Date: 05/07/15 03:19 am Title: Date
still waitin' :( hope everything's ok!
Date: 04/10/15 11:22 am Title: Date
glad to hear that!! haha, Bill is my favorite, too ;) hopeyou'll update soon! take care :)
Date: 04/09/15 06:00 pm Title: Date
I like the story, but I don't like the way you write. I'm sorry for telling this, but it's complicated to figure out who actually speaking. I dont want you to hate me, I just want to say my opinion.
Author's Response: Thank you for your honesty. I've gone back and made a few adjustments hopefully now it is easier to understand who is speaking.
Date: 04/09/15 01:10 pm Title: Date
yeees! haha i couldn't wait for the update! well i am team bill by any means though, sooo... i want more gallll! :D thanks for the new chapter i'm really getting into it ;)
Author's Response: More Billy boy to come, dear. I'm biased, I admit it, Bill is my favorite xD hehe
Date: 03/31/15 12:38 pm Title: Friends
ohhhh i really like the way you write!! can't wait for the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The wait wont be long, dear. I will post the next chappy in a day or two (:
Date: 03/30/15 02:00 am Title: Friends
Omg!!! Plz write soon
Author's Response: Next chapter is on the way, darling (; I'll post it within a few days.
Date: 03/28/15 12:56 pm Title: Undefined
Hey there! I used to be on this site and used to read your story His Best Liar constantly during my Tokio Hotel Obsession stage in life xP. Your story was one of my favorites and I always looked forward to updates. I just remembered about it came over to check it and I CANT BELIEVE YOU'RE BACK. This is so exciting, welcome back, I can't wait to read more of your stories, especially HBL :D
Author's Response: It feels good to be back! I've been meaning to return for the longest time but writer's block was killer. I'm just happy to be writing something again (: Know that I have every intention of giving HBL the proper ending it deserves. That story was my baby and I will post a new chapter for it as soon as I can! (:
Date: 03/21/15 03:33 pm Title: Undefined
uhm... sorry to blurt it out like that but >"___insert name here___"< seems to me soo friggin' dump xD I really wouldn't do that...
I don't know if you wrote in another respond of so else but I red that you'll continue with HBL... you will?
Author's Response: Well noted lol and, yes, I will continue HBL as soon as i possibly can (:
Date: 03/21/15 10:22 am Title: Reality
good to see you're writing and uploading again! :)
the start is interesting. makes the reader want to read more. for me, because there are some questions still unanswerred but I think they'll be pointed out in the further chapters.
1.) to be honest, I am somehow against a name. it wouldn't fit the story in my opinion. if you name the main character, you could have write the story in third-person narrator
2.) depends... this goes along with my own questions. how did we met? how we developed this relationship? what has happened to the two of us? and how are the others involved?
there are more unanswered questions but then it'd go beyond the scope of the review xD
3.) uhm... like :D so far. I'd really like to read more!
greetz,
Cinderella
Author's Response: Thank you, my darling. Its great to be back! I'm happy you're enjoying the story so far. Do not fret! All questions will be answered in good time (; Personally, I agree with you on the name. It allows the reader to connect better with the story the way it is, I think. That's what I'm trying to do anyhow. But I was thinking if I skip on the name eventually I could be inclined to write "___insert name here___" at some point. So I leave the choice up to my wonderful readers. We'll see how it pans out. Stay tuned there is more coming soon! Much love, DNT4GET.
Date: 03/20/15 06:41 pm Title: Undefined
holy crow, it's good to see you writing again! I used to read and be obsessed with His Best Liar. I liked this! Great start! I'd like to read more!
Author's Response: I know it's been foreverrrr! I was afraid all my readers had left me :s It feels great to be writing again. I'm glad you like the story so far (: I'm currently re-reading HBL myself. I promise I'll add to it soon!
Date: 03/13/15 12:45 pm Title: Undefined
This was great, I'm looking forward to the next chapter c:
Author's Response: I'm happy you think so. The next chapter has just been posted, darling (: