Date: 04/06/15 06:59 am Title: Adrenaline
Lol bullet proof vests don't help against a snipers headshot. Andi is so cool in this fic lol. Did they hire him to kill Tom or was that his attempt at a rescue? Does the souvenir have contact poison on it? You got my mind going lol.
Author's Response: you have a point there lol but let's just imagine that it has a force field or something covering the head XD thanks for the review!
Date: 04/06/15 05:06 am Title: Adrenaline
Hehe, I thought the car chase scene was well-written! And I wasn't expecting Tom to get on the plane too. For some reason I thought he was *only* driving Bill to the airport.
PS: I think the lion necklace has a tracker in it. Or a bomb O.O
Oh, and can you say my username instead of/in addition to my real name? I think otherwise people won't know who the heck I am, lol. Plus there's another Emily on this site.
Author's Response: Hiya there XD to be honest I wasn't planning to get Tom on the plane but apparently my Tom and Bill have a life on their own lol
Date: 04/06/15 02:50 am Title: Adrenaline
Great chapter! It was better action than in any movie I know! :D
And now I'm curious about that gift, I have some ideas, though...
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! When I was writing the action scene, I got the whole keyboard sounding like I was hitting the keys aimlessly, so loud and fast lol
Date: 04/06/15 01:09 am Title: Adrenaline
Some awkward romantic thing needs to happen already! Sigh...Great chapter though.
Author's Response: I agree with you actually lol thanks for the review!
Date: 04/01/15 09:36 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
(reply) Sure thing! My email is celestialchik_86@yahoo.com
Date: 03/31/15 02:00 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
Great!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 03/31/15 03:19 am Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
Oh hey, by the way, do you need a beta? I'm not doing anything at the moment and I'm pretty thorough, lol.
Date: 03/30/15 05:25 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
I think that Andreas is the killer of the two. Very funny Tom's resolutions to how kill Bill but he'll be more difficult. The only Tom's chance is to save the mob boss in extremis and that's up to you to find a way to passed him to killer = savior.
Author's Response: Well we'll just have to wait and see ;D
Date: 03/30/15 12:00 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
I love this fanfic sooo much!!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Thanks! Don't worry it should be up in either Sunday or Monday :)
Date: 03/29/15 09:50 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
This chapter was awesome. Wow, delicious drama. Well-written, too ^^
In a way I'm upset that Tom apologized because now Bill really has no further reason to keep him alive D:
Author's Response: Hi and thanks for the review! And also thanks for the offer lol and I know I need one, so yeah, why not? :D I'm thinking of beta ing the earlier chapters first since the latest one is still in the process, how about that?
Date: 03/29/15 06:01 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
Great chapter again :D
Author's Response: Thanks! :D
Date: 03/29/15 04:00 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
Congratulations for featured story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you! It's kind of unbelievable that I made it to being featured!
Date: 03/29/15 09:56 am Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
Ok I'm still confused. What's Bill gonna do?!?!
Date: 03/29/15 07:18 am Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
This chapter was perfect. Literally perfect. I absolutely loved every little bit of it. Especially the lunch! It was so damn amazingly written and I was sitting here holding my breath reading it.
I love how Bill turned so quick, and I loved how Tom noticed it. It's amazing how you manage to give Bill both sides and how you can manage to make even me, as a reader, a bit afraid of him. He's so unpredictable and I'm really, really worried what will happen next.
Oh, forgot to mention, I really liked how Bill wanted an apology. It was said in the way a very powerful person would say it.
So now Tom has decided to actually kill him, huh? And Bill... what is Bill thinking? What is he planning to do to Tom? Hmmmm...
I don't know what more to say, this is so brilliant, I love every little thing with it and just the fact that I drop everything just to read this shows how much I love it. It's very rare that I get this addicted to a story, it's only happened a very few times, but with this I can't help it, it's too damn good.
Great chapter! No, brilliant even. I absolutely loved it!
Author's Response: I've had my deals with powerful people before lol but I haven't been their prisoners (thank God) so I know ;D as always, I love your reviews! And thank you for staying with it since the beginning!
Date: 03/29/15 12:52 am Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 2)
Two steps forward...then three steps back. -_-0
Author's Response: We're getting there I promise you :D
Date: 03/27/15 10:31 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 1)
Loved this chapter ^^ Their relationship is progressing nice and slow :)
Ah, little error here: A red deer is that should be A red deer, at that
Author's Response: Oops, thanks for pointing it out! English is my second language so I do get a little confused sonetimes. Thanks for the review!
Date: 03/27/15 01:27 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 1)
Love it!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 03/26/15 06:38 pm Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 1)
This chapter was amazing :) I loved the alone time between Tom and Bill (and I loved the way you write too of course ) :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I personally am happy when they have their alone time :D
Date: 03/26/15 10:59 am Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 1)
I love how they are getting closer to each other! It's sooo exciting! :D
But I still wonder what Bill is planning to do with Tom and why he keeps him there alive...
Author's Response: Everybody is asking me that too and let's see...nope, I can't tell you yet :P
Date: 03/26/15 09:27 am Title: Lazy Sunday (Part 1)
Awwww a blushing Bill is just that loveable. Wanna hug him! But unforturnately that he has to live such a stressful life. Just let Tom warm him up a little already!!LOL
Author's Response: Warm him up how they've only known each other for three days lolol