Date: 08/16/15 04:41 pm Title: It's Always Calm...
I'm with you girl, I want a cottage too...But man this chapter! The first half I was all but flying off the handle. Tom being all mushy just killed me! I melted on spot when he told Bill he didn't want to leave him! So sweet. I'm also insanely happy he tried to call Eric to cancel the job. Too bad he doesn't know he's been killed...
As for the second half, son of a bitch! I really just don't have a good feeling about Gordon. I don't know. I hope I'm just being hyper paranoid or something. But I'm now sure he has to be up to something.. And please for the love of God, tell me Tom is going to come clean in the next chapter?! It's been dragging on for too long and I swear if he doesn't, someone else will and that will end a lot worse than it will if he's honest.
Date: 08/16/15 04:16 pm Title: One Rainy Day
Shit, down with Andi! Haha, I no longer like him even a little bit. I hate that he's now planting thoughts of distrust in Bill's head. At least it sounds like he's still willing to trust Tom's word over anyone else's. However, Tom needs to come clean soon before Bill does decide he can't trust him.
Date: 08/16/15 03:49 pm Title: Story Time
All of this is totally nuts. It's crazy to think Tom was in the SAS before he became an assassin. It still some how makes sense. It was also really nice to get a new look into Tom's life. Obviously there's still things we don't know, but what we do know is cool. I'm curious though about that photo Natalie found; does it have any real significance? Or is it just a photos. hmm,,
Date: 08/16/15 03:30 pm Title: Unspoken Goodnight
I want to spazz out over the kiss, because why not lol I love that they're getting much closer, but really I'm freaking out over Andreas! Like freaking A man, I should have guessed that Andi wouldn't let Tom as easy as it seemed. Hopefully Tom figures it out ASAP before something else happens
Date: 08/16/15 03:16 pm Title: Cigarette, Bond, and No Chad
I just read the title of the chapter and skipped to the bottom to review before reading, I love the title. I'm freaking dying; so funny. Now back to the top so I can read!
Frankly a part of me feels like Andi is doing this job not only for the money, but because of jealousy. I mean he basically confirmed it when he thought about roughing Bill up a bit. But I'm glad his answer to the little kid didn't traumatize him lol
And holy crap! Bill blushing and hiding it was the cutest thing in the world. But aside from all of that, THEY KISSED! Finally! And no freaking Cahd to ruin it! Happy days lol
Date: 08/16/15 02:53 pm Title: In The Sky
There are many many things I want to say but at this point the only thing I can come up with is: Fuck you Chad.
Date: 08/16/15 02:36 pm Title: Adrenaline
Crap! I was completely freaking out! First I was upset with Bill being such a bitch to Tom again, but then Andi had to make a scene! I mean crap I had my worries that the might not be up to any good, but I didn't actually expect it. Now I want to know who Andi is working for. I still lean towards David having ties to this some how. Ahhh!
Date: 08/16/15 02:14 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
Freaking A lol And here I thought progress was being made but nope! It's like two steps back for these two. Aye. After the way you left the last chapter I was expecting more tension for this one, but I got a different kind, lol. I'm still on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happened to Eric. I still want to know what's up with Andi since he's been MIA.
Date: 08/16/15 01:59 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 1)
Okay scratch that, this is my new favourite chapter. I've been spazzing out the whole time. I love that Bill opened up to Tom, even if it was just a tiny bit. And I also love how Tom is now reevaluating his whole situation. I'm hoping he'll come clean to Bill and that they'll instead turn their attention to whoever sent Tom the job.
Date: 08/16/15 01:38 pm Title: Ordinary
Poor Bill :( Is it weird to feel sympathy for a mob boss xD? Either way I do, but I'm happy there was some "normal" interaction between Tom and Bill. Looking forward to more and Im eager to find out who killed Eric.
Date: 08/16/15 01:15 pm Title: A Proper Introduction
Just picturing Bill eating a Big Mac just cracks me up. This chapter had me cracking up a lot though, Tom and his smart ass, the matching outfit, the body guards and Andi! I'm excited that Andi is now in the picture but I'm also worried
Date: 08/16/15 12:53 pm Title: Prisoner
I know Tom is good at what he does but I just get the feeling that Bill can see through the bull shit and sees exactly what Tom's doing. I also wonder why Bill stop the human trafficking; I feel like there's a good back story to that. Also, I just looked up the song Tom is singing; it's so good!
