Date: 03/26/15 09:18 am Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 1)
I loved how Tom held onto Bill's hand just a little too long. It speaks volumes. I'm so glad they finally got alone time!! Yay!!
Author's Response: Finally yeah? Lol we'll see more of them!
Date: 03/26/15 08:32 am Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 1)
Awh man, so good! I want more and more and more, doesn't matter how long the chapters are, they're never long enough. Not that I complain, don't take me wrong, I'm just so in love with this story that I wish I could keep on reading forever.
So Tom is starting to question his mission, huh? Guess that's something new to him? He doesn't seem to be the person to normally care about the reason to why he's killing people, he just does it because he's good at it and it's good money. But then again, I bet he's never had anything to do with someone as fascinating as Bill!
I wonder what they're actually planning to do to Tom? Why do they keep him alive? It's not like they can be planning on ever letting him go, right? And what's the point in keeping someone so dangerous alive when it would simply be easier to just get rid of him? So many questions, and I hope we'll get to know what's going on sooner or later!
I feel so sorry for Bill's bodyguards, it can't be easy to work for him haha. If they don't leave when he says so they'll get a hell, but if something would happen under their watch.. wouldn't be pretty lol. Poor things haha!
I love this so much, such an amazing story, and I'll impatiently wait for more.
Great chapter!
Author's Response: ...and all would be answered in part 2. Along with more mysteries and twists! Yes I'm evil that way. Thanks for the review, I always love then so much!
Date: 03/26/15 08:08 am Title: Ordinary
Gonna give you a proper review on this one before I move on to next chapter, even though I'm so, so impatient and want to know what will happen like right now! Aaaahhhh!! *tries to type as fast as she can*
I really enjoyed seeing more of Bill. He is such an interesting character and I love the way you portray him. What I like the most is that even when he's cold he's got a human side, which is very clear when you explain him even if the people around him doesn't see it. Like that he can't admit that he's tired, and that he wish he could take a break sometimes. He's so young and he's got such a heavy life, I feel sorry for him. It's interesting, I think, how you can turn a bad guy into someone you feel for. That's the thing I love most with some writers, when they make their characters two sided. They're not just bad or good, they have their good and bad sides and you can see them all, you're really doing a great job with that.
I'm kind of rambling, but I hope you understand what I mean.
So Eric is dead, huh? That's.. very, very interesting. I have no idea where you will take us with this story and that makes it even better to me. Way too many stories are so predictable and I really hate that, but with this I have no idea what will happen. It could go absolutely anywhere and I can't wait to see what will happen next.
Great chapter, moving on to the next one now!
Author's Response: I really don't know what else to say except that I love your reviews. And I am moving on to your next review.
Date: 03/21/15 02:06 pm Title: Ordinary
Amazing chapter, like always. I will write you a proper review when I get home from Germany (living with a friend right now so don't have time to write a long review), so you'll get a long one either Tuesday when I get home, or Wednesday when I've gotten some rest. But I loved this, as always, it's brilliant!
Author's Response: I will be waiting :D
Date: 03/21/15 10:26 am Title: Ordinary
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 03/21/15 09:18 am Title: Ordinary
Fuck yo Nutella mille crepes! Lol. Jk. I wanted the chapter to be longer!!! Im on the edge of my seat.
Author's Response: Lol don't diss my Nutella mille crepes! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/16/15 12:11 am Title: The Art of War
Love this Bill already! Who’s actually has a gentle soul.Andy was totally jealous LOL
Author's Response: I love Andi but I like to make him suffer MOUAHAHAHA
Date: 03/15/15 08:11 pm Title: A Proper Introduction
Awesome can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/15/15 04:31 pm Title: A Proper Introduction
Perfect chapter! I´m really curious about what Bill is planning to do with Tom...
And I have not mentioned it before, but I love your banner!!!
Author's Response: I am even more curious to know if Tom is going to let Bill do things to him...rnrnThat came out waaayyyyy wrong lolololrnThank you! I struggled with Photoshop for two hours before coming up with it :D
Date: 03/15/15 03:58 pm Title: A Proper Introduction
Great!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/15/15 02:19 pm Title: A Proper Introduction
Got me hooked up! Excellent story and very refreshing :) I was planning on to make a story like this with Bill being a boss and Tom a Killer with some boundaries between them, but seems like you started off much beautifully and really with a good flow. Good work :) keep going.
Author's Response: Awesome! Thank you for the review! If you do start off keep me informed, I would like to read it :D
Date: 03/15/15 12:15 pm Title: A Proper Introduction
I've read this twice now, and I'm still not sure what to say. It's so damn good I kind of lose every word when trying to come up with something clever to say. I feel like constantly repeating that I love this is going to get boring in the end, but truth is I really do love this story. I literally drop everything else whenever I see an update and I just can't explain the feeling when I read it. It's like... I'm barely even breathing because it's so damn good and I don't want to distract myself with my own breaths even, and every time the chapter ends I just want to scream in frustration because I want more!
To the actual chapter: I love your details, the small thing with Tom having to eat with his hands is one of those things that made me love this chapter. Sounds weird, yes, but it makes it realistic, and I love those kind of details in stories, things that makes it sound real, and obviously they would be careful with such a dangerous man. It's brilliant really.
I love how Bill seems to be curious about him, and is probably not being very smart with taking Tom out and stuff but at the same time we see his power with his comment to Saki when he saw the matching clothes, his humanity when he allowed him fries, and how dangerous he can be thinking of how fast his bodyguards reacted when Tom asked for his name. I love it, Bill is such an interesting character and I really can't wait to get to know more about them both, and for Tom to work on his plan to gain his trust.
Okay, so much rambling, I do this a lot sorry. When I really like something I often have a hard time to stop talking.
Amazing chapter! I will oh so impatiently wait for more!
Author's Response: Wow, wow, oh my God. I just love your reviews, every single one of them! Holy crap I think I need to copy your reviews and just place them in a separate file in my computer or something. Reading that you love my story this much makes me really happy, really, it does! And please do keep on rambling. I love them! *runs off to work on the next chapter*
Date: 03/09/15 08:48 pm Title: Prisoner
zarlina suggested this story on her twitter so had to check it out and wow it's so good! cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response: Wow she did?? Awesome! Thanks for checking it out and reviewing it!
Date: 03/09/15 10:25 am Title: Prisoner
Not many words but the way you describing story makes it so intense. Good job!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/09/15 09:51 am Title: Eric Guillaume
Wow this is intriguing. I'd love to find out more. Thanks for sharing with us!! XOXO
Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/09/15 09:37 am Title: Two Parties
Andreas is cute. They certainly will make a cute couple too if there's no bill in this story ;p
Author's Response: I know rightttt...dammit but Bill suits Tom too so much though lol
Date: 03/08/15 10:06 pm Title: Prisoner
I'm really enjoying Bill's character. He's... calm and laid back and.. I don't know, I just really like him, and I can't wait to see more of him. He's interesting in every single way, and so is Tom. The way he's handling the situation so calmly... I like it, a lot!
I'm so looking forward to more, this is quickly becoming one of my favourite stories. Great chapter!
Author's Response: I love how you like the characters I've set up for the boys! Reading your reviews always makes me happy and the next chapter should be up either Sunday night or Monday morning lol
Date: 03/08/15 09:40 pm Title: Prisoner
The Phantom - Into the Darkness :)) Love the update!!
Author's Response: I can't stop listening to that song! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/06/15 04:49 pm Title: The Count
All caught up again. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Awesome! Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/04/15 06:17 pm Title: The Count
Wuh oh, what's gonna happen to Tom =O
Author's Response: Nothing bad I hope lol thanks for the review!