Date: 04/07/09 01:36 pm Title: When You Were Young
*cries* awe that sweet and sad
Date: 03/23/08 12:09 am Title: When You Were Young
awh this is well sweet, and it's a really good idea!
Author's Response: thanx ^.^
Date: 03/22/08 05:07 pm Title: When You Were Young
I like this I really do but I think it's weird that Tom implies his own kids will have a relationship , like that would be the most natural( I think I understood right lol)
I mean, it's natural but that doens't happens with all the twins over the world
Author's Response: yea i know, i just needed to some how show tom not letting go of his brother so i could continue this
Date: 03/22/08 04:34 pm Title: When You Were Young
no, no, no, no! you can't end like that! It's so heart-breaking! NOOOO! Please, make a sequel! Tomi needs his Bill. He needs hom SOOOOOO bad.
This story is beautiful, I loved it and almost made me cry.
Great work.
Author's Response: haha this will continue, don't worry ^.^
Date: 03/22/08 04:26 pm Title: When You Were Young
that was so sweet, and so sad :(. Poor Bill and Tom!
Author's Response: haha trust me, it might get better in the series...