Date: 05/14/15 03:59 pm Title: Was it something I did?
Oh wow! That was so sad! :( I'll have to read the rest of the series later!
Author's Response: Haha yeah sorry!!! Oh cool idk this ones my favourite out of all of the but feel free to read them 😋😋😋
Date: 05/07/15 12:47 am Title: Was it something I did?
Oh my God this was amazing! Really really beautiful. I'm actually feeling a bit choked up with emotion right now. How you described every single detail of their journey... the emotions and the happiness they felt and then of course the horrible misery when the baby was gone. Oh man this was so beautiful and touching. :(
Author's Response: Thank you 😁😁😁 I hope that it was quite accurate and that I did the whole topic justice because its such a sensitive topic and being only sixteen I've never experienced being pregnant and I didn't want it to be like really inaccurate and wrong. I also have never really known anyone to have a miscarriage so I sort of tried to portray the feeling I thought would be there.
Date: 04/05/15 11:44 pm Title: Was it something I did?
This is really beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you
Date: 04/05/15 02:30 pm Title: Was it something I did?
I'm crying.... 😭
Author's Response: Sorry!!!
Date: 04/05/15 01:07 pm Title: Was it something I did?
It was a stirring piece. The short, jerky sentences did not allow for a smooth reading flow, but bar that, it was a lovely story. You captured the emotions well.
Author's Response: Thank you :) and I will take that on board
Date: 04/04/15 04:22 pm Title: Was it something I did?
It's official now. I LOVE your stories! This was so good. My mom had three miscarriages and all were to early to tell what gender they were. I always wonder what they would be like. It was hard losing them. We always count them in our family so even though their are only eleven of our kids alive, we really have fourteen. And I love what you said in your earlier response. They aren't just blobs of cells and tissue. They're babies. People. My siblings.
Author's Response: Thank you:) no one has ever said that! That makes me happy!!! I was a bit apprehensive about post this. I didn't want it too be really unrealistic and offend people cos its such a sensitive topic. I never have had a miscarriage (I'm 16) and I've never really known anyone that's had one. My mum and dad only have my sister and I and she never had a miscarriage but she wanted more kids. My aunt had one when I was really little but we never see her anyway. You're poor family. My friends mum had three one before her and too after but I know my friend thinks about them. My other friend is one of 7 but her mum had three miscarriages and they were really late. But I didn't know my friend them so I don't know her reaction to it. She doesn't really talk about it. Mm yeah that's the question. People who have abortions (sorry if you agree with it) think it is just cells. But it is a life. It could be the next cure for cancer,who knoes. But its a life. And people want kids so bad and they can't have them. And have lots of miscarriages, they don't think its just a ball of cells. They are there kids and it annoys me a little when people are like oh they don't matter. Their just cells.
Date: 04/04/15 02:12 pm Title: Was it something I did?
So uhm.. I cried. At the goddamn Bus. I was sitting there sobbing and people looked weirdly at me and I just couldn't stop.
Beautiful story, it went straight to my heart.
Author's Response: Aww thank you you have no idea how happy you made me (not that you were crying or anything) but I legit love your stories so this made my day 😀😀😀
Date: 04/04/15 01:40 pm Title: Was it something I did?
"Maybe you were too perfect to live."- This is so beautiful, as someone whose has a miscarriage at 5 months yes it was painful it was severe poisoning by eating at a subway the doctor after doing a blood test was in shock said "what the hell did you eat" were his exact words if you hadn't been pregnant then the shock/poison wouldve been for you. I cried and sometimes think that its my fault my baby took that blow for me. I sometimes think maybe she was meant to prevent this from happening to me that she was made to save her mom from something inevitable that was coming in the future. And it angers me I think about it everyday she has a brother now he is 5.
Author's Response: That's really sad. I'm so sorry. I've never had a miscarriage and I don't think I can comprehend the pain you go through but I like to think that they go to a better place because they are too perfect and innocent not to be. They aren't just a ball of cells they are people rnrnThanks for the review anyway :)