Date: 04/28/15 11:29 pm Title: Chapter 9: Gravity
Wow, that was...Wow!
From what has been written down here, it's a pretty complicated love story.
Or more like forbidden love.
In my opinion, they're starting to get to know each other a little more, as in Tom found out that Billy has a sex addiction.
Living in the crazy world as we are today, maybe Billy thought it's "safe" to not to tell Tom, afraid he would be judgmental or disgusted with Billy's way of life.
But in this case, Tom is like his remedy and maybe Billy will stick to it.
As of Tom, all his years of living, he's a single man in his early thirties.
Always focusing on his career.
But as soon as he "found" Billy, he's love-struck.
and for him, it's a new experience.
An Billy came at the right time in his timeline.
And Francis Lawrence is like their kid.
Having a baby with someone that you love is like a married life and in my opinion, Tom is looking forward to that kind of life.
His mother. Tom's, is a very suspicious woman.
She mentioned something about money.
Why, I wonder?
Was Tom being...how to say, lied to?
Squandered all of his money before?
Or did that happened to his mother?
But she's said,""Babies always look good when they're showered with love." "And money. Watch out for this one."
Something happened.
And you, my dear, keep me coming back for more for These Nights and don't stop.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review :)
Do you really think that it's the "perfect time" for Billy to enter Tom's life? Tom's mother is simply controlling and overtly-suspicious, is all. As she should be, I suppose. I would be, in these circumstances.
I'm happy you like the story!
Date: 04/28/15 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 10: Emily Druthers
Lol at Tom's last comment to Emily. So sassy of him lol. But is it that easy though?
Author's Response: For the whole thing to die down? Definitely not. But it's just the beginning. If there's no case, then... Well, that is basically it. But for the loose ends to tie themselves, it'll take time. Thanks for the review <3
Date: 04/28/15 07:11 am Title: Chapter 10: Emily Druthers
Great! Tom, you are the best! :D
Author's Response: Haha, that was my reaction when re-reading the finished chapter xD
Date: 04/26/15 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 9: Gravity
Love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you <3
Date: 04/26/15 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 9: Gravity
OMG I love this fic is Bill really a golddigger
I'm a sing a song k ready
He take my money when I'm in need
Author's Response: Billy may enjoy the benefits that come with Tom's wealth, but he is not a golddigger. That was not the message I intended in the fic at all ^^' Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/20/15 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 8: Father Figures
It was very interesting to see how Dr Harold made Bill talk about his own feelings.
You perfectly describe the borderline personnality.
I can't wait for reading next !
Author's Response: This chapter was a little heavy, even for me personally. But it had to be done, and I'm glad that my friend was there to help me write this down. :) Thank you for reading and for the lovely reviews. I hope you keep reading! <3
Date: 04/20/15 05:16 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Birds and the Bees
OMG !!!
Poor Bill !
It's so hard to read, but you made it so real that i feel so shaken.
I really hoped he could share the pain with Tom but he's gone so coldly. Did he even notice ?
Author's Response:
Ah, I'm really flattered that you feel so strongly about the story! :D
You can see that the two are touching and enjoying each other's bodies, but they are both wrapped in their own thoughts and feelings. They are in their own worlds, where they have their own worries and things that excite them (Billy with the sex and being with a strong male presence - something he has been deprived of; and Tom with the admiration from this beautiful boy and his job). It's unavoidable how that happens sometimes.
Date: 04/20/15 03:31 pm Title: Chapter 4: Addictions
It's not necessary to have a full sex scene in every chapter I think, because the story is such captivating that we can easily imagine !
Poor Billy, it's sad in fact what he lives and you describe it so neatly ! Hope Tom will be able to help him get out of that, if the psy tells him what he thinks of all that.
I really love this story :)
Author's Response:
Hi there! Thanks for your review!
Yes, that was something I had to seriously consider as Billy is "sex-addicted" in this fic... But I couldn't write about sex in every chapter, so it was a bit of a dilemma for me. But I'm sure it's something that has to flow naturally in the story, so I'm just going to follow my instinct. :)
Thank you so much for the love <3
Date: 04/20/15 12:31 am Title: Chapter 8: Father Figures
To quote from my best friend: "The story is really deep."
I agree.
I mean, from a third-person point of view, I understand why Bill is the way he is now.
Since he "learnt" everything that a boy needs to know from his biological mother,and he's kinda wanted more from his mother, and when she passed on, he lost the "source", the cure for his "urges".
So he touched himself to fill that void.
But even by touching himself, it doesn't feel the same like it was before, but he's addicted to sex.
After every masturbation, he feels empty and...alone.
So to fill the emptiness and to sate his addiction, he start to have sex with people that need the thing that he need, doesn't matter what gender, he just need some relief.
About his father, how could a man abandoned his child the time he needs him the most: leaving Bill to take care of his baby "brother", Francis alone?
Why did he get married to Billy's mother in the first place?
This chapter, you(author) made it all clear why Bill is the way he is.
