Date: 02/05/15 10:40 pm Title: Good Night, Moko
Surely nothing good has happened to Bill in the past :( Hopefully Tom can help him confront whatever has happened to him.
It sounds as though he's been back stabbed by his former "friends" and his old boyfriend really seems like scum-- I can't believe he would try to drown Bill :(
Author's Response: I think everyone has some good in their past, otherwise they wouldn't keep up. I hope he can too, otherwise we might be stuck in a very sunny tragicomedy. rnrnI think you might be right. I was listening to a lot of feminist spoken word, and the word 'no' really means something, and it makes people angry to hear it. I think Bill was trying to explain they were equal in a relationship and he didn't want what...let's call him Josh, wanted.
Date: 02/05/15 04:59 pm Title: New Faces
Love it already
Author's Response: I am glad:)
Date: 02/05/15 03:38 pm Title: New Faces
It's a nice beginning. I hope you write soon because I'm curious to learn more about them.
Author's Response: I hope to have another chapter up today. It's in my town, so I already know everything about it, haha. It's easy to write about:)rnrnThank you!
Date: 02/05/15 02:43 pm Title: New Faces
I love where this is going :)
I appreciate the richness of the detail and the dynamism of Tom's character; I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. rnrnI am glad you like it, and I have been told deep characters are my asset. I like to write people more than views, but I know the view so well here I might as well try. I am glad!rnrnPlease stay tuned:)