Date: 03/23/15 07:10 am Title: Chapter 4
Love this!
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D
Date: 03/22/15 01:58 pm Title: Chapter 4
I like! Can't wait to see their relationship develop! a86;
Author's Response: Thanks! More will be up soon :)
Date: 03/22/15 07:34 am Title: Chapter 4
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
Date: 03/21/15 10:36 pm Title: Chapter 4
Figures the social worker would show up when Bill is sloshed. He handled it pretty well, for the most part, though I'm sure Tom wanted to slug him for trying to be funny.
The social worker has a good point. I keep thinking about how it's going to affect Olive by living with two people who obviously don't like each other and fight all the time. No better than if it was bio parents the same way. I can't wait to see where you take this.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :D
Date: 03/21/15 07:39 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm sure that they will make the right decission someday :) Great chapter, can't wait for the next one :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Date: 03/21/15 04:17 pm Title: Chapter 4
They were lucky that she didnīt come earlier :D
Author's Response: Yeah haha. Thanks for reviewing!! :D
Date: 03/21/15 10:13 am Title: Chapter 4
Great!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/21/15 07:09 am Title: Chapter 4
lol what a time for unexpected visits.
Author's Response: Very inconvenient haha. XD
Date: 03/21/15 01:56 am Title: Chapter 4
No!!!! Your chapters need to be longer!! Im on the edge of my seat!!
Author's Response: And here I thought I was making this chapter too long, lol. There shall be more up soon! Thanks for reviewing XD
Date: 03/15/15 08:06 am Title: Chapter 3
I love the movie! It always make me tear up! And when I saw that someone FINALLY wrote a Tom/Bill "version" of it, I screamed! I screamed with happiness! I'm very happy about it so far and i think itbwill get even better! thank yooooou!! love it!
Date: 03/15/15 02:27 am Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for more.
Date: 03/15/15 02:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Your stories are always so sweeet!! Love this! Please keep it up!!!
Date: 03/14/15 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 3
Awh, I feel so sorry for them that they need to live without their friends and I feel sorry for the little girl that she needs to live without her parents :( But everything will be okay :) I hope. Great chapter :)
Date: 03/14/15 02:45 pm Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 03/14/15 10:09 am Title: Chapter 3
Aw~ that ending tho. I loved how Bill is so cocky about telling Tom he couldn't have have him anyways. Lol
Date: 03/14/15 09:59 am Title: Chapter 1
So cute and nice plot!! I liked it!!
I will keep reading.
Date: 03/14/15 03:54 am Title: Chapter 3
This story is really amazing! :)
Date: 03/14/15 03:00 am Title: Chapter 3
Why must you hurt me like this. I think I got serum in my eyes from all this moisture. Ack. Also, "we are gay!" was hilarious. I hope Tom fully accepts who he is :(