Date: 08/16/15 12:39 pm Title: The Count
Totally and utterly freaking out! Probably my favourite chapter so far! I'm picturing the whole fight scene and just ah! I now wish Tom would get a roll in a movie similar to this story, lol. But Bill! Man, he does seem bitchy, haha. Can't wait to see how he deals with Tom.
Date: 08/16/15 01:49 am Title: The Agents
Eeee Tom! You need to watch yourself, Georg and Mara are coming for you! Lmao. I really loved something about Mara and Georg's phone call and the way they were talking about Tom; super interesting.
Date: 08/16/15 01:38 am Title: Flower-Boy
Gustav is such a little shit lol I love it! But now I have the guess that David was on the other end of that phone call? Like maybe he's sick of working under someone and wants to be in charge.. Who knows!
Date: 08/16/15 12:52 am Title: Eric Guillaume
Well damn, that was a twist I sure as hell didn't see coming. I want to know who was on the phone. I guess Bill but that's because he hasn't been in the story yet, lol.
Date: 08/16/15 12:04 am Title: Two Parties
Freaking bagels lol But man I don't feel like I could blame Andi either, I mean its Tom. Come on now ;) Shitty though that Kelly had to go to jail for what Tom did.
Date: 08/15/15 11:43 pm Title: The Art of War
That's an awesome way to start a story! Something about the way Tom broke down how he was killing Archibald, mademe think of Sherlock Holmes, idk. Either way great start and I'm excited to read more!
Date: 08/05/15 03:21 pm Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
NO! FUCK YOU! FUCK YOU SO MUCH! (It's really shouted with love, don't take it literally.)
Okay, okay, okay. Where to start. I'm shaking. SHAKING!
*takes deep breaths* From the top.
Somehow I really, really like Gordon. He seems intimidating as hell, but also.. well, I don't know, but I really like him. (Thank you so much for not making Bill and Tom twins, btw, I would've cried if you had done that) and it was really interesting to get to know a bit about Tom's parents, and his past. I really like how you give is bits and pieces of it now and then, instead of just dropping it all on us at one go.
The scene with Andreas, maaaaan I was sitting here SHOUTING out loud. I must have said "fuck you" at least fifteen times while reading it.
To explain that, when I get too excited about a fic, I tend to start yelling, and "fuck you" is literally always me yelling at the writer for writing too damn good because then I get so excited I don't know what to do with myself and I start shaking and I TOTALLY LOVE THAT FEELING buuuuut I have to pause all the time to take deep breaths and calm down and IT'S EXHAUSTING REALLY (in an amazing way)
Okay, where was I... YES! The part with it NOT being Andreas was sooooo brilliant! Goddammit, and here I thought I couldn't love this story any more than I already did. Fuck you, you're too amazing. Like really, you are.
The ending. THE ENDING. I NEED to know who it is. I NEED IT. Fucking hell I'm so excited I don't know what to do! If you could see me right now you would think I'm insane, and thank god for my little cottage where no one can hear me because I've been yelling A LOT while reading this, WHICH is a true sign of my love for a story. My sister use to say that if I go way too quiet or shout way too much it means it's dangerous to get too close because if you interrupt me I might rip your head off. That's pretty much me while reading this one, and with this story I'm the noisy, screaming one.
Which is also a reason why I'm so slow with reading and reviewing at the time being, I'm really sorry about that, but I have to be alone when I read this one or everyone will think I'm insane haha!
Okay, I'm rambling.
BUT I LOVE THIS! IT'S AMAZING!
Oh, and I'm so happy you changed back to the old banner! It's so gorgeous, I'm in love with it *happy sigh*
Great chapter! Update soon, please!
Author's Response: lol I just re-read your review and I laughed so hard at how you completely freaked out XD love yoru review, as always, and I love you for still sticking with this story XDDD
Date: 08/02/15 05:34 pm Title: Connections and Misunderstandings
I think I wanna know who the employer is hahaha. Ugh... Your cliffhangers keep me so interested and anxious to read more. I cant wait until the next chapter. Love the pic, by the way.
Author's Response: Cliffhangers are my specialty lolol the next chapter is up!