Date: 04/18/23 01:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 08/08/15 10:20 am Title: Chapter 2
This is one of the best stories I've ever read... Have you ever considered writing another spin-off or a sequel? :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I actually did write a little spin off, I wrote Like A Couple of Teenagers as a spin-off sort of thing, like a missing scene I guess. I'm so glad you enjoyed :)
Date: 04/18/15 01:22 am Title: Chapter 2
ohh, this was so good! Loved every word. And I swear if I ever hear you say again that you aren't good at porny stuff, I'm gonna remind you of this fic. SO GOOD.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ack, thank you! I just feel like it's so unsexy and mechanical compared to reading other people's porn... but I'm thrilled you liked it, thanks Mel!!
Date: 04/18/15 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Sexy and cozy! This tension is fantastic :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 04/15/15 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
LOVED THIS!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 04/13/15 07:26 pm Title: Chapter 2
Uuuuh! This was very nice!! Really nice!! ;) Great sex scene!! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!
Date: 04/13/15 09:36 am Title: Chapter 2
That fanfic is just... wow. I really love when someone paired a hopelessly-in-love Tom with a fearless-sexy Bill. It's so passionate, damn hot and at same time super cute fiction to read about the twins loving eachother wildly. Dude, a just wish that I can find something like this, this actually exist in the real life? I think you portrayed their personality very well here, put a bit of complicity that they appear to have... seriously, consider making a sequel, I'd love to read more of your work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this review! I am considering a sequel, and maybe a "missing scenes" type thing, I loved writing this so much :) either way, I will continue to write the twins, as I have done for so many years now.
Date: 04/10/15 07:44 am Title: Chapter 2
this was a really good story!
u should do a squel
Author's Response: Thank you!! I am considering it, or some sort of "missing scenes" filet, I loved writing these twins so much :)
Date: 04/09/15 08:01 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh wow... This is the best thing I've read in months. It's such classic twincest (my fav!!) but they're older this time which makes it feels like still uncharted territory. I love that they can settle down being together, to have finally figured it out now that they're more mature... you write them really well. The bond between them is palpable and real and you can feel it in the way they look at each other, which is crazy, cuz you're writing words here, not video, but you create that feeling so well. I admire your writing, it feels effortless. You just sweep the reader into the twins' world and it all makes sense and feels so right. Wonderful fic here. I'll never get tired of first-time twincest. Thank you so much for writing this. :) :)
Author's Response: Gosh, thank you so much! I am soooo inspired to write current, older twins atm, this was one of my favourites to write for sure :) This is honestly the most lovely review, thank you so so much! I could blush!
Date: 04/09/15 07:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh worth the wait alight. All my favourite things wrapped into one: shower, 25, floppy hair, Tom just wanting to please Bill :)
Thank you!
Date: 04/09/15 06:57 pm Title: Chapter 2
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/09/15 03:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Aww cute cute cute! I loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Date: 04/09/15 10:44 am Title: Chapter 2
I don't know will you write more of this story, but I want to tell you, that I really like it, and I want to read more of your stories.
Author's Response: I won't write more of this story specifically but I will most certainly carry on writing the twins :) I MAY return to this for a sequel or a prequel though. Thank you so much for reading!
Date: 04/09/15 08:43 am Title: Chapter 2
I’m surprised I could write anything coherent for this part because my thoughts were pretty much “PERFECT” and “YES” the whole way through, caps and all. But yeah, the sexy parts were perfect, the characterization is perfect, I love how you tie in snapshots from THTV and such as well. Nnnn I just love newly-in-love current twins so much. Again, I love how they’re sweet on each other but not always 100% wrapped around the other’s finger. Even in couples it’s normal for them to be just casual sometimes, so I appreciate that. :) I also like the little inclusions of the G’s here and there, especially Gustav, he seems to have a soft spot for Bill (don’t we all). Tom needs to get over his jealousy though, poor thing. I wanna say he has nothing to worry about, but I get it, I totally do.
