally write emotionally complex stories, this randomness and just going with the flow seems kinda surreal, but I don't think it's bad at all :)
Author's Response: Your reviews made me so happy!!! So first, thank you. And second, I'm surprised you think the lightheartedness in this first part is unlike me... Have you read The Giver?!!??! HAHAHA! Honestly, I did try to keep this light, but I think even so, it was obvious there was a little more below the surface that they both weren't thinking about. The fact that Bill was pulling away is an obvious clue that there's something bigger there, and as for Tom, his aloofness comes from the fact that he's comfortable with Bill and just loves him. He's not really thinking yet..... that's for part 2. :P I really did try to make random smuff, but it never happens without feelings in my fics.. I'm just unable. lol.
Date: 05/15/15 10:08 pm Title: THE WILD
that was a great chapter
your a great writer
i actually cried when i read this
Author's Response: OMG, nooo, I'm sorry you cried... I didn't think it was *that* emotional :( :( ..but I have to say I'm so happy to hear the emotions came through. You make me blush, thank you for a lovely review. :)
Date: 05/13/15 05:53 am Title: THE WILD
Lol just finished reading this in my class x3 loved it even more than the first one! 💜😻 almost made me cry when Bill said he was falling in love with Tom. I hope this happens in real life x3 oh and since this story comes easily to u and u can write it so fast why not write a third chapie?! I mean it doesn't feel like the end, Tom has to tell Bill that he feels the same! :D
Author's Response: You were reading this in class?? hehehe Naughty. :P I'm so happy you liked it. I like the second part more than the first too. At least IMO, it makes the first have legs, gives it meaning. Awwwww... I didn't think Bill's confession was gonna be so sappy, but it turned out ok. hehe. Thank you. ............Now, like I said: NO THIRD PART!!!! >:( I mean it. I'm always glad when fics like this come to me quickly and I then I can stop writing. Cuz the alternative is YEARS of writing, and unfortunately with me it's either one or the other. And even though after I finish writing something I'm admittedly proud of it, while I'm writing it's a completely different story... I'm grumpy and in a foul mood and writing disturbs all the RL things I should really be doing instead. I'm not just putting my foot down for the sake of putting my foot down, I truly believe this fic is complete the way it is. I think readers can read between the lines to realize that the twins get together, that Tom came home to be with Bill forever, and the only thing a third part could be is lots of super cheesy twinsex... now that the drama has passed IMO it would be boring and pointless to include that. .......Anyway, thank you for a lovely review. So glad u enjoyed it. :) :)
Date: 05/12/15 03:06 pm Title: THE CALL
ok
the firs chapter was kind of like that, i will read the second chapter and tell you what i think.
i know he said "i love you" but i had a feeling he ment just as a brother (in the first chapter)
Author's Response: Haha, absolutely, please enjoy! :) Well, remember that Bill is fighting his feelings and doesn't really want to say everything just yet. While Tom loves Bill deeply, he just hasn't bothered to really think about how or why, so what he says is only the tip of the iceberg. ;)
Date: 05/12/15 12:49 pm Title: THE WILD
Yay, now everythig feels right. People who want more at this point are probably just begging for sex. We get enough of that around here, so no pressure!
