Date: 06/17/15 07:08 am Title: Chapter 1: Satyriasis
Oh my goddddd this was amazing! Mind blowing, babe. I loved how you described Billy, he was weak and he was strong at the same time. Profound start, I'm enjoying it 😘😘😘
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Means so much that you're reading TN :D
Date: 06/14/15 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 12: Wall After Wall
Ok, when I started to read this story, I that that the chapter 8 was the end. But I was wrong. I like this one, it's not like the others stories that I read. The thing between two of them, are really intense but in same time beautiful. I really want to read more of this soon, so start to writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review! Even though it may seem petty to some readers, reviews truly leave a big impact on the author, positive or otherwise. So thank you for letting me know your thoughts and for the kind words. :)
I will definitely get to writing again soon! For you. ;) Hope you keep reading and telling me your opinions on future chapters.
Date: 06/10/15 03:41 am Title: Chapter 3: Angels
Well, this little adventure of Billy is quite awkward for me to read (I am not used to this kind of thing, I guess). But I know what you're trying to convey here is about how deep Billy has fallen into his darkness. That he is willing to f**k anyone just to surpress his addiction.
And the way this chapter ended is pretty cool. It's like you're watching a TV series, and you're dying to watch the next episode!
Author's Response: I actually agree. It was tough to write this chapter - it was an enlightening experience for me :') Thanks again!
Date: 06/09/15 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 2: Pro Bono
Wow.
Very detailed.
You described everything with details that it feels we're in it.
It felt REAL.
Like the office, the meeting, the (it's really hard to admit this) washroom.
Yeah, that washroom thing left an impact I don't think I will see washrooms the same way again...
That's just a side impact, tho'. no worries. Haha.
I am more curious with Tom actually.
I mean, it seems like he has his own darkness too. And somehow he saw himself in Billy. I don't know. Maybe I was reading too much into it. Sorry, if I'm exaggerating.
All in all, this is a good chapter.
Author's Response: No, you're not exaggerating, don't worry, haha! There's truth in your thoughts. I'm blushing now, thank you for the sweet review :*
Date: 06/09/15 12:14 pm Title: Chapter 1: Satyriasis
A good starting point.
I like the way you ended this chapter.
It left readers with a sense of darkness that made them anticipating for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, babe! Flattered you liked it :D <3
Date: 06/07/15 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 12: Wall After Wall
Wow, that was a brief but amazing chapter!
It's like all of the good movies with the plot and with a bit of mystery, too and it's not all just romance: it's a real-life situation!
I love the words that you used: they're very..deep and it has touched my soul - it's like you I can feel it happened to me.
The catchy phrases, though - whoop!
Anyway, I'm looking forward on reading about Billy's father on why he abandoned Billy and Francis. Why is he like that?
And I hope there'll be more about Tom in the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll take that into consideration :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll take that into consideration :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'll take that into consideration :)
Date: 06/07/15 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 12: Wall After Wall
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading <3
Date: 06/07/15 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 12: Wall After Wall
Well, didn't Tom know that Francis was Billy's son ? And how will he consider Bill if he really comes to know it ? I would like them to talk about Billy's story with his mum and the conséquences of all that, and what he really feels for her and for the situation.
And his father, he can't be ignoring the situation ?
I love how Tom loves Billy, even if he hesitates a lot
Hope we'll have some of those questions' answers in the next chapter
I really love this story :)
Author's Response:
No, Tom does not know that... To be honest, even Billy isn't sure. But he likes the feeling of being a father, not that he is completely certain that he had sired Francis.
I will do my best to help you find answers to those questions, whether by replying to your reviews or in future chapters. :) I truly appreciate how much love you've given to this fic! I hope you like what's coming next! <3
Date: 06/07/15 11:58 am Title: Chapter 12: Wall After Wall
I definitely wouldn't call this a filler chapter. There's some interesting things going on here. I'm dreading the meeting with "Dad."
Author's Response: Ah, thank you for saying that! I was worried that it was far too little to digest (relatively). Yes, so am I! I hope you like the next one!
Date: 05/16/15 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 11: Life Adventure
Leave it to a lawyer to be able to talk his way out of that confrontation. Man, you gotta feel for Billy. His anxiety is through the roof. Don't blame him, but I like Tom's way of calming him down. The whole relationship is probably unhealthy as hell, but it does feel like it could work for both of them in the end.
Author's Response: Hopefully they will arrive at a stable point in their lives someday. For now... The entire story is the textbook for dysfunctional and unhealthy interactions. You can quote These Nights as the Do-Not book in relationships and sex. :')
Date: 05/16/15 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 10: Emily Druthers
Damn, this was a fantastic chapter! Your dialogue is incredible.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It means so much to hear that from you. <3
Date: 05/16/15 12:51 pm Title: Chapter 9: Gravity
I got behind in reading. :/ Tom's mama is so odd. I like it.
