Again, I know you give credit where credit is due, but thanks:)

I loved this, is was really sweet and it is almost like it could stand on it's own or as part of something bigger. It's really great, and sweet.

One thing I don't understand is why is her father wouldn't call her 'her' and 'she' until after the surgery. I mean, how often is he going to be seeing Bill's genitalia to remind him?

That matter aside, the father actually seems quite realistic, and I like him. I also like Billa and his friends, they are great. I hope we go more in depth, and also see a lot more of his dad. He is a good dad, and there are very few of those on this site (And I am part of that offending party, I will admit, who makes him an evil alcoholic).

Have you ever watched the youtuber, Princessjoules? The picture you used of Bill (edited) reminded me of her. She is the most gorgeous human alive, as far as I know.

xxx
J

Keep it up:)

Author's Response: Jorg wanted to wait until after the surgery because to him that was still his son. The reality didn't hit him until after the reassignment that Bill was now Billa. I guess as a writer that's my fault for not making that clearer don't worry. And don't worry about the slip ups everyone makes them once in a while when you're not used to it. Plus this is a fictional story so you often think of Bill and not Billa when you read and review. I'm glad it's sweet, your story really inspired it and so did "In My Daughter's Eyes" by Martina McBride. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it because I enjoyed writing it.

I have to tell you that I found this to be a very honest, true to life (albeit in abbreviated form) perception of the transitioning process. I enjoyed every word of it and could just imagine how much more detail you could have gone into if you'd written a chapter story. Regardless, I absolutely loved this. As the mother of a transitioning son, I appreciate you posting something so positive about transgendered people for others to read and perhaps think a bit more before judging others. Keep up the great work

Author's Response: You have no idea how much this review touched my heart. I am so proud to know that my story, though short, means something to someone. I congratulate your son and I wish him ultimate happiness. I try to stay positive when it comes to this because I have transgender friends and they've told me how much they appreciate how accepting I am. I thought I'd just put those feelings in this story.