Date: 03/14/16 11:50 pm Title: Tom
Okay that was nice. I've been procrastinating reading this story for months and now I feel like I should have done it sooner. It was a new perspective on the twins relationship and now I think they probably make everyone a little uncomfortable lol.
Thanks for sharing your work, you never disappoint me!
Date: 12/11/15 10:47 pm Title: Tom
Hey there. I loved this. It's so original and fresh. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Date: 04/04/15 01:57 am Title: Tom
Ahh, I loved this. The whole thing was sweet and poignant, and I'm so glad you shared it. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thanks so much :) I'm really glad you liked it.
Date: 04/04/15 01:51 am Title: Georg
To be a fly on the wall during twin time. The Gs have an extraordinary perspective. This gave me a great grin. :)
Date: 04/04/15 01:45 am Title: Damian
They're talking about intimate venues, and this chapter is just incredibly intimate and domestic. I can feel Damien's unease myself. Just so well done.
Date: 04/04/15 01:38 am Title: Natalie
"...the entire contents of their suitcases, hell their lives really, explode on contact with a hotel room."
Great line. I had a chuckle and a nod. lol
Date: 04/04/15 01:30 am Title: Andreas
The tension was fantastic!
Date: 04/04/15 01:21 am Title: Gianluca
I swear I enjoy each chapter more than the last. The construction and pacing is so good. I can't even talk about the writing itself, with your little hints and looks and unexpected words. Love it.
Date: 04/04/15 01:08 am Title: Erik
That look at the end was perfect. Damn.
Date: 04/03/15 07:37 pm Title: David
Gah! I'm loving this. Insular is perfect, and the blush. Yeah.
Date: 04/03/15 07:19 pm Title: Hunter
Can't help but wonder how many times this has happened irl. Poor Hunter. Loved the line about going back to church. xD
Author's Response: Hahah my thoughts exactly. You know they're getting hit on left right and centre in West Ho these days.
Date: 04/01/15 10:49 pm Title: Tom
PS-- I'm totally rooting for that other hidden world of theirs to be full of twincesty goodness!! hehe
Date: 04/01/15 10:46 pm Title: Tom
This fic is brilliant. Love the concept if it being little glimpses into the twins' life, but also how good you are at creating intimacy between them and communicating this other hidden world with so few words. I'm sure it's how everyone feels when they're around the twins, like, "there's more here, but what?" "maybe I'm just letting my imagination run away w me" "why am i getting goosebumps watching them?"...This story of yours could be read in so many ways, I feel. Like, it could be really naughty, and at the same time maybe not, cuz we don't really know. ......... You're a fabulous writer. I've been a fan of yours for many years. Well done. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm really pleased that you like it! I'm always happy for people to assume things get naughty! Thanks for commenting.
Date: 04/01/15 12:53 pm Title: Tom
Ths was simply fantastic! So well writen and so beautiful! I was reading as fast I could to get to another chaper as soon as possible and at the same time I was regreting it have just 9 chapters. You are so talented, I love Tom and Bill that you created!
Please write something new soon!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Sorry it has taken me a while to reply to comments, RL has taken over. I'm really happy you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting :)
Date: 04/01/15 11:35 am Title: David
I absolutely love this story, the way you chose to write it is original and very interesting!
Date: 03/31/15 11:19 am Title: Hunter
LOL this! hahaha HUnter wanted to ask Tom out omg XD Tom IS the boyfriend XD Love dit! and such a curious mind you have ;) imagine if the twins dated I think that would be fantasy for many people around the world imo.
Author's Response: Definitely one for me! ;)
Date: 03/30/15 05:28 pm Title: Damian
love possessive,territorial, shower fresh Tom *-*
Date: 03/30/15 01:49 pm Title: Gianluca
wow! and good job with the italian sentences by the way =)
Date: 03/30/15 01:15 am Title: Tom
I love this, seeing them from other's pov. 😍
Author's Response: AW thank you :) glad you enjoyed it.