Author's Response:
I forgive you. ;) Just jesting! I'm happy you keep reading, I really am. <3
Too weird, you think? I hope to get the chance to elaborate on what exactly is going on between Tom and his mother. In time. :)
Date: 05/04/15 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 11: Life Adventure
Wow.....just wow....I really have no words, this chapter is fantastic! Finally some things between them are out, they definitely needed to talk ( and I needed them to talk because I was definitely getting confused, the good kind of confused, like when plot and characters are complex and you heve to remember details to understand) I really love Tom's characterisation in there, the more we now about him, the more I appreciate how you describe him!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, you're right - they did need to talk. I am still astounded by the fact that it's only been three days in their time. Yes, a talk was due indeed. Thank you again. I appreciate your feedback. <3
Date: 05/03/15 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 11: Life Adventure
It's very sweet of a chapter for me. This part is where I'm getting to know more about Tom and his private life. Life adventure. In his thirties, and still a bachelor? A life of a lawyer. In my opinion, I think Tom wondered how does it feel like to have someone in his life for him to care and be cared. Billy is his...how do you say it, what he's looking for? I like the part where you mentioned emotional roller-coaster. Tom would like to get on a ride of a lifetime, if he prefer that. Same goes for Bill. He grew up without knowing how does it feel like to have a father figure in his life or parents figure. He has his mother but his mother 'loves' him too much. I guess it's good to have someone who really cares in a good way. And I hope things about Tom's job, their relationship and Billy's situation is getting better. I do love the baby boy Francis!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for the review! Nice to know what you liked :D
Date: 05/03/15 09:36 am Title: Chapter 10: Emily Druthers
The legal aspect is an important part of the story and hopefully, it should do good for Billy. But this Emily doesn't seem to be the one who gives up easily.
Now I would love to see how Billy's going to deal with his emptions and feelings. He is in love and he is loved by Tom, but of course, his problem of addiction and the traumatism of incest are still here. I would love to see how the two will live and fight that horror. Your description of what Billy had to handle was very strong and so was the part with the psychiatrist. I would love to read more about that...
Author's Response: Good to see you again! Thank you for the review, and the kind words. I'm glad you brought that up, because I've finished with the next chapter, which notes (spoiler alert!) quite a number of emotional issues that present themselves between the two. Sadly, however, I've been unable to post it due to technical problems. I certainly hope that it will be solved soon. Because I'm so terribly optimistic, I will be trying to submit the next chapter once more after I've finished this reply. Hope you enjoy the next one. <3
Date: 05/01/15 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 10: Emily Druthers
you are an awesome writer....i love your story it has a lovely flow...good job
Author's Response: Hey there! Thanks so much for your kind words <3 Hope you enjoy the future chapters. I'd love to hear what you think on the next ones :)
Date: 04/29/15 12:41 pm Title: Chapter 10: Emily Druthers
Hahaha so funny. Like a boss💜 i love Tom in this fic, to me the whole lawyer stuff combined with Toms hotness is sexy.
Author's Response: Anything combined with Tom is sexy, no? After all, he is the Sex Gott :P
Date: 04/29/15 12:32 pm Title: Chapter 8: Father Figures
Such a great chapter: I love to get to know more about Billy😍
Author's Response: Ah, I know it's a lengthy, heavy chapter, and I'm glad you liked it :)
Date: 04/29/15 12:19 pm Title: Chapter 9: Gravity
First as always : I love the way you write. Everything just comes to live in the sweetest way. I am probably your biggest fan😍😍
Second: toms mother is really bothering me. She is a weired women and I dont like her.
As for my personal believes I think Bill should just take it slow with the sex and try to build a relationship on other grounds. However that woukd mean less delicious sexscenes and that we dont want😃
Author's Response:
Hi there, sweetheart!
Thank you so much for the reviews <3 Thank you for saying that. I'm thankful for all the support. Yes, you're absolutely right on the Bill issue! A real relationship will indeed need more aspects in its (successful) formation, not just sex. Thing is, whether they even want a genuine relationship...
Date: 04/29/15 12:02 am Title: Chapter 10: Emily Druthers
I dunno what it is but I smiled when i read this chapter!
I think it's because of 'the good news'.
But really, though, Emily's characteristics sounds very familiar: seductress, for example.
And she's all about winning and in a way, intimidating.
And she put sex on the table just to win.
So she and Tom, they used to be something before Billy?
He used to be in love with Emily and got rejected by her.
Maybe since then, he got his guard up.
So the part where she flatter him, sounds like she wanted to have sex with him so that Tom would let her win but he knew better.
That's a good advice on the second last paragraph ;)
Author's Response:
Why familiar? Who reminds you of Emily then? ;)
Thanks again <3