Date: 04/21/15 08:32 am Title: Cigarette, Bond, and No Chad
Omg. I lobed the tense tension between them through out the whole chapter! I loved how Tom seems to tip toe around the whole subject of kissing Bill until the very end. They kissed!! Now Tom just needs to fuck Bill's brains out.
Author's Response: lol I love your review! Should Tom do the fucking or should Bill ride him? (early morning here and we're thinking positions, WUT)
Date: 04/21/15 08:02 am Title: Cigarette, Bond, and No Chad
That was... I don't know what to write. I just read the last paragraphs with an open mouth and almost breathlessly. And now I'm grinning like an idiot and I can't stop. I hope you are going to write a next chapter very soon!!!
Author's Response: I got the next chapter planned out so yeah XD thanks for the review! When I was writing the scene, I was holding my breath, picturing them actually kissing lololol
Date: 04/21/15 06:11 am Title: Cigarette, Bond, and No Chad
Looovvveee iittt!!!
Date: 04/21/15 04:49 am Title: Cigarette, Bond, and No Chad
Yay! Love the kiss :)
Author's Response: YAY! Cookies for me and you!
Date: 04/20/15 01:54 pm Title: In The Sky
I'm so, so sorry for being this slow with reviewing, and I already now apologize for how lame this review will be, but I'm literally swamped with school and when I'm not studying I'm writing and I just never have time over for anything anymore. I'm still reading and loving your story though, and I'll try to leave you reviews on every chapter, but can't say how long they'll be.
Anyway, to the chapter!
I love that they got some time to talk, and I love how Bill was a bit honest with Tom. Tom is right, Bill needs to be a little human now and then, and when no one else is around, then why not relax a bit and be himself? However, I still don't think they can fully trust each other. I mean, who the hell knows what will happen when that plane lands?
I'm so curious about Bill's original plan about what to do with Tom.. would he have taken him with him, or killed him before going on the plane? Would they have let him go? Nah, they wouldn't, but the rest is still interesting... And if he was going to let Tom on the plane to begin with, what is his plan now? Has it changed or is it still the same as before? Jeez, so many questions, I want to know everything!
I'm still not sure what they're both thinking, obviously, but with Bill letting Tom call him "Bill", and Tom almost kissing him... well, are they really still having plans on killing each other?
On the other hand.. they're both professionals.. hmm..
I literally have no idea what's going on with either of them, and it's so frustrating but in a great way, and I hope to get at least SOME answers soon.
And WHAT is up with that souvenir Tom got?! WHEN WILL WE GET TO KNOW?! I'm curious ok?!
Oh, and I love how they didn't get the chance to kiss yet. Yeah, I'm mean like that, but I feel like waiting a bit more can be healthy for them ;) haha.
Great chapter! I'll be waiting for more!
Author's Response: lol I don't mind the slow reviewing and yes I'm swamped with school and work too *cries in a corner* and yes, the souvenir, I'll just let you in on a secret: it would be explained in chapter 16! I planned it that way XD
Date: 04/20/15 09:50 am Title: In The Sky
Update! Update! Update!!
Author's Response: LOL I just laughed out loud in class, the next update is still in beta! Sorry it took so long!
Date: 04/15/15 01:41 am Title: In The Sky
Great chapter less actions more talking.They start to create a bond.
Author's Response: Awesome, thanks for the review!
Date: 04/14/15 02:43 am Title: In The Sky
I get the feeling that even if Bill knows Tom's out to kill him, he wants to feel some human connection first. Pretty tragic.
I really wonder what the radio person possibly wants to say. Should just be a straightforward flight, though they *did* take off unexpectedly =P
Oh yeah, and I *really* think there should be paragraph spacing between He asked. and Tom really didn't [...], and again between hold Bill's hand. and "I guess that you not [...]
Only because it is changing from Bill's pov to Tom's pov and then back. It's a little confusing if it's all in one block of text.
PS: Mmmm, Cheetos :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I actually just realized that you beta'd my chapter that way lol I was working with my tab when I uploaded the story, I thought that there was something wrong with my tab, oops :P so I fixed it alreadyrnrn...and Cheetos, yes XD
Date: 04/13/15 10:05 am Title: In The Sky
Whaaaat?! Damn you Chad. Indeed. LOL
Author's Response: lol we're all hating on Chad here
Date: 04/13/15 03:14 am Title: In The Sky
Chaaadd nooo!!! I need the next chapter!!!!! I love this fanfic *-*
Author's Response: Chad ruined everything! lol thank you for the review!
Date: 04/13/15 02:39 am Title: In The Sky
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Awesoommeee, thank you!
Date: 04/13/15 02:24 am Title: In The Sky
I want endless chapters! This is torture!!! :D
But still it's amazing!
