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Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/16/15 01:23 am Title: First date

Oh boy, if they fall asleep & Georg finds them together, it could get ugly.

Author's Response: Hohohoo it could get ugly you're right but I'm not gonna tell what's gonna happen so you juat have to wait and find out muahahahahahahahahahahaa! XD thanks for revuewing!! :D

Reviewer: ariana123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/15 11:05 pm Title: First date

Ahh omg I've waiting for you to update I missed reading this story

Author's Response: I'm sorry for being so late with this chapter but glad that you're still sticking around and waiting for this! <3

Reviewer: MrTinyDestiny Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/15 08:17 pm Title: First date

Better late then never :D Awesome chapter

Author's Response: True that!! :D Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: VaryKay Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/15/15 07:43 pm Title: First date

I love it! Good job!:3

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad! Thanks! :D

Reviewer: VaryKay Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/15 08:20 pm Title: Solution

Next part? *-*

Author's Response: Yes, I'm currently working with the next chapter so... :D Sorry for being slow! :D

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/04/15 04:45 pm Title: Solution

sexy hexy!

Author's Response: Hehe, yeah ;)rn

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/03/15 12:14 am Title: Solution

Noooo! I don't want this to be the last chapter! Ahh please update really soon! I'm so happy Bill decided to report it to the police and I love, again, how cute he and Tom were but I still get the feeling that something bigger is going to happen and it scares me xD Eeee!

Author's Response: Haha :DD It is a good thing that Bill reported it to the police, so Tom doesn't have to rough those boys up :D But we'll see, we'll see ;) and I try to be fast with the next chapter :D

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 11:54 pm Title: Songs and surprises

seriously, I can't handle the cuteness *O* I love them so much. Eeeh! And I love that they all performed together; that was so freaking cute! But damn Bill is getting adventurous ;)

Author's Response: Hehe, I'm glad you do! Yes he is ;) Well he is a teenager with raging hormones so what would you expect? XD

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 11:34 pm Title: The shadow of happiness

Awww, Bill and Tom are so fucking cute together. I'm so happy they're finally a couple! I'm also really happy Bill has such a protective brother to take care of him.

Author's Response: They are cute together, you're right about that! And Georg is a wonderful brother!

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 11:16 pm Title: Walkover

Omg! I feel so horrible for Bill. I mean for the people he called friends to react so badly that they beat the shit out of him. Poor baby :c Only good that came out of that was that Tom was there to take care of them and it finally broke down that damn wall they had between each other. At last they're together! Well mostly together, lol. Curious to see what that next step will be! I really want to know Georg's reaction! A part of me is really hopping he actually already knows but is just playing it cool for Bill's sake. Eeee!

Author's Response: Yes it's horrible! Bill really didn't deserve what he got, but unfortunately there's no such thing as a just world :( But there's always a silver lining to every cloud and in this case, Tom finally gave in and let himself be happy with Bill ;) Hehehe, but I'm not giving anything away, you shall see when the time comes if Georg knew anything and how he finds out and reacts ;)

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 10:57 pm Title: Problems

FUCK! Ahhh I really hope nothing happens to Bill now! Clearly he's been hanging around some crappy people :/

Author's Response: He has hasn't he? :D

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 10:40 pm Title: Truce

Ahhh well Tom had what was coming to him but damn to get weeks of the silent treatment sucks! Especially for Bill. I don't feel like I could ever be that quiet lol. I'm happy they finally worked it all out and I hope Bill doesn't go and be a bitch and put them back in square one. But I guess someone has to make the first move...Hmm

Author's Response: Yeah I personally could never silent treatment anyone that long but Bill is a bit different XD Yes well, you'll see, you'll see ;)

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 10:20 pm Title: Plans and regrets

Holy.....wow just wow xD So much happened in this chapter I don't even know where to start but man! It was so good. And that scene on the couch *O* A+ my friend. But I do have to admit, Bill's tactics were pretty bad xD But I guess Tom got even with that last insult. Oooo man.. these two

Author's Response: Hehe, Bill's tactics are horrible aren't they? XD He isn't the best at creating plans XD But he is young so perhaps we can forgive him his ignorance. :D

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 01:11 pm Title: Confusion and awkward moments

Ha! Figures, as soon as I start the chapter, there's Tom's self reflection on the kiss! It's like you knew I'd be curios ;) But oh my God! I'm so mad I have to stop reading and get to work! This is getting so tense but in a really fucking sweet way! I mean poor Tom he's in such a fucking horrible place, I do not envy him and I worry how Georg is going to react. Part of me thinks he'll be okay but since he knows how Tom's treated past relationships, he's probably not going to react too well. But ahhhh! That last scene was so cute! I'm kind of worried Georg may actually have been awake to see Tom lay Bill down and all of that. If he did I guess that's just the start of something more. Jesus, why must I go to work????