Author's Response: Haha, good! I'm glad you think so cuz I think so too now. Now it's complete. :) And lmao-- yeah, there's nothing else but sex that could possibly go in a part 3... we'll have to make do with our imaginations. Lol. Thank u for your reviews! :)
Date: 05/11/15 10:07 pm Title: THE CALL
yw
Im not a fan of the fanfics where they are just having sexy because they have no one else to have sex with or something along those lines...it just doesnt seem right to me
Author's Response: I'm sorry, I don't think I understand what you're saying-- are you saying this fic IS or IS NOT like that? I'd love to know what came through for you, cuz you said you didn't feel much love in that first part, which wasn't exactly the intention. :( I'll admit that their feelings aren't very transparent at first, but the love should come through eventually, even if this is an "lighter" take on starting a relationship, that's mostly cuz they're older and know themselves better. Thanks for the input. :)
Date: 05/11/15 06:36 pm Title: THE CALL
Yeah, you actually did a good job on her. I don't know anything about her (except that she's dating Tom), but you made her seem really REAL, you know? Like, she was suuuuuuper pissed that he was breaking up with her, and even more pissed that he was blowing her off, but she was also very concerned about the fact that it's probably Bill Tom's in love with, and she sort of... well, she was as supportive as she could be while still being pissed off. It was a really good ending ^-^ YAY!! I'm glad ^-^
Author's Response: OMG, I don't know a single thing about her either! Not a bloody thing besides her name and status as "Tom's GF", lol. I felt a little bad dragging the poor girl into this fic with so little knowledge, but I'm really glad she felt believable. Cuz I'd hate to drag some unsuspecting innocent into a crazy fandom like this and have ppl hate her character. So I tried. lol. What you described --cuz you always understand so well-- is what I was shooting for, and I'm glad it turned out ok. I feel intimidated writing girls.. I think it's really hard. Because of my own personality, I have a really hard time getting into their mindset. I almost don't understand it at all unless it's a particular character that I've come to understand from a book or anime or something. So even while she turned out as ok and not-shallow but still typical and still loving and still angry, I still can't identify with the girl I've written. If I needed to dig deep and explore her more, I would have absolutely no idea how. It would be like a brick wall in my mind I think. ......Anywho. Enough about Ria. Thank you for all your lovely reviews. You are wonderful because u are so candid. It's immensely helpful to get honest con-crit. :)
Date: 05/11/15 04:51 pm Title: THE WILD
When I read this story last night, I had no idea WHAT to say in my review. and whrn I saw that you had actually added a second part, I squealed and couldn’t wait to get home to read it. I really loved this! There were so many things I like, I just don't know what to say.
First, you deserve an award. This is one of the first stories I've read where I actually likr Ria. I mean, I don’t hate her, I have nothing against her but I rarely like her in most stories. Idk why. But.. I liked her. I mean, she did react the way every girl would react when being dumped but.. before that, the way you described her idk, something about it made me like her. and i felt bad for her, really bad for her when Tom left. I mean, yes, he left for Bill and it's adorable at all. But I'm left with a sad feeling for her! so congratulations on that! I'm happy.
And also, looooved how Tom spoke about Bill in the interview! I mean, he didn’t mention any name but if he had said something like that in real life people would, without a doubt, think that it was Bill. Mehehe. I know I would ;) I loved that part, Tom is such a tease!
I loved the smut, the connection, the kisses, Bill's confession. I.. I am so sorry I can't come up with better things to say. The scenes were erotic and intense and just.... Their kisses, the way Bill couldn’t resist. I swear I could HEAR their desperate moans and pants as they embraced. I could feel their heart beats and just... I felt it all!
This was, IS, a really good fic and I.. I am in love, totally enchanted and out of words and this review took a while to write xD
Great, great job! And I am so you glad you changed your mind ^^ You are awesome.
Author's Response: Ok, so when I saw this review earlier today, I read it like 3 times cuz it just made me so happy. This is def one of the sweetest best reviews I've ever received. And I really thank you for that, you really touched me with this. Thank you. I wish I could hug you for real! hehe. Now then, I gotta say I think it's so strange to be writing about Ria, a girl who I know absolutely NOTHING about, lol, but I'm glad that I didn't make you hate her. Because I have a really bad habit of hating all female characters, so in the tiny/almost never times that I write one, I really try to make them real people, so others don't automatically hate the poor girl. My writing her was mostly influenced by thinking that no one would be with someone for years like Tom & Ria if they didn't love each other at least a little, if they couldn't understand each other at least a little, so I'm really glad that came through. So yeah, she's pissed that he didn't automatically deny that there's someone else, but there's love there too, so she's angry, but somehow still there for him, and same with him, even if he's leaving her. They're probably still going to be friends, don't feel too bad. I said in another review that I wrote another paragraph about her --which I ended up deleting-- but it was about how she'd rather be dumped for someone he loves deeply instead of for a fling, that way it's at least worth it. .....As for Tom declaring "Love who loves you back. Plus, he was hot."