Author's Response: Thanks! XD
Date: 04/12/15 11:51 pm Title: In The Sky
Fuck Chad!! >:(
Author's Response: lol I hate Chad too don't worry XD
Date: 04/12/15 11:39 am Title: Adrenaline
I love this!!!! Soo much!!!! I hope we don't have to wait a whole week for the next chapter cause that would be my death! :O It's so amazing!!! It reminds me of 'mr. & mrs. Smith' a little ;)
Date: 04/11/15 04:27 am Title: Adrenaline
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is up!
Date: 04/06/15 08:32 pm Title: Adrenaline
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................................. end of the communication
Author's Response: lol wut, thanks for the review! I take it as a good review lolol
Date: 04/06/15 10:57 am Title: Adrenaline
Damn!!! I'm bouncing in my seat for more!!! That was awesome!! Ahhh!! So excited :3
Author's Response: thank you! I was struggling with it so I'm glad that it works out!
Date: 04/06/15 10:52 am Title: Adrenaline
OMG! So fic***g awesome I'm addicted. I don't know what else to tell.Hurry for the next.
Author's Response: the next chapter is in progress so yeah lol thanks for the review!
Date: 04/06/15 09:01 am Title: Adrenaline
I love this!!!! Soo much!!!! I hope we don't have to wait a whole week for the next chapter cause that would be my death! :O It's so amazing!!! It reminds me of 'mr. & mrs. Smith' a little ;)
Author's Response: Oh wow I haven't watched that movie in a long time *rummages for the DVD* thanks for the review!
Date: 04/06/15 08:49 am Title: Adrenaline
I've been trying to write this review for over an hour, and I still don't know what to say. It's just.. this chapter.. it blew my mind! It was so, so damn fucking good, I have no words!
Once again, I have to tell you how much I love the way you describe Bill. Yes, I've said it before, yes it's getting old, but no, I can't stop repeating it. He is such a BRILLIANT character and every damn chapter he makes me go all breathless and... fuck, I don't even know how to explain it. He's just too damn.. I don't know, intimidating, maybe.
The whole "we're going for a ride" thing was something I hadn't in any way expected, and absolutely not that he would let Tom drive, but man, it was so amazingly written..
Shit, I really don't know how to write this without sounding like a complete idiot, so I apologize in advance for the rambling that will now come, even worse than I'm already doing, because I have so many feelings going on in me right now and I'm so excited that my hands are literally shaking so much I can barely type. What the hell are you doing to me?!
The part with Bill casually playing with his knife was absolutely brilliantly written. I could SEE it. And for a moment I felt like I was Tom, sitting there right next to Bill, slightly worried over that knife. And when Bill so quickly pressed that knife to his throat, letting Tom know that he better not dare to even TRY doing something. Fucking hell, I stopped breathing. So intense.
Can I add that I loved the little detail with the guard laughing? Simply loved it.
Then Andreas! FUCKING HELL! What, what, WHAT is going on? Loved the reaction from Bill, he so didn't see that one coming, and obviously Tom didn't either. Shit. I'm still shaking.
Loved the way you described the whole dodging the bullet, and the chase! THE CHASE! I applaud you, it felt like I was watching a fricking movie. No, it felt like I was THERE. It was so real, so amazingly described. This is not healthy for my heart, I tell you! It goes from standing still to beating so fast I'm sure it'll jump out my chest.
Sucks that Tobi and Saki died, I liked them lol, but it made the whole chapter even better so I'm not complaining. And man, Andreas is a dangerous fucker. Like shit, I hadn't expected that. I can like see him in my mind and I can't in any way imagine him as such a dangerous man. He's too neutral, you know? Which makes this story even better because it was so unexpected (even though we knew his job and all) and gaaaah, too damn fucking good! I'm sorry, I can't stop repeating it.
*takes a deep breath to calm down*
I have so many questions, most of them around that necklace. I need to know more about it. NEED to know. You won't leave us hanging for too long, right? Pretty please? I'm dying here. Like shit I don't know what to do with myself.
Okay, I'm sorry, I'm gonna stop now.
Or no, one more thing that I forget to mention every damn time. I LOVE your banner. It's amazing and suits the story perfectly.
Okay, now I'm done. Thank you for such an amazing chapter, I'm gonna try to calm my heart down now and I know I will read it over and over until next one comes up.
Love it!
Author's Response: Wow. This review is long and absolutely LOVE EVERY BIT OF IT. I personally love that Andreas got to show his different side in this chapter, he was so laid back the last time we saw him. My God he was like a kitten compared to Tom but then in this chapter I go and made him into this badass lolrnrnThank you for loving this story so much!