Date: 05/06/15 06:38 pm Title: Feel It All
So I'm gonna review you here too even if I've done it via e-mail already XD I still totally adore this story! It's so great and you should definitely write more! And the idea of this being a prologue to something bigger (like Ewa suggested) isn't at all a bad idea! But I totally feel you on the part that you lose interest easily on your stories, 'cause that happened to me quite a lot back in the day. So just keep writing and perhaps some day we get something with a few more chapters ;)
Author's Response: Thank you! Like a lot, your support is really great and means a lot to me! :D I like Ewa's idea, and I guess if I get an idea ill see what I can do about it:) I do have a story in working on, multiple chapters I just completely forgot :o ill send it to you when I'm done with the second chapter and you could give your awesome opinion on it? C:
Date: 05/02/15 10:13 pm Title: Feel It All
Oh, this was a glorious read. I loved the descriptive writing; such glaring pieces in the story that you brought to life.
Author's Response: Thank you! Coming from you, this really means a lot since I really admire a lot of your work; especially These Nights! Thank you for your review! :D
Date: 05/02/15 10:34 am Title: Feel It All
Sounds very good and interesting, it could be a great prologue to multichapter (slash) story :D Maybe you could consider this someday?
Author's Response: Thank you! :) And I've never really thought about that... I have a tendency to loose interest in stories that I been to write, way too fast, so I dont think thats gonna happen. Thank you for the kind words though! :D
Date: 04/30/15 10:47 am Title: Feel It All
Your use of descriptive words is very good and I enjoyed this story very much. Made me feel very sorry for Bill though. Looking forward to what you post next. :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! C: Hopefully ill have something of worth up soon :)
Date: 04/29/15 06:11 pm Title: Feel It All
This was very well written. :) I really liked your description of the environment.
I hope to see more from you. :)
Author's Response: Thank you bunches! :D I might post some other stuff once I'm happy with it :) thank you for the review! :D
Date: 04/29/15 05:48 pm Title: Feel It All
I liked it. It was very interesting. You're a good writer, I hope you'll post more stories up. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It really means the world to me :)I might post some of my other stuff, I just want to finish it first! Thank you for the kind words! :D