Date: 03/07/10 05:08 am Title: Chapter 1
for your first twincest, I thought it was very well done! Congrats!
Date: 11/19/09 08:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Love the story!!!
Date: 03/28/09 04:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
its about tiem Tomi decided to take just Billa. lol. loved it!
Date: 06/29/08 02:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
nope it didnt sux it was gorgeous and i loved it ALOT! great job
Date: 06/01/08 01:07 pm Title: Chapter 1
No! it was amazingly! you moste write another chapter of this... so that we can see what happen next with them!! =)
Date: 04/21/08 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
It doesn't suck! I loved it!
“No more girls?”
“No more girls”
awww...they belong together...
Date: 11/12/07 11:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd say watch the spelling, and add some commas. Run on sentences aren't fun, but over all, good story!
Date: 08/27/07 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
it's wonderful and it's not sucks
Author's Response: AWWWW Thanks ^^
Date: 08/27/07 02:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
No! It was VERY good, actually! I kind of get the feeling you might not be from an English speaking country? Maybe not. Your English is very good, you just need a tiny bit of beta-ing, but all in all, it was a great story!
Author's Response: Well no not really but English is my best subject in school ^^.. thanks glad you liked it :)
Date: 08/27/07 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sucks? This is one of the best i´ve ever read! You´re good at this, so keep writing twincest. I´ll read all of them!
Author's Response: Wow really? Thanks ^^ I'll post more in the future promise :P
Date: 08/27/07 12:43 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw that was sweet :)
Author's Response: thanks ^^
Date: 08/27/07 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
^^ It was good (* pat you on the head *)
Author's Response: AWWWWWWWW thanksrnrn*smiles stupidly as you pat my head*
Date: 08/27/07 11:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Really? Thanks ^^ ok maybe i don't suck as much as i thought :P
Date: 08/27/07 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
fuck yea no more girls.
first attempt 'eh well it was one of the best i've read, very good :):):):)