It was really deep but in a way, you've touched my heart, you're telling me how a teenage boy managed to stay strong even after he's been through a lot.
I admire him: his perseverance to get through everything.
I love it :')
Author's Response: I appreciate the lengthier review, darling ;D Thank you for reading, as always! <3
Date: 04/19/15 04:57 pm Title: Chapter 8: Father Figures
OMG!!!! That's incredible, I have no words, this is so twisted and so good. Reading this is exploring the depths and the dark corners of the human mind. And you are an amazing writer and I appreciated so much that you asked an expert to help you to write the psychology parts, it adds realism to the story and it twist it even more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! It made me smile so wide :D I'm very happy you're liking the story so far. And I'm glad you appreciate my attempt to make it seem "real". You guys deserve the best I could give. :)
Date: 04/19/15 03:36 pm Title: Chapter 8: Father Figures
I feel like I just keep saying the same things after each chapter. I really hope you don't mind. This was just so interesting. You have to feel awful for Billy, not only because of his mother's sexual abuse, but the consequences of it, of course. I'm eager for more, as always.
Author's Response: I don't mind at all! It is already amazing enough to have you reading and keeping up with this, and deem it interesting. I'm hoping to post the next chapter up within these couple days. As always, thank you. :)
Date: 04/19/15 02:45 am Title: Chapter 7: The Birds and the Bees
I'm not surprised Billy was abused, though surprised it was his mom. Nice twist. And Francis' parentage in question. Interesting!
Author's Response: I'm incredibly flattered that you like it! <3
Date: 04/18/15 05:22 am Title: Chapter 8: Father Figures
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! <3
Date: 04/17/15 12:15 am Title: Chapter 5: Oatmeal Night
WHY IS TOM ON THE BOTTOM HUHUHU IT SHOULD BE BIIIIILL!!!
I LOVE THE STORY BUT I CAN’T REALLY IMAGINE TOM ON THE BOTTOM.
Author's Response: What a good question! I wanted to break this "stereotype-cliché" of Bill having to be on the bottom all the time. I find a pattern between Bill being "weaker" (in some, if not most aspects) in comparison to his "stronger" twin, either in fanfics or general opinion; and with Bill having to be the submissive one (submissive is often correlated with being a person positioned below his/her sexual partner, so giving the partner control over the sex. E.g. Bill is regularly opined as being weaker than Tom, hence he has to be the one at the bottom all the time. (Or does this have to do with Bill being the more feminine one? But this would mean that being feminine constitutes weakness, and I don't think I like that line of thought at all!) But thinking that one is less than the other is awful and incorrect. The twins are equals, albeit with their respective flaws, but they are equals nonetheless. And I wanted to show that with this chapter, by having Bill take control. I wanted to illustrate that it didn't matter who was on top and who was on the bottom. It was sexual, it was intimate, and it was passionate. Thank you for your review, and I hope you continue reading! :)
Date: 04/12/15 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 7: The Birds and the Bees
So his addiction started from his mother?! 😱
It's pretty twisted but who can blame her?
Her husband is always on the road and she has her need and besides, they live quite a distance from the city so the closest she could get was from her teenage son.
Billy may hate himself for not being able to resist her but in a way, he kinda like need that, too.
I understand her situation but maybe without the son part.
Part of why she's doing it to her son probably because he's growing up and she's used to Billy being under her care since he's a wee baby (washing hush private part, breast-feeding him, her motherly feeling; she can't quite get it off of her towards Billy) and now that he's a teenager, she doesn't that closeness to drift apart so she had to take action.
Although twisted but it's pretty steamy 😘💖
Author's Response: You know what, I'm impressed, Audrey ;) Haha! I'm glad you understood the chapter. As you know, the next one will be special, so keep an eye out :*
Date: 04/12/15 05:36 am Title: Chapter 7: The Birds and the Bees
Oh thats such a sad chapter. No wonder Billy has got problems. Even though its sad I like it because it makes you understand more about the characters. 💜 great chapter as always.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, darling! :) <3
Date: 04/11/15 04:46 am Title: Chapter 7: The Birds and the Bees
Awww. Poor Bill. Thats so sad
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 04/11/15 04:22 am Title: Chapter 7: The Birds and the Bees
wow, that was heartbreaking :( love this story! can't wait for next chapter! xx
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're liking it so far. <3
Date: 04/08/15 12:20 am Title: Chapter 6: Unlabeled
I loved it😍
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 04/06/15 04:02 am Title: Chapter 6: Unlabeled
This chapter, I love the sex scene, even though it's just a brief moment.
It's not intense but it's pretty scary when Tom asked Billy not to come yet. I can imagine it happened to myself! Tom's mother. She sounds like she regret what her son choose to be. But she give up on it and accept it. I like Tom's character. He's keeps everything (personal life) at arm'a length. I can help but wondering what would happen in the end
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you understand the mother's point of view. There just comes a time when you have to let go of the reins. Thanks for reading <3