I like how drawn out this fic is, how they’re exploring and learning quite a bit behind the scenes, because it feels realistic of course and also ignores the old twin-turned-sudden-boyfriend trope. You’ve sustained the twin bond and kept it paramount. Their newfound intimacy is just another facet of their relationship and not in opposition to it. I love that. :)
Loved the resolution of the “I miss you” theme, that was just perfection. The whole way through really. I don’t have enough words for how perfect this fic is, I just LOVE IT.
Other than the odd make-out session in the back of Tom’s car
PLEASE WRITE A PREQUEL. I absolutely love sometimes-intimate-but-it-wasn’t-really-a-thing twins.
“Live every second,” he whispers.
Even in a moment like this Tom is such a cheeseball!!!
“Aw, Tomi,” Bill murmurs against Tom’s cheek. “You’re falling for me.”
They’re so cuteee ;—;
Tom turns with a grin and hugs his brother, so pleased to see him.
Soooo cuuuuuuuuute * - *
“This means everything to me,” Tom admits his voice a little choked.
YOU’RE KILLING ME.
Okay I loved EVERYTHING, write 100 more fics with these twins and like, marry me.
Author's Response: Review part 2 was just as wonderful as part 1, seriously, I can't believe your reviews, they are far too kind!! I'm going to get big headed! I re-watched a ton of THTV before I wrote this fic so I was feeling all inspired by them haha. Not the most taxing research for a project I've ever done! If only my degree was like this. Current twins are my absolute LIEBE atm. I can't get enough of them. I always think that Gustav has such a soft spot for Bill, so I liked including that in this story, and I'm glad you liked it, too. rnrnHonestly, I'm blown away by your review, thank you SO much! (totally said it like Bill in my head just then lol). But really, thank you :) rnrnAlso, a prequel may or may not have been started... rnrnAlso also, I accept your proposal!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04/09/15 05:51 am Title: Chapter 2
Really enjoyed reading this :-) thank you for sharing
Author's Response: thank you so much!
Date: 04/09/15 02:30 am Title: Chapter 2
You are awesome, this was awesome, the twins are awesome! Everything was awesome! Have I used awesome enough?! Lol
Author's Response: Hahah thank you! And your review is awesome, too!
Date: 04/09/15 01:33 am Title: Chapter 2
Oh worth the wait alight. All my favourite things wrapped into one: shower, 25, floppy hair, Tom just wanting to please Bill :)
Thank you!
Date: 04/08/15 09:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my gooood this is so sweet, it warmed my sad little heart. I loved this way more than I was expecting. This story really gave me the same feeling as old, classic fics. I love the concept, Tom wanting Bill’s affection and being confused about what’s changed between them. I love the tension you’ve built, and the care you’ve taken with the story. And I love that it’s present-day twins, falling for each other; that’s not really something I’ve seen done yet, but I’m so glad you decided to tackle it. I just really like the idea of the twins being physically close to each other in a casual way, or being needy for affection even (or especially) in a platonic way, it’s a lot more interesting and poignant to me than getting straight into smut.
I also love that Bill carries the gorilla into the car even though Tom won it for him and is being especially sweet on him. I hate when people write Tom as overly-doting, it’s nice to see him be a little more relaxed for once! I really appreciated that. xD
“Bill is such a sunshine baby” - this is such a cute line. :)
"Bill kept reaching over to rest a hand on his arm, or adjust his outfit, or link their fingers for a brief moment."
This is also just adorable!
Yeah, I love this a freaking lot so far! I will read and review the second part tomorrow, but great job and thanks so much for sharing with us!
Author's Response: TAN! Your reviews are ridiculous in the BEST way! I'm honoured and humbled and thankful and gobsmacked! I am soooo inspired by the current twins, I have a billion plot bunnies running around my head. So this was a total self-indulgence. I loved writing and I'm so happy you liked it! And that you picked out some lines you liked, what a lovely thing! Thank you thank you thank you! I'm truly flattered you enjoyed this :)
Date: 04/08/15 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 1
Your porn was perfectly done! I always enjoy jealous Tom and you did it well without going over the top. This was a great story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am such a sucker for jealous Tom, so it was fun writing this :)
Date: 04/08/15 06:48 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh worth the wait alight. All my favourite things wrapped into one: shower, 25, floppy hair, Tom just wanting to please Bill :)
Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I loved writing this one :)