Date: 05/08/25 06:00 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 05/24/15 07:16 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
I love fluff (insert bright eyes) and I loved this fic
Date: 03/22/15 12:56 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
GET OUTTA TOWN THIS IS THE CUTEST THING EVER. I loved it! So sweet! Thanks so much for sharing! :*
Author's Response: you're welcome so much!
Date: 03/20/15 10:07 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
Awww, I thought it was cute! Fluffy, like pomeranian puppies!
Author's Response: POOF POOF!
Date: 03/19/15 03:39 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
That was so unbelievably sweet! :D Really needed that today *heart* And that banner graphic is so cute!
Enjoyed that you put the dates; it gives a coherent sense of time flow. Also, totally thought that was Bill's bf that he bumped into in the penultimate snippet, but then I remembered that Andreas usually has (had?) blond hair.
Author's Response: i thought that picture was so adorable! i needed something quick and that one just jumped out at me. thanks for reading!
Date: 03/18/15 09:09 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
AWWWWWWWWW not lame at all! This was really, really sweet! I really liked it!
Author's Response: thanks very much!
Date: 03/17/15 04:19 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
Oh so cute!!!
Author's Response: thank you so much! i'm shocked at all the love people seem to have for my random little one shot! thanks for reading!
Date: 03/16/15 11:37 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
This was super super dooper adorable!!! Totally put a smile on my face. Hehe. :) Thank you.
Author's Response: put a smile on mine, too. thanks for reading!
Date: 03/16/15 06:05 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
Aww its cute :)
Author's Response: thanks so much!
Date: 03/16/15 06:02 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
It was not lame! I thought it was realy cute! I loved it. short and sweet.
Author's Response: like me! lol thanks for reading!
Date: 03/16/15 02:38 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
Totally not lame! This is really cute and unique! It's really ingenious to think of a story from the delivery guy's point of view. Those people must see everything! lol And, dude, I totally understand writing something completely random and out of the blue when having writer's block on the important shit. I myself randomly stayed up till like four last night writing a couple pages on something not even in this fandom lol I hope getting your creativity going again can help unblock you :)
Author's Response: omg! you're so right! just imagine some of the shit delivery guys see! *shudder* and here's hoping for unblockage soon. thanks for reading!
Date: 03/16/15 01:59 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
That was in reaction to your author's note, not saying this isn't good, I enjoyed it :)
Author's Response: lol i understand. thanks for reading!
Date: 03/16/15 01:58 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
I need to do something like this...my perfectionism has become crippling and I haven't written for...years. That's sad. I need to just get over it, I'll only get worse with lack of practice!
Date: 03/16/15 10:23 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
Wow. Hiii ^o^!! I read this last night before I slept and was too tired to write a coherent review, so I thought it would be best if I left it until today, so here I am.
I love this anyway; even though it's quite short and I could've read more of this if you were to give it to me, it was direct and straight to the point, and that really did draw me in. I quite liked how you wrote this though, the format and structure was almost in a diary entry type way; it's different and very intriguing to me as both a reader and a writer. I really enjoyed reading about Tom's experiences with Bill (and Bill's boyfriend too!) whenever he was delivering to their place, it really does build suspense for the last scene when we find out that Tom is taking Bill out. Shit, this was sweet.
So cute, I'd definitely read a lot more of these little one shots if you were to throw some more out here for us. Amazing, I love this. < 3
Author's Response: you know, i don't even know why i added the dates for each scene. people seem to like that little detail though, so woo hoo! and hell, maybe a bunch of one shots is what i need to get my motivation back for a longer story. we'll see what i come up with.
Date: 03/16/15 09:53 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
Haha aw, it's cute
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: 03/16/15 05:15 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
More fluff please!z88;I need it!
Author's Response: thanks for reading!
Date: 03/16/15 05:10 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
Aaaahhhhhhh!!!! I LOVE IT! So cute and fluffy and cute and awwwww! Love love love it!
Author's Response: so...double cute?
Date: 03/16/15 02:33 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
Yay! So cute with a happy ending, thank you.
Author's Response: you're welcome. and thank you!
Date: 03/16/15 01:44 am Title: who doesn't love pizza?
I really liked it.... Wish it wasn't just a one shot...
Author's Response: yeah, just a one shot for this one. thanks for reading!
Date: 03/15/15 11:42 pm Title: who doesn't love pizza?
This was actually kind of perfect. 😻
Author's Response: wow! thanks!