...Oh man, I would die of laughter and cuteness if that was real life, and YES, I would totally think it was about Bill. Like I think the whole bloody new Kings Of Suburbia CD is about the twins love... like Run Run Run "I wonder how your body tastes, inside of someone else's place"..... like, if that's not blatant twincest IDK what is. HAHHAHAHA. Let's assume for our sanity that's not what Bill means though. lol. But really, I don't think it would be that big a stretch for Tom to declare sudden sexual prowess with a male partner too. He's cocky enough to declare it with a straight face, whether it's true or not, the same way he says so many stupid things about girls and his dick, and I don't think anyone would dare scandalize him for it. At least not in public. Maybe Georg would gibe him about it in private, but I think Tom would be ok with saying something like that aloud, now that he's older and more mature. Esp cuz Bill's been all "equality" in the media regarding his sexual preferences. And you know the twins are two peas in a pod. lol. So yeah. ..........I'm glad u liked the smut, though, I have a hard time seeing it in this fic, there's so little of it. lol. But I wanted them to kiss a lot. I had a sudden thing about it, so if you felt the passion when Tom grabs Bill and plunders his mouth, then I'm super glad. ...Thank u so much again for this absolutely lovely review. You put the biggest smile on my face, and I can guarantee I'll be returning to read it a few more times if I ever I need a pick-me-up. :) rnLastly, no YOU are awesome! ;) And I'm also glad I wrote the second part after all, it feels complete now. :)
Date: 05/11/15 04:18 pm Title: THE WILD
You don't need part three, part two is PERFECT!!! *w* It's just... a;dflaksdfja;sdflkasjdfasd YES. This is EXACTLY IT. The thing with Ria was possibly a bit contrived, but I can totally see it, and Bill's confession, and what it did to their relationship, and just EVERYTHING. asdf;laskdfjas;df SO GOOD!!!!!! Lols, sorry you lost sleep over it XD Still, this is BEAUTIFUL *w*
Author's Response: Oh wow....... Thank you thank you thank you!!! :) :) Coming for you this is really high praise, I dunno if I deserve that. But I'm so glad either way. I'm super-duper happy you liked it, the second part was for you after all. So if you liked it, then it was worth losing sleep. :) As for Ria... she def jumped in there as a plot device, cuz I felt it would have been even cheesier and way too drawn out if Tom had been with Bill when his head snapped on correctly suddenly. This way, it's a bit more like "distance makes the heart grow fonder"... looking at his life around him and even if he has everything, the only thing he wants is Bill. So yeah, like I said, I hate female characters, but she slipped in there and I tried to make her not a bitch, and tried to make Tom be kind even while he's breaking up with her (cuz you dont date someone for year without liking them) and through all his feelings (cuz really his mind is on Bill in that scene)... but even in that moment he's protecting Bill. I've seen it in a few other fics where one twin rushes home just to be with the other one, and even if it's so cheesy I thought it would be a sweet short ending. So that you understand what both the twins are feeling and I don't have to rehash it. :) In the end, I'm kind of glad you pushed me, bcuz I'm happier with this fic now than the way the first part was alone. Thank you.
Date: 05/11/15 03:52 pm Title: THE CALL
YAYAYAY *w* Lols XD Ooh, can't wait ^-^
Author's Response: Hehehe, YAY... you make me smile. :)
Date: 05/11/15 01:20 pm Title: THE WILD
what? no! i'm not crying!
just dusty in here...allergies and what not.
sun's in my eyes. yep.
have to admit, i felt a little bad for ria at the end. but the tom wants what the tom wants.
Author's Response: AWWWWWWWWW, you're too cute. I'm sorry if I actually made you cry. I didn't think this fic was a tearjerker. lol. But I'm so so happy you liked this. It means a lot coming from you bcuz I'm a big fan of your work. As for Ria- well, there was another paragraph about her that I wrote and ended up deleting... it was about how as she's sitting in the bathtub relaxing that night, she thinks that if it really was Bill she got dumped for, that even if that's super gross that she's been dating a perv for the last idk how many years, she thinks she's ok with it, cuz at least she got dumped for someone that means the world to Tom and hopefully he can be happy, instead of some random 1 night stand. That the decision meant something to him. So yeah, she comes around to the idea. Probably bcuz she was there to see Tom zone out and stuff, and cuz she's been around the twins for years now, and cuz even if she wants to scream and curse, she's not actually malicious (at least not in my fic). lol. :)