Aww, this is so sweet! I do wonder all those things about my siblings.
You did well at writing from the perspective of an eleven year old. There were a few words that seemed rather big for her age but I think it makes it sound more realistic. I mean, in my experience, kids have a way of saying the most precocious things at the oddest times.
And Tom is too cool!!!! *pouty face*

Author's Response: Haha thanks!!! Yeah I thought some of the words were quite big. I kinda based it off my best friends sisters speech. She hangs round with my sister quite a bit their good friends and she speaks like an older person more than a little kid. But yeah some kids I know are so precocious and egh so annoying (there's one in particular) mm Tom is always gonna me cool. HES TOM :)