Author's Response: Yes of course! This was first written in Tom's and Bill's point of views in a first-person narrative but I decided to change it a little as I started to write in English, so the chapters are still a bit from Tom's and Bill's point of view in turn :D Haha yes well, we shall see how Georg reacts when he finds out, how he finds out and has he suspected anything ;)

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 12:46 pm Title: Confession

I'm just trying to imagine Bill's morning and Jesus that must have not only sucked, but hurt! Haha, poor baby! I'm really happy he came out to Andreas though, that seems like it went insanely well. But I guess since Andreas is straight that ruins my theory of him being into Bill xD Oh well, guess that saves some drama. But now thanks to Andreas, the gears in Bill's head are turning xD Man, oh, man, I can't wait to see what the little shit does next to get Tom's attention! But I do have to wonder (I feel like I never stop wondering, lol) how Tom is feeling about that kiss! On to the next one!

Author's Response: Andreas is a great friend so of course he'd accept his childhood friend just the way he is :D Yes it kinda does doesn't it ;) That could've been a great way to create drama though, but I didn't even think about that as a possibility when I started this and well, I think there's gonna be enough drama without Andreas having a thing for Bill :DD Hehe well keep on reading and you shall get the answers you seek ;)

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 12:18 pm Title: Drunken lust and crushed dreams

Holy crap, what a whirlwind of a chapter! I mean poor Tom. He finally comes to a resolve, a good one at that! But then here comes Bill drunk as fuck and totally ruins it! I do have to wonder what would have happened if Bill hadn't cum in his pants; would Tom have taken things further? Ahhh! So nuts. And I mean as bad as I feel for Bill being broken hearted, I'm actually really proud of how Tom handled things; aside from the kiss. Which don't get me wrong I'm sooo happy they kissed, that just means there's a whole new can of worms that was opened. But eee! I'm so excited to read more!

Author's Response: Hehe, trust Bill to ruin Tom's resolves XDD Yes well, we don't know if Tom would've been able to prevent himself from touching Bill if Bill hadn't gotten waaaaay too eager and cum in his pants XD Yes, well. Tom is bound to give in to Bill little by little :DD I'm so glad you're enjoying this! :D

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 03:03 am Title: Drunkennes

Ahhhh!! I can't believe Bill walked in on Tom jerking off and then Tom busted Bill on sketching him. Man these two freaking suck at keeping their thoughts and actions to themselves XD I love it though! That's also amazing that Bill manged to find another virgin at the party and keep his secret safe. I just really hope she doesn't turn into some bitch and tell everyone :/ Now I'm looking forward to seeing how Tom react to Bill saying he wants him!

Author's Response: Yes they do! They are probably worst in that area, aren't they? :DD Yes Bill was pretty lucky wasn't he? And well... you'll see, you'll see ;)

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 12:59 am Title: In denial

Okay so to say that this was a small improvement wouldn't even cover it. They almost kissed! Omg! Screw whoever texted Bill and ruined the moment! I mean I'm sure its for the better since Tom clear has a lot more he needs to resolve before anything happens between he and Bill but daaaaayum.

Author's Response: Yeah, we need some tension between those two so yeah :D But yeah it's probably good that they didn't kiss since like you just said, Tom has a lot of stuff to resolve before anything could happen :D

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 12:19 am Title: Lies after lies

Well at least Bill's school life is pretty normal and nothing to worry over, but I do wonder if Andreas knows about his sexuality or what. I also get suspicious that maybe even Andreas has a thing for Bill. Who knows xD But that's such a bummer Tom is such a douche when it comes to relationships, poor Bill must be crushed. But at least Georg warned him! By the way, how old are Georg and Tom?

Author's Response: Yeah Bill's school life is pretty average so :D Well Andreas may or may not suspect something XD But yeah, you'll see it in the later chapters if you haven't already seen it :DD Yes well, Bill might be a bit crushed by that fact, but we'll see how things evolve ;) Georg and Tom are both 22, I think it's mentioned in one or two chapters somewhere :D

Reviewer: Rainii93 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/15 12:03 am Title: Breakfast for two

I feel bad for both Bill and Tom; that must have been one hell of an awkward day! But at least there was a little bit of progress when they went out for that second smoke,

Author's Response: Yes it was quite awkward at first perhaps :P But they'll get past it :D

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